Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/Chapter 13/ (Pg-133) - Page 43

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Serviana

read chapter 4,5 and 6

things are getting interesting ...

love the story...will read more soon


Thank you so much dear! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Finally I read all the 8 parts..

Amazing dear👏👏
U write very brilliantly...
Oh my its.too Dark... poor Astha, felt bad for her..
Waiting for story to unfold...
Update soon


Thank you so much dear for your lovely comments! 🤗
Will update soon! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: miac

Marvellous update dear. .its getting better with each update. .Its really thrilling. ..


Thanks buddy for your lovely comments! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ashlok Dark FF
My Ransacked Heart

...Teaser...


"Call Astha, she should be home by now it's too late", Kalindi asked from Avdhoot, twisting her fingers with worry.

Avdhoot dialled her number from his cell phone. But after some time, no one picked the phone, and the call got disconnected.

Now he was beginning to worry too, a frown line forming on his forhead.

Kalindi had stopped pacing and now was standing beside him. She asked what happened, in sign language and tried to grab his cell from his hand.

He again redialed her number, chewing his lips with worry and raised his hand to stop Kalindi from taking his cell.

After the third ring, someone said hello in a hoarse voice

Avdhoot froze. It was a man's voice...

At that instant someone gave a high pitched scream from behind that voice...

Avdhoot felt sweat broke all over him. It was Astha's scream...





Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my😲 kidnap!!!
What he gonna do...update asap😳
Edited by Priya_ShrAvi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Oh my😲 kidnap!!!

What he gonna do...update asap😳


I warned you! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Supeer dear keep it up


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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks dear! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
but y she's screaming😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser. Interesting.
Thanks for the PM.

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