SS : ''Finally, its over'' [ EPILOGUE UPDATED ] [ COMPLETED ] - Page 21

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arey tumne toh iska pm hi nahin bheja mujhe i min the single 1...
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Posted: 10 years ago
update was amazing
loved it
finally karan's part over
ab woh nahi aayge sandhir ke beech mein
keep writing
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
My words fail to express how wonderful and amazing this particular fiction of yours is... It is a splendid fiction that has left me spell-bound.
I have read many concepts but never like this one. The entire plot and the idea itself is so unique and thought provoking.
Although the catchy and interesting title of this story made me predict something else, the story turned out to be so beautiful that I'm amazed to say the least.

Personification of every character is crisp and precise, never overlapping the other and have their own characteristic flavour which magnifies their beauty.
Ah! That evil Karan... The more I curse him, the less my frustration dissipates. That guy seriously needs a piece of my mind. I'm so glad that SanDhir crushed his gigantic ego... It serves that moron right.
Randhir... You made me fall in love with this engima again. He is such a cutiepie and a boyfriend ro die for. Had I been Sanyukta, I would have kicked that Karan a long time back and hooked up with Randhir..
Sanyukta...the doomed lover. I can understand that she has her trust issues to cope up with before fully accepting Randhir specially after what Karan did to her. I love you for depicting her vulnerable side so well. You've mesmerized me...
The story so far is highly intriguing and is definitely addicting.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next part..

Oh! I forgot to mention.. The like button is not functioning. Although I'm trying but still I'm not able to click on the like button... Do consider my like as well..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshre

hey amazing part!!
dat karan in such a jerk n cheap!!!!
he thinks he is smart bt sandhir r more smarter than him 👏
loved it how they worked together for sanyu!!
continue soon
thnx for pm


with love
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SURE I WILL...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

My words fail to express how wonderful and amazing this particular fiction of yours is... It is a splendid fiction that has left me spell-bound.
I have read many concepts but never like this one. The entire plot and the idea itself is so unique and thought provoking.
Although the catchy and interesting title of this story made me predict something else, the story turned out to be so beautiful that I'm amazed to say the least.

Personification of every character is crisp and precise, never overlapping the other and have their own characteristic flavour which magnifies their beauty.
Ah! That evil Karan... The more I curse him, the less my frustration dissipates. That guy seriously needs a piece of my mind. I'm so glad that SanDhir crushed his gigantic ego... It serves that moron right.
Randhir... You made me fall in love with this engima again. He is such a cutiepie and a boyfriend ro die for. Had I been Sanyukta, I would have kicked that Karan a long time back and hooked up with Randhir..
Sanyukta...the doomed lover. I can understand that she has her trust issues to cope up with before fully accepting Randhir specially after what Karan did to her. I love you for depicting her vulnerable side so well. You've mesmerized me...
The story so far is highly intriguing and is definitely addicting.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next part..

Oh! I forgot to mention.. The like button is not functioning. Although I'm trying but still I'm not able to click on the like button... Do consider my like as well..

Regards
Keya


WOW DEAR THNKU SO MUCHHH😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

" FINALLY, ITS OVER " - PART 8 :


Tumne last 3 years se thik se b'day nhi celebrate kia so I think 3 gifts to bnte h' he smirked again.


He gave me a gift box. It had a file in it..


koi ldki ko gift mein file deta h??' I said irritatingly khol kr to dekho princess' he was so soft to handle


That file contained some notes when I read them, I was surprised. Those were written for me, everything from day 1 when I met him to today when I was ready for his surprise, I never thought that some1 would fall for me like this.


ok ok achha h' I said smilingly ignoring him like a kid


Next gift was a photograph album that contained only my photographs in every dress that I could remember, actually almost 500 pics


wow tumhe ye sb pics kse mili?' I was surprised


mne click ki.. tumhare jitna achha photographer nhi hu but kisi ko btaye bina uski pics click krna ache se aata h.' n he winked.'now close ur eyes' he continued.


ab kya h? main thk gyi ab... m nii' I was behaving like a kid


please last tym bnd kro na' he requested


okay krti hu lo' I closed my eyes

open ur eyes' he said slowly in my ear n what I saw was just awesome.

There was an open box with a beautiful saree. Something which I never tried because karan always wanted me to see in western dresses but this guy was different.


Will you please give me the pleasure of dancing with a beautiful sanyu in saree?' he asked sitting on his knees.. take car n I hv booked a room in the nearby hotel, go there n change n meet me here in 30 mins' he ordered softly..


what will u do in those 30 mins?' I desperately wanted to know his next plans.


dinner ka arrangement b to krna pdega tumne to abhi tk cake b ni cut kia' he made a puppy face


ab to saree m hi cake cut krungi' I winked at him


I drove to the hotel n was getting ready when I looked at one of the wall, there was a note attached, jldi ready ho jao, some1 is w8ing for u, n u r really looking beautiful miss sanyukta aggrawal'


I knew who wrote that n I just smiled n got ready fastly n drove back to the beach


Everything was as it was when I left excpt the table, it had dinner n champagne along with cake but randhir was not there..


where r u randhir?' I shouted out of excitmnt

He came from back n covered my eyes with his hands pehchano kon?' he asked


randhir, I know it's u, ab hath htao' I was happily irritated okay, lo ye dekho' he had an envelop in his hands.. I opened it n I was amazed


wow, Canada k best photography institute ka admission letter. I always wanted admission in this institute but mne to admission k liye forms hi nhi bhre the to ye letter kse' I was surprised


mne tumhari pics bheji thi us institute mein n u knw what u ll stdy ur passion on full scholarship, just 1 year n u ll be one of the best photographer in this world n form mne fill kiye the bs tumse sign krwane k liye thoda sa jhuth bola tha, uh knw wo office m mne tumse sign krwaye the tb mne bich m admission form b daal dia tha...


thank you so much but uh knw na ki ab mujhe 1 year k liye tumse dur jana pdega' I frownd


nhi jana pdega ye dekho Canada k modeling institute m mujhe b admission mil gya. Aise tumse dur nhi ja skta even if u don't hv feelings for me' he smiled.


I sat on my knees you hv made me feel special so its my duty to give you a return gift. I want this friendship to go to another level. Will you be my best friend??' I smirked


He hugged me, m to kahi aur hi le jana chahta hu is relation ko but abhi k liye best friends b kafi h'


Then we cut the cake n had our dinner n danced. That ni8 was just perfect. My new birth, yeah really it was... sanyu jldi kro. We r getting late for flight' randhir was constantly knocking my bedroom door. aa rhi hu baba. Please thoda w8 na' I exclaimed


I came out wearing white shirt n blue denim, with a pony simple, yet beautiful' randhir smirked.


CANADA


I can't believe I m in Canada n I m going to stdy in the best photography institute' I was really happy sanyu, please hmesha aise hi smile krte rha kro. I love ur smile'


Few days left for randhir's b'day damn I hv to plan something for him, usne itna kuch kia h mere liye' I thought I gathered as information about randhir as much as I could.

all set for his b'day. Now its tym for u to get surprised, mr. randhir singh shekhawat' I smirked at myself "


To be continue...


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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow it was awesome update ASAP sandhir are best friend mazza ayega
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👏
Loved the birthday surprise of randhir😊
Waiting for sanyukta's surprise
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome superb fabulous
lovely lovely lovely lovely
sanyu's birthday party... rd is really nice
very very nice.
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
SMALL BUT CUTE KIND OF UPDATE...
LOVED IT

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