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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by Monikaarora - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part dear...vicky was really a nice guy...always thought first about maan...am curious to know what happened with him..continuee soonnn dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
dadi explaining geet how maan became like this
so vicky was his big bro whom maan loves very much...
eagerly waiitng to know what happened in goa
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Posted: 10 years ago
maans past is so sad
he lost his family 1 by 1
n left alone
vicky is his icon
but fate too has its own way
nice part
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wow lovely painful touching update...te way geet was shocked to see te room and smiling maan was lovely..te way dadi narrating abt they painful past how my maan lost his parents and brought by his bro who is like his father and dreaming for my maan was lovely emotional touching..my maan and his bro ki bonding was lovely touching..te way my maan and dadi fixing sam for vicky and going to enjoy party to welcum they fate was lovely emotional..i love te update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part..
maan's past is painful..
he lost his parents who used to love him the most..
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 21 - vicky was his role model in everything...vicky has full faith in maan...he agreed to marry sam b'coss of maan...what happened at goa that changed everything...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice... Liked it ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 22

As per plan Vicky & Maan left for Goa along with some friends on Friday itself...

Vicky isn't much interest in the marriage and has not yet spoken with sameera...

Maan wants Vicky to take some time off from his business...

Vicky didn't even have the privilege to complete his graduation...

He had missed his college life too...

And all the fun of being a youngster...free from any responsibilities...

Without any worries, about family, about money, about future, about children, about anything...

Though Vicky missed the support, the comforts and the backing of the family, since they had left one after another he became the biggest support for Maan...he protected him fron the effects of their parents loss and stood like a shield between Maan and all the problems that surrounded him...

Maan was too young to understand his brother's plight, having lost the elders and having to take charge of the newly launched business and also take care of his little brother and Dadi...

Now Maan knows what his brother had sacrificed for Maan, Vicky never thought about his own life, he always kept Maan in his mind whenever he had to take a decision...

Now also he had agreed for this marriage b'coz Maan wants to see his Big Bro as a family man...

If not for Maan Vicky would have easily managed to stop Dadi from her plans to get him married...

Maan doesn't care about anything, neither the business nor his future...he only wants his brother to be happy...he wants to see dadi happy...he wants his bring back the joys of his family...

Vicky asks Maan why the hurry for this marriage...

He had a lot more plans for his business and they are yet to establish KC as a leader in the construction world...

Vicky: Maan, tum bhi Dadi ke saath ho, ab toh mein akhela hoon

Maan: broi, aap akhele kahan hai? babhi haina?

Vicky: babhi? Toh ab tum theeno ek ho gaye ho?

Maan laughs...

Maan: bhai, pehle shadhi ko hone do, phir dekhthe hai kaun kissko akhele chodtha?

Vicky: ye shadhi bhi toh mein sirf tummare liye hi kar raha hoon

Maan: haan haan bro, I know, aapne toh itne dn mere liye hi jiya hai, ab aaise nahi hoga,ab toh aapki shadhi bhi honewali hai, kabhi toh apne barein mein socho, apni family, apne bache

Vicky: mera family bhi tum ho aur mera ladla bhi tum ho Maan

Maan: ye toh teek nahi hai bro, bechari babhi, kitne umeed lekhe aayi hai

Vicky: Maan, tumne kya socha hai? tum kab se KC join kar rahe ho?

Maan: abhi se

Vicky is surprised...everytime he asks Maan to take up the reaponsibility he escapes saying that he has got a elder brother and why should he bother about anything?

Vicky: tum phir se mazak kar rahe haina?

Maan: nahi bro, I'm serious, kal se aapki chutti, ab KC ka sara kaam mein sambaloonga, aapko sirf babhi ko sambalna hoga

Vicky: what?

Maan: aapko apne Maan pe barosa nahi hai?

Vicky: ye sab mujhe pehle hi patha hotha toh mein iss shadhi ke liye na kehtha

Vicky becomes upset thinking that he should n't have agreed for this marriage...he should have waited till his brother is ready to take charge...this is like putting unwanted pressure on Maan...

Maan: teek hai teek hai bro, aap itna mat socho, aapki shadhi KC ke 25th anniversary ke badh hoga aur phir mujhe koi shadhi nahi karega

Vicky: kyun?

Maan: aap ke liye toh babhi ibtrezaar karegi,aapne mere barein mein socha? ab 45 saal le budde ko kaun shadhi karega?

Vicky understands that Maan is pulling his legs...

Vicky: Maan tum bhi na

Maan runs and Vicky chases...

The two brothers revisit their childhood...who knows? They may not get another chance after Vicky's marriage or ...?

All the friends had a great time drinking and having fun...but Vicky has vowed not to touch alcohol ans so is Maan...Maan has never even smoked a cigarette...he is a complete tee-totler...

Maan was concerned about his fitness very much and he followed a strict diet as he wanted to have six-packs just like his Bro...

Vicky is the one who insisted Maan to hit the GYM regularly and that he should always take good care of himself...he also introduced Maan to kick boxing...

Maan had a good time in Goa with Vicky's friends...

They loved Maan as much as Vicky loved him...

On Saturday they decide to get out of their resort and stroll in the beaches...

It was a lovely day and some of the tourists were relaxing on the shore while some loved to venture into the sea...

Some of Vicky's naughty friends were busy shooting beach side bikini beauties...'

Maan doesn't like that...it's like intruding in someone's privacy...

Maan snatches the camera from them and starts shooting the beautiful sea and tireless tides...

Friend1: Maan. Ye Goa hai, tumme yahan ki beauty dikhayi nahi dethi kya?

Maan: I'm just capturing Goa's scenic beauty

Friend2: you are wrong, see from this angle Maan, you wil get to see real beauties

Maan: bhai, don't disturb me, I'm loving Goa's natural wonders

Friend: Maan, you are missing out natures most beautiful creations

Friend2: hare choda yaar, Maan toh abhi bhi bacha hai

Friend: aaise kaise chod sakthe, Maan e bade bhai hokke humme hi ussko sab kuch samjaana hai

Friend3: warna ye kal shadhi karkke apne biwi ko lekhe HM pe aayaga aur aaise hi nature ko admire karthe reh jayega, biwi toh bhaag jayegi Maan

Maan: mujhe koi shadhi nahi karni

Friend: tumme toh ab bahut kuch seekhna hai, lagtha hai tummare Bro ne tumme ye sab sikaya hi nahi

Friend2: kaise sikhayega? Woh toh kudh iss subject mein fail ho jayega, Maan, tum humse hi seekhlo

Vicky: Maan ko tummare ghande ghyaan ki koi zaroorat nahi, haina Maan?

Maan: haan Bro, aap yahan dekho, say cheese

Friend: hare, tumme toh sirf tummara bhai dikhayi detha haina?

Maan: tum log bhi saath mein kade ho jao

Maan clicks some snaps...

Vicky: Maan, ab camera mujhe do, you join them

Maan: nahi Bro, I'm OK with this

Vicky: Maan, give it to me

Vicky snatches the camera from Maan...

Friend: Maan, kyun darthe ho, aajao, hum tumme kuch nahi karenge

Maan goes and joins them...

Vicky climbs a rock to get a better view...

He is about to click...

Friend: hey Vicky, wait for the tides

Vicky waits for the waves...

Suddenly a huge wave rises above Vicky and swallows him...

Within a second the wave washes away Vicky and he is dragged into the waters...

Maan is watching it in shock and he starts shouting to warn his Bro...but it's of no use...

No one expected such an uproar and all his friends are terrified...

Maan: Bro...Bro.

Maan rushes into the waters but Vicky's friends stop him...

The sea is unusually violent and people start moving to safer places...

It took them a few minutes to realize what had happened to Vicky...

They start shouting for help and people surround them...

Some local boys dive in and try to find Vicky...they also alert the coast guards...

But they would only find a lifeless Vicky after a few hours of search...in some part of the shore washed ashore by the waves themselves...

Maan felt like killing himself at that moment...

Vicky's friends guarded him every second for they knew how painful it is for young Maan...

Maan was inconsolable and he carried the guilt that his brother saved him giving away hs life for Maan for it was Maan would have been at Vciky's place had Vicky not offered to take away the camera from Maan...

Dadi also lost hope but she holds on just for Maan...

Vicky's friends take turns and stay at KM along with Dadi and Maan...

They try to console Dadi and ask her to be strong for Maan needs her badly...

Maan was shattered and he mostly remained confined to his room or spent hours in Vicky's room in his memories...he was in the verge of losing his mind, when Vciky's friends diverted his attention towards KC...KC was also affected by Vicky's sudden departure and the deal also slipped away from them...

People started losing faith in KC and business plunged into the pits...

Maan couldn't see his Bro's hardworks going waste and he takes charge of KC...

With help of Vciky's friends Maan takes the responsibility to fulfil his Bro's dreams in his absence...

There after KC became his life , he works day and night to bring back KC to it's peak as Vicky wished...

Though Maan took his work seriously he never showed any interest in his own life, for him everything is over and he just lives for his Dadi...

But Dadi lives in the hope that Maan would eventually take the Khuarana khandan forward one day...

She knows that it's very difficult but it's not an impossible task...dadi knew that some day some girl would enter Maan's life and light it...she was waiting for an angel with a magic wand who could bring miraculous changes in Maan's life...turn his bitter life sweet and bring out of the darkness...

He deserves some happiness after all the pain ans sorrow he has come across from his childhood...

That angel happened to be Geet..yes, Geet is the key to Maan's happiness, Dadi firmly believes that only Geet can help Maan find light and get him out of his miseries...

After hearing this Geet feels very bad for Maan...she had been thinking that she is unlucky until she knew about Maan...Geet was very lucky, she had her mausi and papaji to take care of her and her only problem was her father...she had all the love and care she needed and never regretted for anything until her father forced her into that marriage, then too she had been looking for solutions and not blaming her fate and sitting in a corner and crying...

Now Geet understands Maan's anger...why he got so wild, for Geet had broken one of Vciky's trophies...Maan has only these things left along with those fond memeories of his big bro...

He cherishes every little thing that is related to Vicky, he still lives in the past with these few things that keep him bonded to his Bro, though Vicky is not here Maan still clings to his belongings and he is not ready to part with them...how can he ever forget his Bro?

He is left with these lifeless materials where he is blindly searching for life and soul of his Bro...

But sticking to them would not help him to move on in his own life, he is some how struck in the past and dadi wants Geet to bring him out of the dreadful past...

He needs that little push to bring him back on track...he has got a whole life in front if him and dadi doesn't want to loose him just like Vicky...

Geet knows her job is not that easy but she is ready to give it a try...she is not going to give up on her hopes like Maan did and she knows that her babaji will always show us the way only if we try to find it...if we close our eyes blaming babaji for all the problems then even he could not help us, haina?

Agar babaji saath ho toh koi bhi kaam mushkil nahi hotha, Geet has immense faith in her babaji and always keeps looking for forward to the brighter side of life, a better future with lots of hope...

For her Maan became the savior and he saved her life in a way...so it's pay back time and Geet has to help him now...Geet is also inexperienced and too young to handle all this but she has Dadi with her...Geet decides to help dadi and they become a team now...

If Maan has to come out of his past first he had to let go of all the things that are associated with the past...he had to stop dwelling in the past and come back to the present...


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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very sad
both brothers loved each other too much
the lose was really shattered him
now geet ready to bring him back frm sorrow

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