SS: Aisi hai yeh mohabbatein...pt 29...pg 140 - Page 59

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Finally, they started together at 7.30 and reached their clients house... Mr. and Mrs. Raghuraman took them inside. Their children took Ruhi along with them. As usual, they took Ishita and Raman with them to kitchen and living room to complete the pending quota which was left behind yesterday due to the sudden urgency that cropped up.

Mythili: Sorry Ishita.

Ishita: For what?

Mythili: Yesterday...we had to leave like that...

Ishita: That's alright...

Mythili: Raman akdoo, right?

Ishita: (With a puzzled expression) Jee? I mean...you know Hindi?

Mythili: No, my daughter's friend is a north Indian... She came home yesterday. I just learnt this word. She was scolding someone to me. But, it suits Raman na?

Ishita: Excuse me?

Mythili: No...Raghu used to say. Raman is short-tempered and... (Seeing Ishita's expressions) I'm sorry... I said it like that. I mean...

Ishita: Its ok. Actually, it just takes a little to put him off. He's like that.

Mythili: It must be difficult for you na?

Ishita: Nothing like that. I like him the way he is. Too much of cheesiness doesn't go down well with me... Life will become boring yaar.

On the other side,

Raman: Good that Ishita is not like me. She is like an anchor in my life... She keeps me steady Mr.Raghuram. Her patience and tolerance is making our relationship work.

Raghuram: You two are making me jealous. Perfect couple.

Raman: We are not perfect.

Raghuram: That's definitely making you two special.

Mythili: Raghu...Dinner is ready.

Raman: Ruhi...

Ruhi: Papa... Main yahan hoon.

Mihika called Ishita.

Ishita: Raman. Main abhi aati hoon. Aap Ruhi ko lekar jao.

Raman: Ok

Ishita: Haan bol

Mihika: Akka. Ek problem ho gayi...

Ishita: Kya hua?

Mihika: Subbu aaj raat yehi ruknewala hai.

Ishita: What? Yeh kya keh rahi ho Mihika? I wanted to make this b'day the best b'day lekin ab lag raha hai yehi worst b'day honewala hai. Subbu ko dekhkar hi Raman ki mood ka band baj jaata hai. What's he doing there?

Mihika: Meri amma ne bulaya use...

Ishita: Lekin kyon?

Mihika: Woh uss din poonal mein iss duffer ko ghar bulaya aur aaj ke din choose kiya hai iss paagal ne.

Ishita: Hamesha humare saath sab galat kyon hota hai Mihika? At the first point, Raman ne yeh trip mujhe convince karne ke liye plan kiya... Yahan Subbu aur uske antics ko jhelna pad raha hai. Lekin, ab kuch nahi ho saktha. We'll see to it...

Mihika: Ok akka. Aap vaapas kab aa rahe ho?

Ishita: We'll start in an hour. Miku, we'll try to keep Raman away from this duffer. Inn teen ladkon se keh dena ki woh Raman ko ghar mein enter hone se pehle pick kare.

Mihika: Teek hai phir bhi...

Ishita: Don't worry. We'll take care of the same.

Raman: What will you take care of?

Ishita: Aap?

Raman: Sab tumhare liye wahan wait kar rahe hain aur tum yahan kisse baat kar rahi ho?

Ishita: Chalo...

Raman noticed that something was troubling Ishita.

Raman: Ishita...Kya hua? Khoye khoye si lag rahi ho...

Ishita: Nahi nahi...main teek hoon.

Raghuram: What happened? Ishita seems disturbed.

Ishita: No...I'm good.

Raman: (Self talk) Iski mood swings itna erratic kyon hai? Paagal madrasan... Isse pehle iss baat ko aur koi guess kar sakhe, mujhe isse ghar lekar jaana padega.

Raman: Mr.Raghuram, we need to leave soon. Mihir just informed about one Con-call...

Ishita: Ajanak?

Raman: Tumhe usse kya problem? (To Raghuram) Sorry... We have to leave soon.

Ishita's face was drained of all its colours. Vehemently, she started texting Mihika. Throughout the return journey, Ishita kept on fumbling with her phone.

Raman: Ishita...Tabyath kharab hai kya? Doctor...

Ishita: No... Waise bhi, aap busy ho...

Raman: Maine jhoot bola. You were not comfortable. Isliye...

Ishita: (Smacking his shoulders) Kya? Aap bhi na... Aap ke wajah se main pareshaan hoon... Kya zaroorat thi...

Raman: Paagal aurat... Tumhare liye sab kar raha hoon phir bhi daant rahi ho? Ghar aa gayi... Utaro...

Ruhi: Ishima...Papa... Phir fighting shuru...

Ishita: No beta... Aise hi baat kar rahe the...

Raman: Haan... Tumhari Ishima hai hi kuch aisi...

Ishita got down from the car with a frown. Before Raman could enter inside, all the other boys came running...

Raman: Kya hua?

Krishna: Jeeju...Let us go...

Raman: Where?

Balaji: Party... Break up party...

Raman: Ab kiski break up hui...

Krish: Siddu...

Raman: Phir se?

Siddu: Arey nahi nahi... Ek mahine ho gayi uss break up ki hote hue...Isliye...

Raman: Isliye party mana rahe ho? Ishita...Mere peeche hamesha kaatne ke liye daudti ho ki main sharab peene ki bahane dhoondhta hoon toh yeh kya?

Ishita: Actua...Actually... Baat aisi hai ki main ab Punjabi ghar ki bahu hoon na... Isliye iss baar maaf kar deti hoon...

Raman: Ishita...Mujhe kuch serious problem nazar aa raha hai... I think we must do one MRI...

Ishita: What??? Teek hai... Mat jao...

Raman: Ok...

Ishita: Nahi... Jao na Raman... Pyaar se bula rahe hain... Akele jaayenge toh thatha inn logon ko aasani se pakad...

Raman: Fine... Chalo...

Ishita signaled Krishna to stop...

Krish: Jeeju... You ppl keep walking. I'll join you in a minute...

After Raman moved out of their earshot...

Ishita: Pagal...Kya bakwaas bahana dhoondha tum logon ne?

Krish: Akka... Yeh toh humara family problem hai. Aap bhi goof up hi kar rahe the na...

Ishita: Main kya karoon? Raman ko meri baat naa sunne ki bimaari hai... Isliye aisa kuch try kiya lekin aaj ajanak cure ho gayi... Meri baat maanne laga... Anyways, control mein raho... Jyada peena mat... Raman ko bhi jyada peene mat dena... Agar tum log peeke ludak gayi toh saara plan chopat ho jayega...

Krish: I know it akka...

Ishita: There is something that you need to know... Thatha will join us at 12 to wish Raman... Yaad rakhna...

Krish: That's one important piece of information... Thank you...

After going inside the house,

Ishita: Roo... Tum patti ke pass so jao...

Ruhi: Papa ko wish karna hai Ishima...

Ishita: Beta... Main utaungi... Ab jaake so jao...

Ruhi: Ok Ishima...

Ishita: Miku... Voh duffer kahan hai?

Mihika: Kaam kar raha hai... upar... Akka, shayad usse yahan se bhejna mushkil hai...

Ishita: Usse Raman ke saamne aane nahi de sakte...

Mihika: What's the plan?

Ishita: Sedative...

Mihika: Are you serious akka?

Ishita: Doosron ki neendh kharab karna gandi baat hai hum toh usse sula rahe hain... Isme kya galat hai? Dhoodh lekar aao...

After bringing the milk,

Mihika: Mann karta hai poora dabba kaali kar doon...

Mihika and Ishita starts laughing...

Ishita: Shh... Koi aa jayega... Sirf ek tablet... Meri behen ko main jail main nahi dekh sakthi...

Mihika starts laughing...

Ishita: Enough... Go and give this to him... Issi bahaane ek tension khatam ho jayega...

Mihika: Ek tension?

Ishita: Haan... Raavan kumar khud ek bahut bada tension hai... Usse bhi jhelna padega na...

Mihika: Woh toh hai... I'll give this to him and come...

At 11.30...

Ishita: Mihika... Ab jaake dekho...

Mihika: Abhi do minute pehle check ki... Ab bhi kaam hi kar raha hai...

Ishita: Kaisi insaan hai yeh Subbu. Sedative lene ke baad bhi so nahi raha... Raman adhe gande mein ghar aa jayega. Aisi bhi kya professional banna ki adhi raat ko kaam raha hai.

Mihika: Isliye kaha ki poori dabba kaali kardo... Tension mat lena... Ek improvement dekha pichli baar... Frequently yawn kar raha tha... Jaldi so jayega...

At 11.40...

Ishita: Mihika...

Mihika: Jaa rahi hoon...

After a minute,

Mihika: Akka... Success... So gaya...

Ishita: Appa...Nanri Murugan... Uske kaan mein...

Mihika: Cotton rakh liya... Nahi utega... Ab inn logon ko phone karke dekho...

Ishita called Siddu.

Siddu: Akka...On the way. Will be there at 11.55...

Ishita: Ok ok...Bye.

Ishita: Mihika, chalo... Sabko utate hain. Koi Subbu ke baare mein poochega toh manage kar lo...

Mihika: Done...

Raman was totally irritated. Ishita's cousins didn't let him taste alcohol... Now, he's going back...without any purpose, he attended one party...

Raman: (Self talk) Isliye kehta hoon poore khandhan paagal hain... Aise aaj ke pehle kisi bhi party mein nahi hua... Ek boondh tak peene nahi diya... Na inn logon ne khud peeya lekin party manani thi...

Raman noticed the date in his phone...

Raman: (Self talk) Kal mera b'day hai... I mean, in 10 minutes...Pichle saal sab ko daanta b'day manane ki koshish karne ke liye. Iss saal, yahan kisi ko idea tak nahi hoga... But, I have changed... Iss baar b'day manane ki mann kar raha hai. Jhansi ki Rani jo hai mere pass. I'm happy...because of my Ishita. I want to celebrate... Lekin, iss saal bhi nahi hoga... Koi baat nahi...agar Ishita mere pass rahegi toh isse bada gift mujhe kabhi nahi mil saktha... Ishita... Yeh kya kar rahi ho? Tumhare aage kuch bhi soch nahi paa raha hoon...

Balaji: Jeeju... Ghar aa gayi...

Raman: Oh... Let us go... (In his mind) 4 minutes to go... (To Siddu) I'll call Ishita... Calling bell bajaoge toh sab ut jayenge...

Siddu: Chaabi hai mere pass...Spare key...

Raman: (In his mind) 1 minute and 30 seconds...

After opening the door, all of them started walking inside...

Krish: (In a whisper) Dhyan se Sid... Gir jaoge...

Raman: (In his mind)10... 9...8...

Suddenly, all the lights were switched on... The whole family excluding Subbu were standing in the hallway with bright smiles in their face...

Everyone: (Together) Happy Birthday Raman...

Raman: Saath second ab bhi baaki hai...

Ishita: (With a puzzled look) What? Aap bhi count down kar rahe the? Lekin, as usual aapka watch slow hai...

Raman: Main countdown kyon karoonga? Just like that keh raha tha... And thank you everyone... Kabhi nahi socha ki aap logon ko mere b'day ke baare mein idea bhi hoga...

Toshi: Yahan thenk you bol puttar... Maine Ishita ko yaad dilaya...

Raman saw his family and his in-laws in the laptop screen lying on the table which he missed earlier...

Raman: Ma...Thanks ma...

Toshi: Jeethe raho puttar...

Madhu: Murugan tumhe khush rakhega...

Raman: Amma...Ab bhi jage hue ho? Aap davaayi le rahe ho na... So jao na aap...

Madhu: Teek hai Raman. Main jaa rahi hoon...

Toshi: Hum bhi jaa rahe hain puttar... Tu enjoyy kar...

Raman: Thanks ma... Gud night...

Sowmya: Main bhi appa ko upar chodkar aaongi...

Siddu: Aap bhi so jao na athai...

Everyone looks at him...

Siddu: Mera matlab...aap log tak gaye honge...toh...

Sowmya: Arey arey... Kitna fikar karte ho mera bacha... Sab samajti hoon main... Ruhi beta... Chalo...

Ruhi: Gud night Ishima... Gud night papa... Happy birthday once again...

Raman: Thank you beta...Good night...

Mihika: Kya baat hai bhaiyon? Sharab ki smell nahi aa rahi hai...

Raman: Sharab peeyenge tabhi toh...

Ishita and Mihika started laughing...

Ishita: Thatha ke side effects...

Siddu: Ishu... Bahut ho gayi... Party pe concentrate karo... Toh dance karo na... Jeeju ke saath.

Ishita: Kya?

Mihika: Pehli baar thodi naach rahe ho...

Ishita: Yahan nahi...

Balaji: Koi nahi aayega... Sab so rahe hain di...

Raman kneeled down before Ishita and asked her for a dance...

Raman: May I?

Ishita was totally lost in Raman's eyes and inadvertently gave her hand into Raman's hand... All that Ishita could see in that hall was Raman and Raman alone... Ishita heard one melody... Aadha ishq, Aadha ishq, aadha ho jayega... Ishita sensed Raman's hands slowly sliding down her waist... Ishita closed her eyes...

Raman: (Whispered in Ishita's ears) Ishita... Open your eyes... Khule aankh mere steps ko match karna tere liye mushkil hai ab aankh bandh karke...

Ishita opened her eyes. It was Raman's turn to get lost...

Ishita: (In a whisper) Kya hua? Pehli baar Raavan kumar apne one liner complete nahi kar paaya...

Raman: (Whispering) Saare kasoor meri Jhansi ki rani ki hai... Matlab, tere weight ko balance kar raha hoon aur issi wajah se...

Ishita: Jab jhooth bolna nahi aata na, tab koshish bhi nahi karni chahiye...

Raman: Copy cat...

Ishita and Raman starts giggling...

Raman: Suno...

Ishita: Kya?

Raman: Thanks for this surprise... Itne saalon baad itna khush hoon... Teri wajah se...

Ishita looked into Raman's eyes and they got lost... One hand slowly tapped Ishita's shoulders...

Ishita: (Still looking into Raman's eyes) Kya?

Siddu: Ek doubt?

Ishita: Kya hai Sid?

Siddu: Aisi kounsi gaana aap log ab bhi sun paa rahe ho ki naachna bandh nahi kiya...

Ishita came back to her senses and realized that no song was being played... Raman too came out of the trance...

Ishita: Gaana bandh kiya?

Mihika: Woh toh do line bajne ke baad khud struck ho gayi... Lekin, aap dono... Kamaal hai... Aap dono ke liye alag BG chal raha tha kya?

Both Ishita and Raman realized that all of them were trying to control their laughter...

Raman: Yahan bandh ho gayi toh kya? Kitne baar sunna hai yeh gaana... Mann mein chal raha tha...

Krish: Oh... Jeeju... Mujhe bhi sikhavo na... Yeh aise kaise hota hai?

Raman: Kal bataun... Neendh aa rahi hai na Ishita...

Krish: Nahi batana hai toh teek hai... Iske liye bhaagne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Party enjoy karo...

Ishita: Nahi... Sach mein...

Balaji: Ok di... Aap jao... Big day tomo...aah...

Siddu and Krish stamped on his feet to make him stop...

Siddu and Krish: Sorry Bhai...

Raman: You were saying something Balaji?

Balaji: Haan...Kal pooja, mandir... sab kuch karna hai na...

Raman: Oh...b'day aise manate hain?

Mihika: Bilkul jeeju...

Raman: (With a frown) Oh...Good night...

Raman started walking upstairs and Ishita realized that Subbu was still there. She rushed behind him to divert Raman but...it was too late.

Raman: Subbu...

Ishita: Sorry... Yeh Subbu aaj ke din yahan aa gaya aur aapka din kharab kar diya na...

Raman: Kisne kaha ki mere din kharab ho gayi? Jab tak tum mere pass ho, tab tak mere din ka kuch nahi ho saktha... Itne shor sharaba hai aur yeh...

Ishita: Maine aur Mihika ne sedative de diya...

Raman started laughing...

Raman: Ishita... Tum sach mein paagal ho... Usse behtar isse bhi party mein bula lete... Come...

Ishita: Really? Ab aapki MRI scan karvaana padega...

Raman: Phir se copy... Chalo...

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Originally posted by: ALEHA2011

Fab update loved the Mihir past conversation wonder what has Ishita has planned for Ramans birthday


Thanks for liking it... Next part updated...
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finally u updated aftr a longg intrvel. i was reallly waiting for update. now plz dnt delay more nd update soon. we r waiting for nxt romantic update. i wish ishu giv some romantic surprise to raman.
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hey kri...long time... kafi din baad update...great update... continue soon...😃
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it was beautiful awww so sweet
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Thanks a lot for those lovely comments... Will comment soon...

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