Ashlok Pic FF -'D for Desire '- Chp 6 Uptd 16/1/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4 : ROMANCING IN THE SHOWER..
Outside the bathroom coochi cooing was done.. But inside story none told .. except us writers..
now we show with picture proof..
I pulled you inside the bathroom..the shower jet was on.. Water was sprinkling from all the sides.. I cornered you near the mirror.. you were shy and you turned your face to the other side , so don't tease you ..
I came closer.. My shaft was stiff.. you were wet.. the water was dripping drop by drop from your hair ..it caressed your moon face.. it kissed your cheeks.. it licked your lips.. I wanted to be the water which ran as the spring in the mountain.. .. the spring.. the pure water from the spring..I wanted to be the elixir which touched your each an every bit of your body..I was zealous of every dam thing which touched your hour glass body..
I cant take the piece of fabric u wear every day .. I cant take the jewellery you adorn urself on ur body every day.. I want you by my side full time.. in the way when you stepped into this world.. when u were just born..
by mistake u were about to fall down..i held you and supported in standing.. the droplets of water on ur crane neck..were like the pearls from the oyster.. I sucked the dew drop and kissed u on ur lips and pushed you on the wall and made HOT HOT LOVE.. in standing posture..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...
all your OS's are very good...

U can start script writing for some shows like EBP..

keep it up👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: unniachu

superb...

all your OS's are very good...

U can start script writing for some shows like EBP..

keep it up👏

Unni.. thanks for ur apprn.. dear.. but script writing.. oh no...
people will run off..
thank u dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Unni.. thanks for ur apprn.. dear.. but script writing.. oh no...

people will run off..
thank u dear.


i won't i am surely gonna get more glued to the screen! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar


i won't i am surely gonna get more glued to the screen! 😆

This story is only 1.15 percent completed..
still after shower.. dressing up ...
eatng food..
saying bye..
so many things are there..
so Im planning to make it picture story FF...
A romantic day..
how is it.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my God Deepa you really know how to convey his erotic thoughts! 😳
Loved the line about how he wanted by her side naked as a newborn baby! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Oh my God Deepa you really know how to convey his erotic thoughts! 😳

Loved the line about how he wanted by her side naked as a newborn baby! 😳

😆😆😆 Thank You babes...
Pl chk ur PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u tahir.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Chapter 1 - Good morning Sunshine

A day which always begins with he looking at her smiling face and she looking at her Akdu pathi.. in a _______ way..
I Wish always that I see your smiling happy face every day .. I wish you be my strength .. I wish you be my love for all the births we take..

Awww!!!! loved the starting of this beautiful journey
P.S-- Aastha is really so tiny ..see her face is half of Shlokes😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Chapter 2 - Early morning .. Cock a doodle doo..

A day begins with our Romance in the bed..
His : I want you come and wake me up daily morning.. so I end up pulling you and cuddling you and ending up in bed.. early morning romance..
Her : I want to refuse for the morning romance.. but somehow end up giving into .. I pretend saying No .. No.. but I cant , as I want to fulfil each and every wish of yours.. As you are my love.. and for your love ..I would do anything ...

Chap2... naught and insatiable Aashlok☺️ kabhi bhi kaheen bhi😆

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