a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

such an awesome update!👏

swayam was sooo cute in this!
I soo love this Swaron!❤️
Thanks for the pm..😃
Love you ani di!🤗
P.S- Sorry di... I know I am late.. but life's very hectic these days..😭😭


thanks yaa
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ires011

i just read this whole F.F n i realized i hadnt read more than 3 chapters before... so read it all today...

its really nice Ani.. i jus loved it...👏
Preety please update soon..now i m more than eager to read it 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

it was such a cuet update

i loved it
swayam n sharon both r angry
bt both r right on der sides
swayam making so much efforts fr her
i like dat part d most when swayam throw d pillow
n sharon knew it was none other den swayam
she knews him so well
although she is angry bt she cant control
d sleep part was d most cuetest scene
i so loved it
hw will he manofy her
hope uska gussa shant ho jaye
update d next part soon
n thanx fr d PM
n sorry fr d late comment
hope u understand
love
Mansi


ohoo meri behen...
thanks a ton dude!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8085548022

an awesome ff well penned plot i read the whole ff in one go it was awesome and very interesting till the last part u scared me at too places firstly on radhika's entry and secondly when sharon saw swayam crying but at both the places u have managed it well nahi to it would have been predictable at that points thanks for an awesome update and an amazing story do update soon


loved ur cmnt..thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

hey ani it was a super cute chapter

i loved it
swayam is guilty and angry
all emotions at a tym
evn sharon is hurt thats understandable
in whole chapter i liked the last part
where swayam will nuzzle into sharon and their super cute convo
do update soon
😃


thanks shini di...love u!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_vrushan

OK now I m getting restless to read the next part :-( Plzzz yaar it has been more than 9 days when you last updated 😭 plzzz update the next part ASAP


coming right away!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

hey update plz..waiting😊


coming up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

heya ani

really sorry 4 d late comment
was exams
coming to 13th chappy
it was short
though i lovd it
the climax made me go awww
their bond is so unique
thnx 4 d pm
update soonish


thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 14

It was morning and swayam was getting ready to go to the office and sharon was getting ready to go to the academy... Swayam was standing in front of the mirror doing his hair while Sharon came out of the washroom drying her hair wearing a jeans and t shirt...

As they were not talking to each other Sharon stood beside swayam waiting for him to move away so that she can use the mirror... swayam looked at her through the corner of his eyes with a sheepish look n then resumed setting his hair...

Sharon got frustrated and then angrily took the drier and went aside to blow dry her hair... Swayam looked at her thorught the mirror...after she was done she went downstairs to the breakfast table...

"good morning sharon di..." Muskaan greeted her...

"good morning musky..." Sharon went and gave her a bear hug...by that time swayam's mom and chachi were also there and swayam had also come down...

"tum log kya abhi nikloge???" choti ma asked...

"haa...kaam hai office mein..." swayam replied talking a bread from the table...

"array baith k khake to jaa..." Choti ma said...

"no choti ma...der ho raha hai... I'll leave..." Swayam turned and bumped into Sharon and then immediately stepped aside...

"to Sharon ko bhi chor de academy mein..." Choti ma said...

"nahi mai musy k sath jaungi...use college chor k I'll leave..." Sharon said while sitting down...

"accha...at least swayam ko khane k liye bol...kisika baat to suntan nahi tere alawa..." Swayam s mom said...

Sharon looked at swayam immediately who was already looking at her...and then looked away eating her food...swayam turned to leave after hugging muskan and muskaan looked at their mothers ... Three of them had already guessed that these two have fought...

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At night , as all of them sat down for dinner... swayam's mom handed an envelope to swayam...swayam frowned and asked...

"ye kya hai???" he began to tear it to open... As he opened he saw a couple's honeymoon ticket to shimla...

"yeh kya hai??? Aap aur papa honeymoon ja rahe ho???" swayam chuckled...

"kheech k ek thappar lagaungi...ye tere liye hai..." choti ma said...

"what mere liye????" swayam asked and Sharon already facepalmed...

"of course...tere aur Sharon k liye..." His mom said...

"KYA MAI AUR YE ????? honeymoon???? Are you out of your mind??????" he literally shouted... And Sharon was looking at muskaan with an helpless expression...

"nahi to kiske saath??? Yehi teri biwi hai na??? yaa latest koi change hua jo humko nahi malum..." his mom snapped at him...

Swayam's face softened as he looked at Sharon and found her looking at her plate...

"parso ka ticket hai...n before you two se kaam hai...mai bol deti hoon...koi bahana nahi..." choti ma warned...

Swayam nodded silently and they ate without any farther discussion...

As they went to their room swayam saw Sharon lying on the bed...he slowly went to her side and caught her quickly closing her eys pretending to sleep seeing him...he smiled seeing her being so childish and then kept a bowl on the side table purposely making sound to grab sharon's attention and then moved to his side and laid down still keeping the lights on...

As Sharon felt swayam lie next to her she opened her eyes and peeked at him to see his back facing him... Then she sat up to see a bowl of chocolate ice cream on the side table... She knew swayam had kept it there for her ad then turned the other side so that she eats it...he knows her too well to know that if she sees swayam watching her she won't even touch that...

She took the bowl and finished it in some seconds and then drank water and then kept the bowl back on table making sound so that swayam understands she had eaten it...

As Sharon laid down facing her back towards swayam , he turned to switch off the light... Sharon smiled as he switched it off...

Two stubborn people not talking to each other but still...

Swayam came close to her and hugged her waist closing his eyes...she also moved back so that her back touched his chest and cuddled into his arms but still not talking...

They might fight for the stupidest reasons ever...

They might not talk to each other like forver...

But they won't be able to live without each other...

Coz they are selfish...

but they best friends at the end of the day...


SRRY FOR BEING SO LATE...ESPECIALLY SACHI...I KNOW U LOVE THIS N I KEPT U WAITING FOR SO LONG...BUY U KNW THE REASONS...SO MAAF KAR DO...

LEAVE UR LIKES N COMMENTS


LOVE ANI

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