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Posted: 18 years ago
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amidst all worries..that DPS will come and throw Kaju out...for this adi blooper..i beg to differ...fellow bhootnis..never say die sammy is supporting kaju...and this way😛

Scene -

Typical saans Bahu...serial....😃

Kaju in the middle, head bent, Panna Chhachi fiery...cold and angry, Ameesha snide, conniving like a lawyer...Veer as usual...silent helpless witness no 1, NB helpless witness no.2😕

Panna chhachi...looks at Kaju...this is enuf...abhi issi waqt...ghar se nikal jao...aur kabhi apni shakal nahin dikhana...😡she thunders...for the last 10 months all her pent up anger and frustration at being relegated to a side character in NT moms shadow surfaces...and she thunders on poor kaju...who is weeping silently....😭

ameesha dressed in a black sari...looks she has walked out of a green n black advert...looking as pleased as a cat with a saucer of cream....drawls..on..😡.

Haan dekho isse...kitni bholi hai na...hum sab ki aankhon mein bassi - ye kaajjal aaaj hum hare mooh ko kala kar gayee...kijiye aur...taareef...karo...uski aarti...kaajjal ye ...kaajjal woh...meri kissi ne nahin sooni....😡

Kaju raises her head...her lip😭s taut, despite their tremor...Ameesha bhabhi...she whispers..😕

Ameesha raises her brows mockingly...Rassi Toot gayee par bal nahin gayaa...Chhachi...aap log isse panah deh rahe the...isse...jisne humesha hum hein takleef pahooncahyee hai..😡.

pehle//...DEv ko mussoorie mein mujrim...karaar kiya...phir...har modh par...hum he jaleel kiya...gaya...court ka case...jo kabhi sabeeth nahin hua(ameesha has amnesia often😆- forgets that veer himself confessed later)....Veer starts to say something but falls silent....😕

phir bhi...aap sab ne usse apnanaya...NT mom...ki maut ka kaaran banee...Dhruv ko neecha dikahya...uski...beizzaati..(what dhruv did was ok)

ye kam tha toh...Bhadrapur mein is aditya ke saath 4 hafthe rahee...kissi ne...kissi ne bhi nahin poocha...dev se...ki kaise tum is ladki se shaadi kar rahe ho...kuch socha na samjha😡...kiss...hudd thak...iski...Aditya ke saath...ke sambandh the...nahin...😡aap ke laadle devar...ji...thay kiya toh sab zaheez hain...phir ye kaajjal aasmaan se taare kyun na laye...Kaajjal kaajjal and kaaajjal...😡

mussoorie ki...small town girl with big dreams...kya hua...haan...dikha dee apni asli aukaad...laa ke rakh diya na..😡.singh parivaar ki izat...sadk par...ameesha snarls at Kaajjal...staringinto her eyes...Kaju is shocked.😕..to hear this acid pour from ameesha...😡.

ENOUGH - Ameesha Bhabhi Enough😡.😡..it echoes...in the room...the cold familiar voice....shutting everyone up...Kaju turns..and starts running to DEv...👏

he was in a lovely steel grey suit with a pink shirt, deep mauve tie...dappy, dashing and pink..😳.😳he hold up his hand stopping her in her stride...she is shocked.😕..no Kaajjal....her eyes...her lips...quiver...her skin is pale...she was able to bear all thse....words from others...but DEv....stopping her from going to him...what did it mean...did he believe his family...she cringes as she sees the newspaper in his clenched hands....his skin is taut against his jaw slightly rasied ...hs eyes...narrowed to flints...his nostrils...flaring...his mouth a grim line...the ole DPS...was back....😡

Kajus heart was crying.😭..she wanted to go to him...she was desperate to feel his reassuring arms around her...his soft husky voice...murmuring it will be alrite in her ears...he came towards them slowly...purposefully....😳

Panna Chhachi gets into her act...as fierce saans😡....DEv...Kyaa Apni Bhabhi se is tarah se baat kiya jaatha hain...DEv...looks at her hard..than laughs...the ole, sarcastic DPS laugh...😡.

Bhabhi....he looks at Ameesha who looks really worried a bit...her throat working...nervously....god...bhabhi...DEv turns around and laugh😳s....the sound like a bitter...piece of acid...to their veins....Panna Chhaci shouts DEv..😡

his smile fades....Kyon Panna Chhachi...kyaa Aap bhi bhool gaye...in he...he points his finger at Ameesha....😡

Ameesha Bhabhi...she plotted my death with Karan...she...plotte dthe whole Mahadasha Thing...she tried to always create problems for Kaajjal at Radiocity....and today....she is sitting here passing judgements on Kaajjal..😡.

Ameesha Flushes😕...and looks away...at Veer...who looks on stunned...Panna Chhachi..cuts in DEv...Woh sab beeth chukha hai...hum aaj ki baath kar rahen hai...Poore sheher...mein...Kaajjal aur Aditya ki baath ho rahi hai...woh photographs...hum hari tooh tooh ho rahi hai...kyaa hum haath par haath dare baithe rahe kyaa....nahin....bhabhi hothi toh...😡.

Dev cuts in slowly...😳mom hothi toh...chhachi...Kaajjal...ke saath ye bad salooki nahin hothi...mom hothi toh..kaajjal ko...he turn to kaajjal...😳

she goes still as he comes towards her...slowly...her eyes...quivering with unshed tears...pleading with him to believe her.😭..please DEv...just once elieve me...he lips quiver..😭.he comes to stand in front of her..less than half an inch space between their faces (mussoorie)...his eyes..dark with a deep emotion...flicker ovver her face...her face...pale...anxious...tearful...but she doesnt look away or blink once....😭

slowly he lifts his hands and cups her face..😳.😳.she closes her eyes....still brething hard....still unabale to beleive he was satnding here front ofher eyes...softly tell me Kaajjal😳...dont be scared...tel me the truth....and i will beleive you....😳

her voice trembled as she told him about Adiyas past, soniyas involvement with shivansh, his evil past and his current endeavour...to trap Adi and soniya...and her own attempts to prove Adi innocent..😕.and free Soniya from shivansh...he looks at her long and hard...😕

Did you lie to Panna Chhachi...PC lips tighten...Kaju nods...once...yes...dev i lied about hiding Adi at the madh house...i am sorry DEv...very gently like he was addressing a child...and why did you do that....kaajjal...😕

she looks at him..there was no choice the police were looking for him hi and low with shivansh help...i had to hide him somewhere...i panicked...when Panna cchachi asked...and lied.😕..sorry Dev...her voice breaks...he nodded...promise you will never lie again..😭.no matter how difficult it might be....she nods...her eyes...looking into his beautiful eyes..😳

gently he pushes back the few stary tendrils that had.😳..escaped the plait...his touch featherlight...she closes her eyes..😳.at that...tender gesture....

then turning towards the family..😡.did anyone ask kaajjal...any of this...or has she been tried and prosecuted without proof....Paanna Chhachi..wasnt giving up....Why will a resptable man like shivansh liehe has invested so much money in Veers business...😡

Dev...throws back his head and laughs.👏..another eerie mocking laughter...money...so thats it...we are believing...this man because..not of his integrity because...my dear brother has received a large...cheque fromhim...😕

has he bought our integrity as well....😡

Panna chhachi is shocked and shouts...Dev...ye kyaa keh rahe ho...😡

he smiles cynically😳...wahi joh nazar aa raha hai...before i lfet for London...I has asked Kaajjal to help Adi...to support him mentally, emotioall anyway she can...she was acting on my instructions..😳..

he turns to Ameesha - you questioned Kaajjals integrity Ameesha bhabhi...about the fact she stayed with Adi for 4 weeks....i wil tell you what their relation was....😳

Aditya never..😕.slept in the same room as kaajjal even if she claimed to the whole world she was his wife...he never...touched her even out of turn...it was kaajjal who would reach out to him...but he never once...misused that...trust..😕.

and when he saw what my relation with kaajjal was -😳 that man stepped down his wedding mandap and made me sit there...- you are questioning that mans integrity and realtionship with my wife....his voice was soft..😳..

he turns towards Panna Chhachi...DEv..it was softer as his own voice...became softer...sadder....😭

Dev turned to Kaajjal...😳I am proud of my wife...she isnt the greatest Detective..😃.in the world i admit....queen of bloopers😆...his eyes...softenened..and twinkled slightly as he said,,...that😳

but her heart is and always been in the right place.😳..thats whay i never stopped loving her....and will always do...no matter what the rest of the world says....😳

I believe you...Kaajjal 😳😳😳

she is so overwhelmed.😳..goes into his arms sobbing....her body racked with sobs...as he holds her...his eyes...dark..with pain...consoles her...stroking he back....he kisses the hair at her temples...tenderly...dont stop fighting Kaajjal...remember what i told you😳...must never give up...amidst adversity and challenges..one learns to..fight..and win..😳.😳and my kaajjal is a winner...not a loser...so stand up and fight....Mrs. Kaajjal Dev Pratap Singh...😳

so guys...this is my interpretation of the scene when Dev comes back...i have as trong feeling DPS will be back as ole.😳..( i cant see Apu agreein o anything less😃)and he will carry his princess out of the circus for a longish honeymoon where all bhootinis can go...😳

sammy😛

think positive and good things will happen

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope this wil happende I really love it!

I want the old DPS back!


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mindblowing!!!!! Incredibly described!!!!!!! Simply superb and impeccable!!!!!!!!! Luuuuved it!!!!!!!! Wonderful!!!!! Hats off to you!!!👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sammy....good thought....great content.....but way too logical....😉

result: not happening..........😆

screw this up....throw in a karara tadka of illogical mirchi and hey it would appeal to makers.......and viola.....!!

alas......that's what we will get to see........😉

Edited by Iloveapu - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW Sammy, that was mindblowing!!👏
I really hope that happens yaar!! ..we never know what these writers have in their minds😕..
I wish ki Dev Ameesha ko zara aur sabak sikhaye..teach her a lesson to think b4 raising a finger @ kaju. 😡 !!..that lady has NO respect for others. Dev really needs to show her his attitude. 😆😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh my Sammy, that was incredible 😳 !!! Again, you have amazed me with your wonderful talent 👏 It seemed so real, so amazing, and dont expect anything less from Dev. I'm sure, that Dev will be with Kaajjal, and believe in her when their whole family is against Kaajal 😳 😳 I know, Kaajjal made some mistakes, and she should'nt have lied, but like you said, her intentions were always right. If Dev doesnt support Kaajjal, and believes everyone else, and not Kaajjal, I will be very very dissapointed in Dev I will think that their love isnt strong. But I'm sure that won't happen, that Dev will believe Kaajal and only Kaajjal, because they have been through too much, and they are strong as their love is! Dev will support Kaajjal I'm sure 😃 Hopefully, will happen like how you said it 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wooow it think this was awesommmmm!!!i really think u should be the writer of kaajjal!!
I hope this happends , i can't wait 2 see dev back!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg Sammy that is exllcent work like outstanding job A+ here are some claps 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ZABARDUST!!

DEVKAAJJAL 😳 !!

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