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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update really awesome
Thank you😃 Happy you like it


Lovely update. Finally Babli Zayne wedding.
Thank you and yes Finally😆😉


Awesome😛
Thank you 🤗


Nice update
Thanks 😳

Lovely update dear
Thank you 😳😃


Excellent update.
So you have tied all the loose ends,leaving behind that psycho's fantastically.
Everyone shpuld have a very close friend,be it a male or a female ,and the friendship should
not only continue but also flourish even after the marriage.
USUALLY ,THE GIRLS ,AFTER GETTING MARRIED GOES TO A DIFFERENT PLACE AND
DOESN'T KEEP IN TOUCH WITH HER SCHOOL OR COLLEGE BUDDIES OR HER OFFICE COLLEAGUES .THANKS TO THE NEW TOOLS LIKE. WHAT'S UP AND FACEBOOK,THE WORLD IS REALLY SHRINKNG AND MAKING THE PEOPLE TO COME CLOSER.
I had really liked the part."When Kalpi said to Raghav ,that the poor soul Zayne had got a tomboyish wife and during her pregnancy too,she will be in her jumpsuit"/
And I had really liked the guts and smartness of Avinash for asking the permission of Sammy to be
friendly with Priya and later on marry her too.
Pls give one more chance to Psycho for the sake of Sammy.
And finally,Ragna is on A SECOND HONEYMOON.
EXCELLENT UPDATE.

Thank you Deary😳 and yeah babli is a big time tomboy😆,Yes Arjun is a great guys so he decide to ask her father😉 Hmmm thinking about Paakhi 😛

Originally posted by: abxetz

Waw superb update 😊


Thank you 😃



😳Thanks

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Well I dont know why but I am really not happy with Zayne and babli wedding but that is totally my POV!!! Finally RagNa will get some time alone!!!! Hope everything turns out to be fine!!


Hmmm I hear you Priya,The way I made Avinash I too fell for him😆😳,But I made Zayne and Babli my Main Couple,Also People wanted Zayne with Babli not Avi,I would've put her with Avi😳😉 but you know...


Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago
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Chapter 47
Saturday Morning At Singhaina Mansion,Music,Dance and Anything Wedding Related Happen,Everyone was Dressed,Zayne and His Family Came in,He wore a Red Sherwani.


Kalpi Welcomed him,Raghav watched on,Zayne took a Seat and waited Til his bride came,Avinash and Geet Arrived and Greeted Zayne and His Family,Babli sat upstairs in her room Pacing back and Forth,Priya quickly Ran downstairs and went by Raghav and Kalpi
Priya-Raghav Uncle Babli...
Raghav-Whats wrong?
Priya-She locked herself in her room
Raghav and Kalpi were shocked
Kalpi-I'll go
Raghav stoped Kalpi
Raghav-I'll go,You stay back here kalpi
Kalpi shooked her head,Raghav Left,Raghav Knocked on Babli's Door
Raghav-Babli
Babli-I'm busy.
Raghav-Just let me in.
Babli opened her door and let Raghav in,He watched her as she paced back and forth.
Raghav-Whats wrong??
Babli-I feel Really suffocated.
Raghav watched her
Babli-I'm I doing right??
Raghav-Marrying Zayne,Hell No,But you love him Babli
Babli-I do But I'm feeling so Nervous.
Raghav sat next to babli
Raghav-Look right now telling me your'e nervous and all makes me happy because there's a 50% chance you'll call off the wedding and you won't marry that idiot but Babli,I see that,That idiot makes you happy and You love him this step your'e taking is Marriage,It's a Bond you're going to make for the rest of your life.
Babli smiles
Raghav-So no more tears and All just be happy babli.
Babli hugged Raghav
Babli-I lied to you in the beginging,The First time we Met.

(Flashback)
Raghav was in a daze,Babli smiled at him
Babli - I hate you Raghav singhaina ji

Babli- Aai?
Kalpi- Is that the way you speak to people,To your Father
Raghav watched Kalpi, Babli looked away
Babli- He isnt my father
Kalpi- Babli!!!
Babli - Aai you slaped me for that man! I'll never accept him he isnt my father!
Babli started to laugh with tears in her eyes
(Flashback Ends)

Raghav Watched her confused
Raghav-What did you lie about?
Babli-I never hated you Papa,Infact i pretended to,I hated that I didn't have a father to Love me,But i Never hated you.
Raghav was shocked and In Tears
Babli-I love you more than anything Papa,Even More than Zayne and Aai.
Raghav smiled and Kissed Babli on her forehead,Babli got up
Babli-Enough of this Emotional Stuff Papa,Shall I get Married.
Raghav smiled
Raghav-Your mother and I will be waiting.
Raghav left,Babli got Dressed.

20 Mintues Later,Gauri and Kalpi help Babli downstairs,Everyone watched babli and smiled,Babli wore a Red Sari


Everyone watched on,Chaahat smiled seeing Babli's feet,Because she wore a black converse
Chaahat-And It begins
Avinash and Zayne Watched Babli lovingly,Zayne and Babli's Wedding began with,Ritual,Rounds around the fire,Everyone smiled and threw flowers,Arjun watched Priya and threw flowers on her,she watched him and smiled,Avinash watched on and Hid his tears as Zayne Tied a Mangalsutra around Babli,Raghav was irriated,Kalpi Sammy,Adi,Chaahat,Gauri,Kamla everyone smiled,Zayne and Babli stood up,Everyone stood and clapped,While Zayne Filled Babli's Maang with Sindoor,Raghav was with Mixed Emotions,Adi smiled Sadly.
Pundit-I now Pronounce you as Mr and Mrs Zayne Rathore.
Everyone Smiled and Clapped,Babli and Zayne took Blesssings from all the elders,Babli hugged Raghav and Kalpi,Likewise zayne hugged His Parents.

Everyone Talked and Ate at the wedding Reception,Babli sat next to Avinash and Ate with him.
Babli-You made it
Avi watched her
Avi-You look beautiful
Babli smiled,Zayne watched on,Raghav stood next to him.
Raghav-Hmm Married man Jealous of his wife's Bestfriend
Zayne watched him
Zayne-Why should I Raghav Uncle,she's After all MY WIFE
Zayne watched Raghav and smirked,Zayne left,Raghav was Irked.

Guest Started to leave,Kalpi and Raghav sat with Aditya and Babli.
Adi-Mom,Dad?whats wrong??
Raghav and Kalpi watched each other.
Raghav-Were leaving for a few months
Babli-Leaving??Where
Adi-Why are you leaving??
Raghav-Your mother and I are going to Switzerland.
Adi and Babli watched each other and snickered,Raghav and Kalpi were confused,Adi smiled and left,Babli got up and whispered to her parents.
Babli-Enjoy your Honeymoon.
Raghav and kalpi watched babli,she kissed them both and left.

Raghav and Kalpi sood in the hall with their suitcases,Everyone hugged and Bid them good bye,Babli Secretly put a Letter in kalpi's bag,Sammy hugged Raghav
Sammy-Have A safe trip
Raghav-You should Talk to her
Sammy watched him
Raghav-Think about it.
Adi,Priya,Chaahat and babli hugged Raghav and Kalpi,Both left,Babli was going to her new room when Zayne grabed her hand.
Zayne-Come with me.
Babli watched him

Priya was cleaning up when,Arjun came by her.
Arjun-Hey
Priya watched him
Priya-I heard what you said Yesterday
Arjun-That I loved you,It's true.
Priya watched him
Priya-You don't know me...
Arjun-Yet..anyways.
Arjun held out his hand to Priya
Arjun-Mujhse Dosti Karoge??
Priya watched him and smiled,she shooked his hand
Arjun-So Friend lets go on our date
Priya-It's 11pm
Arjun-So,It's a treat to Ice cream
Priya-Okay lets go
Priya and Arjun left.

At Kapoors Mansion,Paakhi was cleaning up,when someone Rang the doorbell
Paakhi-Comming.
Paakhi opened the Door when she saw Sammy infront of her,Paakhi was in Tears,Sammy watched her.

At The Airport,Raghav and Kalpi held hands and Left for Switzerland.


Outside
Zayne Held Babli's hand and carried her outside blocking her eyes.
Babli-Zayne,what are you doing
Zayne-It's a surprise.
Babli-What surprise??
Zayne-Babli just be quiet.
He put babli to sit, Zayne moved his hands,Babli opened her eyes and saw the lawn Decorated with lights
Babli watched Zayne and smiled
Babli-You Remembered

(Flashback)
Babli smiled
Zayne-Then Marriage,Then Our Suhagraat
Babli Opened her eyes Widely and watched Zayne who was smiling at her.
Babli-Suha...Uh,Umm...
Zayne-Why so Nervous??
Babli-I'm Not,Instead of that On our Wedding night,I'll like to be right here sitting with you under the stars,and this whole lawn decorated with beautiful lights.
Zayne watched her
(Flashback Ends)

Babli Hugged Zayne
Babli-You Remembered
Zayne-How could I
Babli-You had always made the first Move but Tonight I will.
Zayne watched Babli shocked,Babli pushed zayne back and went on top of him and Kissed him.

On the Plane Raghav and Kalpi held hands,Kalpi opened her bag and saw a Letter,She and Raghav Read

Dear Aaai and Papa
I Love you both so dearly,That I am Ashamed that I Tried to seperate you both,That I was a Stupid person,I realised that your Love is True Aai and Will always be,I'm sorry for being a Pest,Love you.


Your Daughter
Aisha (Babli)


Kalpi and Raghav smiled reading the Letter.

Babli's Voiceover-In life a person has,Life goals,Desires and Love,Not to Mention Hate,But Finding Friendship is amazing,
Arjun buys Priya an ice cream,Both Enjoy the Ice cream and Talk,Priya watches Arjun and Wipes His Mouth,Both shared and Eyelock
But Slowly that Friendship Involes to Love,Undying,Limitless,Pure love,Then when you meet the love of your life again after being betrayed and hurt,second chances are amazing in Life,Lovers Reconile and Love all over again
Sammy watches Paakhi,he walkes up to her and hugges her tightly,Paakhi cries.
Paakhi-I'm Sorry Sammy
Sammy smiled
Saying Sorry and Working it out Is a Big step In love,Forgetting all the Pain and Hurt,Finding comfort with A friend Helps with a Broken Heart.
Simran and Avi enjoys and game of chess in the hospital
But That won't be broken Forever,It will be loved more than ever,While those hearts heal,another two are joined by Marriage,By Love,By Desire,By feeling.
Zayne,Unties Babli's top and kisses her Neck,Babli Pushes Zayne on the bed,and kisses him,Both get Intimate and Consummate their Marriage.
Two hearts are joint,and forever will be joint by Love,Old or Young,Eventually Love takes An amazing Road.
Adi and Chaahat sits on the beach watching the stars
But Love is Crazy Right,It's stupid it's messed up,but there one love story that will Rule your Heart and Mind Forever.
Kalpi and Raghav Hold and hand remembers their Past together.
All love stories I read about are amazing,breathtaking and Beautiful but their is one that Is my favorite,One that makes me crazy that i'll always love,It's my Mother's Love,My Mother Kalpana's Love.

Babli's Voiceover-"Love Is Patient,Love Is Kind,It does Not Envy"


...The Story Doesn't end here People,Shall you see my life After 11 years?? Or Not??Just a small Glimpse

-Babli



11 Years Later...


Okie hiya guys ending in two chapters so hope you enjoyed this chapter 😃 tell me your thought any mistakes please forgive me






Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago
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Marvellous update.
What a gorgeous sari and mind blowing sherwani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feeling jealous abt those creations.
Bade fursat se likha hey iss update kho,I guess!!!!!!
And I had really like the last part of the update,wherein you had
described the various emotions of all the couples in a sequence and in a flow.
And the note from Babli."WAIT TO READ MY LIFE AFTER 11 YEARS" was like the
yummy icing on the Christmas Cake.
PLS UPDATE THOSE TWO IMPORTANT CHAPTERS SOON AND
ALSO START WITH YET ANOTHER MIND BLOWING RAGNA FF IN YOUR ISHTYLE.
LOTS AND LOTS OF MUAHS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending so many love stories I loved the Babli's VoiceOver a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update!!! Beautiful and precious moments of Raghav and Babli.😉 Still can't believe ending soon. Hope you write another amazing RAGNA story😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai aria nice ending and great update 👏
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OMG that was so amazing! 😃👏 Happys endings. 😆😃 My favourite moment was father-daughter one. When Babli tells Raghav that she loves him the most, even more than her Aai. So cute. Lovely story and update. waiting for story after 11 years. 👏
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Loved the update though you know I never wanted Zayne and babli together😆
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My crazy unconventional couple wedding outfits are beautiful
And Babli outfit wouldn't be complete without her converse lol
Babli freaking out like any typical bride was awesome. I love the fact that Raghav went to babli instead of Kalpi. The father & daughter talk was much needed...
Oh boi! Raghav will never stop trying to get babli to change her mind to marry Zayne lol
I love Zayne comeback when Raghav was teasing him with Babli eating her dinner with Avi
Aww Zayne remember Babli wish and he fulfill it
That was very romantic
Outstanding update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Marvellous update.

What a gorgeous sari and mind blowing sherwani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feeling jealous abt those creations.
Bade fursat se likha hey iss update kho,I guess!!!!!!
And I had really like the last part of the update,wherein you had
described the various emotions of all the couples in a sequence and in a flow.
And the note from Babli."WAIT TO READ MY LIFE AFTER 11 YEARS" was like the
yummy icing on the Christmas Cake.
PLS UPDATE THOSE TWO IMPORTANT CHAPTERS SOON AND
ALSO START WITH YET ANOTHER MIND BLOWING RAGNA FF IN YOUR ISHTYLE.
LOTS AND LOTS OF MUAHS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>


Awww Thanks so Much🤗 I too loved that😆I'll will and It will be amazing!!And yes I'm Starting 2 new FF's 😳


Originally posted by: niru04

wonderful update dr


Thank you😳


Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Beautiful ending so many love stories I loved the Babli's VoiceOver a lot.


Thanks Deary,And Yes I too loved the Voiceover🤗


Originally posted by: eishe10

Wonderful update!!! Beautiful and precious moments of Raghav and Babli.😉 Still can't believe ending soon. Hope you write another amazing RAGNA story😃



Thank you 😃😳 I thought it was about time babli Talked to Raghav having a Father-Daughter bond! I'm sad too That I'm ending it off😭 But I'm Making another FF based only In RagNa😳



Thanks😃

Originally posted by: abxetz

Hai aria nice ending and great update 👏


Thank you so much😳😃


Originally posted by: chahat4u

OMG that was so amazing! 😃👏 Happys endings. 😆😃 My favourite moment was father-daughter one. When Babli tells Raghav that she loves him the most, even more than her Aai. So cute. Lovely story and update. waiting for story after 11 years. 👏


Thanks alot Charu,Its means alot from one of the Best Writers I know😳🤗I think it was about time Raghav-Babli should've had the Father-Daughter Bond!And yes Babli only Loved Raghav the most😆😆


Thank you😳


Originally posted by: priya_remix

Loved the update though you know I never wanted Zayne and babli together😆


Thank you 😳I know😆 I too Love Avi alot😆😆 But Zayne and Babli...



Thanks Deary😳

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Too good update soon...


Thank you😃

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

My crazy unconventional couple wedding outfits are beautiful
And Babli outfit wouldn't be complete without her converse lol
Babli freaking out like any typical bride was awesome. I love the fact that Raghav went to babli instead of Kalpi. The father & daughter talk was much needed...
Oh boi! Raghav will never stop trying to get babli to change her mind to marry Zayne lol
I love Zayne comeback when Raghav was teasing him with Babli eating her dinner with Avi
Aww Zayne remember Babli wish and he fulfill it
That was very romantic
Outstanding update


Thanks Natasha 🤗Yeah she's A total Tomboy!! Yep don't girl freak out Before their wedding,Father-Daughter Talk was really Needed,Raghav still hates Zayne he won't ever like him,Yah She's Zayne's Wife Now so Raghav will Taunt him left,Right and Center😆😆Doesn't all good Hubby Remembers😳

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