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Part 9


Maan was completely devastated with the turn of events. He felt like a criminal and wanted to forget all his sin. He wanted to talk to Geet but didn't have courage to face her. Finally he made up his mind and went to his room, where he saw geet cleaning the room. Maan cleared his throat which made geet turn around. "geet i.. main.. mera matlab main tumse baath karna chahtha hoon", geet saw him and came near him. "aao betho geet" geet just sat down she didn't even look up, she did not want to create an issue or argue with him as she now feared as to what he might do now, so she just kept quite. "geet jo bhi main hosh main nahi tha, maine jaan bhuj ke nahi kiya. I am really sorry geet, pata nahi yah sab kaise ho gaya pehli baar main apna hosh kho chuka tha. Geet tumne mujh par jhuta ilzam lagaya ki main ne tumare saath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki thi, shayad isiliye log kehate hain ki juth bolna nahi chahiye, ab woh lagbag sach hogaya."


Geet just had tears in her eyes but did not speak anything. "jo bhi hua hona nahi chahiye tha ab kuch bhi nahi ho sakta." "haan ab kuch bhi nahi ho sakta hain, hain na maan, lekin mera kya haa maan, humare beech toh huband wife jaise koi relation nahi tha, maine aapko rokne ki bohat koshish ki thi lekin aapne... maine uss din wahi kaha jo mujhe dikha tha maan koi bhi ladki iss bare mein juth nahi bolti hain maan.." saying geet starts to cry very badly.. maan was feeling very bad "geet ab jo hua use badal toh nahi sakte lekin main abhi bhi keh raha hoon uss din main kuch bhi nahi kiya tha geet main waha tha hi nahi.. Khair ab tum jo chaho kar sakti ho jaise chaho reh sakti ho. Ab se yeh tumhara ghar hain, tum jaise apne ghar main rehate the bilkul waise raho. Agar tum koi aur decision lena chahathi ho toh mujhe koi problem nahi hain" Geet just got up and went away. Maan was frustrated that she didn't reply for anything and just went to office. Nobody in the house knew about this and so everyone were very normal.


Maan was being liberal to geet now, he behaved with her a little bit well now. Meera and Yash were happy eith the progress, Naintara and Dev started liking geet, infact naina and geet had become friends.. Daadima was neutral but annie was still not comfortable with her but somewhere in her heart she knew that geet was not bad. A month passed like this, maan was still guilty.


Early morning meera and daadima was in the puja hall getting the things ready for aarti and the whole family was standing there... It was Daadima's rule that everyday no matter what thw whole family must be there was morning puja, when the doorbell rang. Meera was about to get when daadima interrupted "arre rukko meera main nakul ko khehata hoon, tum aarti karo woh dekhega, Nakul... zara dekhiye door par kaun hain.." "ji daadima".. Nakul goes and opens the door, at the stood a tall young man with a smirk "hey nakul mera samaan le aao taxi main hain, aur haan paise de dena" and winks at him.. Nakul goes mumbling "Yeh Rahul sir bhi na pata nahi kyun aate hain humesha problem karte hain aur Maan sir ki paise udate hain, aur Yash sir bhi kuch nahi kehate hain.." Everyone finishes aarti and comes to hall except for geet and naina to see who it was so early in the morning. Rahul sees Savitri Devi and goes to her with smile "Hi naani kaise ho aap" and hugs her.. She smile and hugs him back "kaise hain aap rahul" "teekh hoon naani bohat din hogaya tha aapse milkar isliya aaga.." hearing this annie angryliy murmers to dev "bohat din nahi bhai paise khatam ho gaye honge isliye aaye hain humare paise udane ke liye" Dev shhush her "shh choti agar daadi se sun liya na..." "sirf daadi ke liye hi toh hum isse bardash kar rahe hain".. Rahul comes near Dev and pats his back "hey dev congrats man TV main dekha tum baap banne wale ho, congrats man.. Good job".. Though Dev didn't like the way he spoke he just smiled.. Maan is watching him with a stern face as he hates him, Rahul then comes near annie "hey beautifull, tum last time se bhi bohat beautifull lag rahi ho, kya raaz hain main toh mar gaya iss husna nazaara dekh kar" and tries to hug her.. She backs a little, suddenly maan pulls her to him and side hugs her and stays sternly "Rahul annie se dur raho samjhe tum" and takes her with him.. Rahul just smiles slyly.


At breakfast table everyone comes and sits down naina and geet are in the kitchen preparing the breakfast.. Naina brings the food to the dining table.. Rahul says hi to which naina gives an uncomfortable smile.. Meera sees her working and sweetly chides her "arre naina aap kyun kaam kar rahi ho koi aur kar deta na waise iss time main zyaada kaam karna teekh nahi hain beta.." "nahi maa main kahan kaam kar rahi hoon waise saara breakfast geet ne banaya hain main toh sirff help kar rahi thi.." Geet brings the juice, coffee and tea to the table rahul sees her and gets shocked and thinks "what is she doing here.." Rahul asks daadima "naani yeh naya sadasya kaun hain??? pehle nahi dekha nayi servant hain kya..." Maan unknowingly gets angry and angryly replies "Rahul, geet meri biwi hain.. wife samaj gaya.." Rahul is shocked beyond his wits and seeing geet he sweats a little... Geet goes near him and serves juice while giving the glass rahul holds her hand, geet immediately pulls her hand and feels uncomfortable.. maan notices this and calls geet.. "geet tum yaha aao aur betho breakfast karo agar kisi ko kuch chahiye toh nakul hain!!!" and shows the seat next to him .. Everyone at the table is shocked mostly geet because its first time that maan is calling her in front of everyone and first time she will be eating with the family.. She looks at meera for a second, meera smiles and gestures her to sit.. Everyone finishes their breakfast, while leaving the table naina signals geet to come to her room to which geet nods and leaves..


Geet knocks and goes inside naina's room.. She finds her folding clothes so she goes and starts helping her... Naina looks at geet "geet mujhe tumse kuch kehana hain.." "haan kahiye na bhabhi, kya baath hain kuch kaam hain kya???" "uffo geet tum humesha kaam ke baare main hi sochthi rehathi ho kabhi apne baare main bhi soch liya karo.." geet just smiles, annie comes running to naina's room... "bhabhi yeh rahul pata nahi kyun aya hain, subha toh maan bhai the woh chup tha par ab jab woh office gaye hain yeh rahul irritate kar raha hain please mujhe appke kamre main rehene dijiye mujhe jab tak bhai nahi aate.." naina shakes her head "yeh baat toh sach hain annie woh bohat hi irritating hain.. arre haan geet isse pehle main bhul jaaon tum rahul se dur rehana.. woh accha insaan nahi hain maine dekha table par usne kya kiya..." geet looks here and there.. annie questions "kya??? usne aap ko bhi pareshaan kiya..." "haan annie issliye toh maan veerji geet ko apne paas bula li..." geet gets confused as to why everyone hates rahul from morning she had been observing no one had spoken good about him.. "bhabhi main ek baat puchcho agar aap bura nahi maanenge toh.." "haan geet puchcho..." "bhabhi yeh rahul kaun hain aur sab usse like kyun nahi karte???" Naina sighs and starts telling her "geet rahul daadima ki beti ka beta hain.. buaji aur unke pati ki moth ek car accident main hui thi.. tabse daadima ko rahul bohat pasand hain kyunki woh rahul main apni beti ko dhundti hain.. par rahul accha ladka nahi hain geet woh humesha KM tab aata hain jab usse paise ki jarurat hoti hain, aur woh humesha kisi bhi ladki ko detha hain toh flirting shuru kar deta hain.. kisi kho bhi woh pasand nahi hain, hum sirf daadima ke liye usse jhelte hain.." annie agrees and tells geet "haan aur pata nahi woh humesha mere picche pada rehatha hain, aur woh sirf maan bhai se darta hain.. issiliye jab bhi rahul KM aata hain rehane ke liye main maan bhai ke room main shift ho jaati hoon..." annie stammers a little and asks geet "kya.. kya.. mera matlab hain ki.." geet understands her and smiles "annie tum humare kamre main shift ho sakthi ho, mujhe koi problem nahi hain.."annie gets happy and suddenly hugs her but then realizes and comes back.. geet feels happy "bhabhi mujhe kuch kaam hain main bas abhi aati hoon.."


After geet leaves naina pats annie's head "annie geet acchi ladki hain, almost tumari age ki hain bichari enjoy karne ki time main yaha ghar ki kaam karti hain.. usse ek mauka do aur apna lo.. kuch cheeze hui hain par hm usse ab badal toh nahi sakte hain na.. kam se kam agar hum uske saath acche se rahenge toh woh ussi main khush ho jayengi.. soch lo iske baare main.." and goes to keep the clothes in the cupboard.. annie smiles "haan waise buri nahi hain.. bhabhi na sahi friend toh ban jayegi woh meri.." both of them smile and hug each other...


precap - geet getting to know the truth.. 😲

Note : pls ignore the mistakes😉

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Edited by sandymg - 10 years ago
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welcome back! Thanks 4 updating! beautiful emotional update! superbly written! Maan talks to her n apologises! bt the damage was done! She explains! Maaneet seldom talk bt Maan nt rude 2 her anymore! Geet getting along with NT n Dev! Nt n Get nw friends! Rahul arrives! Maan upset! Annie scared of him! he sees Geet der n is stunned! Maan possessive abt Geet! Everyone shocked! Maan makes her sit next to him! Nt explains abt Rahul 2 Geet! Annie shares her fears! she request 2 sleep in Maaneet's room with them! Geet agrees! Nt tells Annie that Geet is nice! update soon!

Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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