THE HIDDEN LOVE{completed}

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Loved it Dhivi.Love in the air for Kuruvi☺️Your words are so simple but beautiful.It picturises what you write infront of the viewer's eyes.Now I am feeling jealous to Uruvi😳After finishing this one write a love story on me and Karna.I would love to read our love through your words

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

thank u vani kannu!!! sure I will write a love story on u and karna..for that I need some details..I will PM u

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

PART IX

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 11 years ago

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

stay tuned😊

Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 11 years ago

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

what a banner loved it😳

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What an update Dhivzz😳 I loved it

I cannot quote as I will have to quote ur complete update 😛 I have some reaction to your every line😆 so better I stop😆

I remember when u Pmed me that u wish to start a story u said that u were a writer in a college days now I could really imagine what u were and how u were...a blessed writer😃 never let the horse of ur imagination take a pause 😊

let it go high it will take u to different levels

Your this update reminded me of my long ago written even before Karnas Vow but yet unposted OS on his wife😳:

...He crowded my mind as air has crowded this earth nobody could guess what I am going through just like one couldn't see air . I was thinking how would he be? like the one I dreamt about? or would he be cold and indifferent! I am hearing some footsteps it was he! I knew though I didn't see, I felt without touching and my toes started digging the ground! He entered his eyes were as calm as moon but I could sense the fire his eyeballs had! He smiled but it suddenly disappeared! I deeply looked into his eyes my eyes flooded with questions! He seemed to guess it quite correctly! and began, "We are married now!", you can question me openly why play this guessing game! oh he was teasing me...

This is enough😆 I must stop now😳

Edited by .Sanskruti - 11 years ago

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anshikashaheer

@anshikashaheer

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Wow simply amazing dhivvi😳really liked it sweetie❤️ great one!!!*:D

Edited by anshikashaheer - 11 years ago

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Awww Dhivi whatta writing style!!!You SHOULD WRITE POEMS.Your style is so good.The way you describrd Uruvi's feelings about my MAN and his love⭐️👏So beautiful.Simplest yet the most elegant piece of writingAnd the last part...awww my naughty Arya☺️

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: vaikartana
Awww Dhivi whatta writing style!!!You SHOULD WRITE POEMS.Your style is so good.The way you describrd Uruvi's feelings about my MAN and his love⭐️👏So beautiful.Simplest yet the most elegant piece of writingAnd the last part...awww my naughty Arya☺️

thank u vani!! yes simple writing is my style..using more complicated or standard words will sometimes spoil the mood of the story..that is my perception