Abhi Drabble Diaries - Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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these are some really cute and great updates!!
thanks!!
something different but interesting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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5.

20th March 2004

"Bhaiyaji how much for two vadapavs?"

"Oyi Purab, why are you paying for mine too?"

"Bhai, I have a good news, so just celebrating it with you"

"What is it Purab?"

"Bhai, please keep this to yourself, since I don't want all the guys celebrating about this right now and belittling her loss, but Suresh has come back in Pragya di's life - He had come yesterday to meet the family and apologized for his misunderstanding. Bhai finally Pragya di smiled a little yesterday, since she will now be able to fulfil her father's wish"

I smiled in satisfaction and took a big bite of the vadapav. My plan had worked! I had searched yellow pages and called all the numbers with the name of Suresh Shrivastava, and finally found him. I explained him the situation and the circumstances that led me to playing such a prank and profusely apologized for seeing how horribly it went wrong. He turned out to be cooler than he seemed. After a prolonged pause, he said he understood and I was forgiven.

***

"Abhi! Can you drop me home today? My drivers done a bunk" said a flirtatious Tanu with fluttery eyes.

"Hey Tanu, do you mind if Aaliya drops you? I sort of have some work"

"Aww...what work Abhi? You sure you cant make it?" winked Tanu mischeviously.

"Sorry Tanu he really cannot accompany you. He has got detention from Tripathi sir for flunking Business Maths. I am to coach him on a chapter today for his resit" piped in chashmish coolly from my right. I was startled, when did she come here!

"Hi Pragya, is it so? Oh, I guess I will ask Aaliya then." Then she turned to me and whispered very audibly making sure chashmish heard her "Abhi, I feel so bad for you! Being stuck with the specky all afternoon, but don't worry after your torture hour is over, you can join me and Aaliya for the movie we have planned to catch tonight"

I faked a smile at her gesture but was very disturbed at her snide remark for chashmish. Irritating - well that she was, but still chashmish was better company than that feather brained Tanu I think.

"So we are even now. I saved you from pea brain" I laughed at Tanu's reference.

"Thanks! But flunked in BM? You had to come up with that?"

"It is true isn't it?"

"How do you know?"

"You think I didn't get even with you after the V-day incident? That last two sums you copied from me? You really thought I didn't notice? I was done with my paper long back, I had used that extra sheet to do the sums wrongly so you could copy them. With twenty marks straight gone, what chance do you stand rockstar?" smirked chashmish!

"You freak! Holy cow you set me up with that?"

"Of course, couldn't just let you walk away with my would be husband, we had to be even!"

"Which brings me to my original question. Why did you need to help me to get even this time?"

"Well Suresh told me about your plight with the yellow pages" and to my surprise she giggled.

"Since when did you learn feminine things like giggling chashmish?" I asked amazed.

"Since you started behaving nice creepo!" She smiled once again and was walking away, then she turned around and thanked me once more with all sincerity.

I guess we are sort of friends now?

***

I was thinking all the while I was driving home today, if we are "sort of" friends now, I needed to tell her this and get it out of my system once and for all. So I text messaged her.

"Hey chashmish. I am sorry for everything"

"Hi rockstar! Well, all is forgiven, except for the time when you dropped me from Juliet's balcony back in junior school, when Romeo had gone to the loo"

"Wasn't I Romeo?"

"No, you were playing the sculptured statue placed in Juliet's balcony for decoration"

"Hah. But seriously chashmish - FYI delete this from your memory when we meet tomorrow and never bring up tonights conversation up in front of me. But I am sorry. Had I not played such a hideous prank on you that day your engagement would have stayed intact, maybe your dad wouldn't have been heart broken and he could have lived longer, given you that many more memories to cherish after him. I am so sorry Pragya"

I waited anxiously as the revert didn't come in the same pace. I anticipated a weeping chashmish and rebuked myself for being the cause. But then a response came.

"Abhi, Pa had leukaemia. He was suffering everyday. Sometimes silently and sometimes yelping in pain. If we consider you the cause of the early demise, maybe we can look at it this way - you shortened his suffering. But for me, I don't hold you responsible for it. The two incidents are mutually exclusive and I love to hate you for many other reasons - not this one. Goodnight"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww they are sort of friends that's nice I like how Pragya helpwd Anhi that's nice glad he doesnt want to spend time with Tanu

Omg Pragya knew he was going to copy her and she made sure the answers were wrong smart move I like this Pragya

Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will read and after that I will comment ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow!!!
I am loving this!!
They are so cute!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww so they sorted this out! Ok :)

Abhi shipping SurGya - and this was cooking in your mind before the current promo! Eeesh!

Am trusting you to give me lots of good AbhiGya feels so I will tolerate the interloper...for now XD

Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow so many updates before I get a chance to comment! Thank you!! I love how REAL this story is - the characters, their voices, etc I can almost see it in my mind. For some reason I am picturing everyone dressed in KKHH costumes with Abhi with the SRK attitude. Loved the smart and rational PRagya, esp when she gets one up on him and when she doesn't hold Abhi responsible for her father's death. Very well done Aafrah! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm sorry I did not read the three last update before ...I really like the progress of the event...first being cats and dogs after that with the tragic event of the death of the father pragya they become (sort of ) friend...I love it ...
poor pragya his father died of Leukaemia very sad 😭...
amazing last part ( I love to hate you for many other reasons - not this one) perfect ...I tell you wonderful and interesting update ...I looked forward to read more ...pls update soon ...and thank you for the pm

Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updates. Intresting, i love it.
So abhi and pragya now becoming friends.
Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for the Pm aafrah!!!
Loved it loved it!! It was perfect! Hope you update soonest!!! Abhi apologising! wish we could see that in the program..and how much he feels for her!! love it! even if it is sympathetic!
Please update soon!!Big tight hugs to you!!

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