MaNan Drabble: His Personal Hell

I just want to see Manik going all crazy seeing Nandini hurt. Call me a sadist if you want😆 Anyways, moving on...

awww, poor nandu, though i would not want nandini to be so badly hurt, can't ignore that the part sadist in me wd like to see Manik going through all sorts of hell given what he had put nandini through in past few days ...but yeah may be not icu/operation category of hurt, a lesser degree of the same would give interesting scenes to watch...

oh sheesh, does that make me a horrid person :( !!

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

awww, poor nandu, though i would not want nandini to be so badly hurt, can't ignore that the part sadist in me wd like to see Manik going through all sorts of hell given what he had put nandini through in past few days ...but yeah may be not icu/operation category of hurt, a lesser degree of the same would give interesting scenes to watch...

oh sheesh, does that make me a horrid person :( !!

lol, i do agree...jhatka is what manik Baba needs coz subtelty is at times lost on him, nandini's anger i wd argue is justified coz it's been just a day since she came to know of manik's betrayal ...i know betrayal is strong word but i think in this case it's apt coz its a betrayal when u try to play god with that special person's emotions and trust no matter how noble/foolish the intentions were.

so yeah a jhatka wd be good to see, will definitely give a big push to the forgiving/regretting phase...and from the jungle scene, manik does the worrying part really good

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

WHY SO SHORT?

You write so well and that is why I would love to read more...Every Time I read something you write it finishes way too soon...Please consider writing more and long...Don't always let us hanging there, give us a proper ending...

Originally posted by: butterfly_16

I just want to see Manik going all crazy seeing Nandini hurt. Call me a sadist if you want😆 Anyways, moving on...

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Nurses flitted in and out of the operation theatre as he paced the floor length corridor. He couldn't think straight.

He could only see those dreadful images.

Blood. Her blood. It was everywhere. It had soaked through her clothes, as though deliberately making its way to form a puddle on the floor. The white floor seemed to be laughing at his horrified state, splashes of red continously adding to his agony. He caught her as she swayed, her lips faintly uttering "Manik" even as her eyes flickered to a close.

"NANDINI!!!"

It was of no use. His cries fell on deaf ears. His heart hammered in his chest - this wasn't supposed to happen. NO! She couldn't...

He shook himself, trying to clear his head of it for the millionth time. Nothing was going to happen to her. He wouldn't allow it.

"She's lost a lot of blood. We can't say anything right now."

His frantic pacing came to an abrupt halt as he was once again haunted by the Doctor's words. His chest was closing in on him, he could no longer fight the wave threatening to drown him.

He sank into the nearest chair, his head in his hands as he struggled to breathe.

In. Out. In. Out. She'll be fine. She has to be.

And yet, every time he looked at the closed doors that kept her apart from him - he couldn't help the fear that threatened to over power him. Not knowing if she would ever...

He attempted to take a deep breath, spluttering and coughing as he failed.

This was it.

His own personal hell.

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Oh god nandu is hurt and in hospital. And manik is so wanted to think positive bt he hs his own fears. Magnificient drabble. U r fab. keep writing.


If u cn then plz cont this.

This is some awesome piece of writing 😲 loved it!! 👏

but its so short! 😭
when I got to the end I was like "nooo! I need to know what happens next! does she die? does she make it? why is she in that situation in the first place? who did this to her?"
im dying of curiosity over here!

can't wait for your next piece of writing!...or even better, extend this out to a SS 😉

Originally posted by: butterfly_16

My head was doing overtime wondering what's going to happen tomorrow so this was just some speculation and I just sorta went dead after that...Sorry😳 Next time, I'll write a long OS - any prompts?