That Should Be Me ~ A ZaYa SS

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Hi all. Okay so this is basically something based on our Pillar Sahb. Guys I know you really hate him but come on, give him a chance at least. So basically, there will be only like 3 or 4 parts to this SS. In the first 2 you won't like the story a bit. But till the last I am pretty sure you'll find it interesting. And of course, like any other of my OS/FF or whatever, buddy me if you'd like to receive PM's.

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Haider Mansion
Engagement Ceremony
Zain's POV

Look the way he is holding her hand. I can't take it. Not anymore. Her Dad doesn't get her. Never. My Dad always thought of giving my sister full privacy, not too much and not too less. And he had allowed her to marry the guy she wants, only after Dad meets the guy and Mom approves him too. But her Dad. He's totally different.

Yeah, I forgot to introduce myself, I'm Zain. Zain Abdullah. And today I have been called to my love's wedding, okay engagement. You know the reason behind this? Well there is a long deep story. This deep that you'll sure have pitty on us till the end of the story. I'd love to narrate, but you know, I'll out the engagement!

"Zain I am so sorry. I really am!" My sister, Barkat, consoled me.

"No, I am fine. Seriously. I mean yeah, it hurts but I am fine" I faked a smile.

"You don't look fine. You.. You look tired. Go Zain. Just go and get your Aaliya back. She doesn't deserve to get married to that jerk. She deserves you Zain. I mean you sure are irritating but you are not that bad. You are my bro and I know you are sure much better than that good for nothing Rehaan." Oh. Finally she introduced you to Rehaan and Aaliya. First things first, Aaliya's the one I'm in love with. And bad things at the last, Rehaan Khan is the one whom Aaliya is getting married to. And I won't let that happen, never. But then what can I do?

"Barkat. I.. I am speechless. I don't know what to do and what not. Aaliya begged me like a hundred times that we should run away. But running away from our parents, it doesn't seem a good idea. You.. You should chill. Aaliya must have got a way out. She told me she had one. But the thing is this jerk is way too smart. He will definitely spoil out all our master plans. I mean.. Aaliya's plans. But what can I do?" I asked her helplessly. I glanced over to that jerk holding her hand and she was about to slip a ring into his finger when suddenly she fell to the ground. "AALIYA!" I shouted as I ran to her and put her head into my lap. I swear the expression I saw on Rehaan's face didn't have the least bit of concern. I mean it was like he wanted this to be over and done with. Its so irritating!

"Are you okay Aaliya?" Barkat came by my side and offered me water. I put drops of water on her face to bring her back to her senses. She opened her eyes a bit and winked them closed them again. That's when I realized she had acted as if had gone unconscious. As if someone had signalled Rehaan to come up and see if Aaliya's fine, as of course she is his 'bride to be'.

"Are you fine now Aaliya?" He faked concern.

"Yeah, I'm good. I just need to go to my room!" She said as I helped her sit. Rehaan made a face as he and me and all the present in the hall knew that he couldn't pick her up and escort her to her room. I had to do the good deed. I gently lifted her in my arms as her arms wrapped around my neck on accord and made way to her room.


Aaliya's Room
Zain's POV

I gently and slowly put her on the bed. I was about to walk away when she held my hand. For the first time in my life I was crying, when nothing had even happened to her. I don't want to show her that her hero even cries too.

"Zain you don't need to hide your emotions. I'm your Aaliya after all." She said. I turned around and sat beside her. Before she could utter a word I pulled her into a bone crushing. I heard her giggle as she hugged me back.

"Don't do that again. What if something had actually happened to you? My breath had caught in my throat. Please don't ever do that again." I said hugging her as tight as I could. She giggled again.

"Ok yeah sure. I would have rather married that jerk rather than falling sick?"

"Yes. At least you would have been safe." I said. She smiled and put her hands on my cheeks. I kissed both her hands as she rested her forehead against mine.

"I love you Aaliya."

"I love you too Zain" I heard back. Suddenly we heard a knock. "Aaliya?"



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So how is it? I was really in mood of writing this stuff. So I thought why not give it a try. If you don't like it say it on the face. I'd rather know the truth other than the fake comments. You'd be just like Rehaan if you'd do that. I am pretty sure you won't like to be just like Mr. Pillar!

So thank you so much for reading.
I don't know when, but will update it soon.

Till then Like & Comment.

Thanks a lot. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi5 Tanu...we both are busy in rehan love lately...๐Ÿ˜†...the difference is here there is Zaya team work and love...in my story there is zaya nafrat...๐Ÿ˜†...
Nice concept ji...
Continue soon...
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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Hi5 Tanu...we both are busy in rehan love lately...๐Ÿ˜†...the difference is here there is Zaya team work and love...in my story there is zaya nafrat...๐Ÿ˜†...

Nice concept ji...
Continue soon...



*hi-fi's* Oh yeah, didn't notice that! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thank you so much ji.
Yeh 'ji' bolna sab mujhse seekh rhe hai kya? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I think I hv made it famous. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Will update asap.
Thanks a lot Habeeba! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really good do continue frankly speaking i am a fan of all writter in this forum and without any doubt u are one of my favourite writter i may sound too sweet but its truth
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Originally posted by: Meghapaim

really good do continue frankly speaking i am a fan of all writter in this forum and without any doubt u are one of my favourite writter i may sound too sweet but its truth



Aww thank you so much! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Really? I'm the best writer.
Will then I should be on Cloud 9.
Seriously, thank you so much.

*on cloud 9* ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks a lot. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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amazingg start!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved it...โค๏ธ
waiting for d next part๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

amazingg start!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved it...โค๏ธ
waiting for d next part๐Ÿ˜Š



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Should I say this was okey?
No I will not say this..
I will say it was awesome
Fabulous
Beautiful
Interesting concept..
Totally new..
Zaya love each other..
That's so sweet ..
Pls zain make her yours soon
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Should I say this was okey?
No I will not say this..
I will say it was awesome
Fabulous
Beautiful
Interesting concept..
Totally new..
Zaya love each other..
That's so sweet ..
Pls zain make her yours soon
Continue soon



Thank you SO SO SO much Priya! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Seriously its my pleasure to write for y' all.
Thank a lot. Yeah but KMH will always b der!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks a lot.
Oh he will. And really soon! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you so much, again! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan



Thank you SO SO SO much Priya! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Seriously its my pleasure to write for y' all.
Thank a lot. Yeah but KMH will always b der!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks a lot.
Oh he will. And really soon! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you so much, again! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

itna saara thank u ka itna saara wlcum ๐Ÿ˜†
Kmh meine toh bahot use kiya hai ๐Ÿ˜†
Okey continue soon...

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