MG FF Uljhe Rishtey--kahanni ek unkhili kali ki last epl- 98- 7 jan - Page 22

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both update are awesome
maaneet romantic moments nice
geet geeting new feeling maan touch
dev teasing maaneet and adi
geet missing in beach
waiting for next update
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part-46
awesome part
so as to divert her mind form dev-meera's past maan decide for a picnic on beach but ye geet kaha gayab ho gyi?
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omg omg it soo amwesome wow
great i thinking will i cursing my self to be late or happy that i got so much being late
sorry dear but asey q hota hai jab bhi koi story ka turning point ata hai mein late hojati hoo 😭😭😭
maaneet romance so dreamy feeling shy shy type
pinky feeling bad for her n her family shame on them so her dulha also force to marry her thank god he run away
dev n meera cute couple me like they understanding
dadi hehehehehhehe bachan type how i wish i have dadi like her so cool so understanding
sahsa iski partner kaha hai
???????????
last but unfortunatly i want to said about her she was a bloody B*** n a jinx for maan how can she did this chi shame to call her women
if she try to harm geet n baby then i will deffo bland her 😡
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awesome updates loved all maaneet romantic moments lovely loved so much sorry 4 late comment was not well
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Part 47


maan froze in his place his mind turn numb ...a big leher of water come to maan and brought maan back and he cried in haige voice GEEET a voice of fear , sad , hurt , braking something big like he lost something biggg his life his geet


maan cell start to ring he took with so much fear



jisko dhoond rahe ho mere pass hai



maan mummer sam took geet


maan feel like something deeply stab him in his heart it is so painful he try to cried , called someone but no word or sound coming from his mouth like he lost ability of talk he wriggle he put his hand on own neck like soothing so sound come from his mouth but no use and same time some one shake him and he turn to look that person it is dadi who calling him he sit up with so much fear , he so much swating in cool air also




dadima ask with so much tens kya hua maan kuch bura sapana dekha kya kya hua maan , maan start to look here and there to serch geet and found her with dev near water than he remind geet asking him to play in water and he make excuse and lay on dadi lap and dont know when drifted in sleep



maan mummer wo dadima sam geet ko dadi get shock and get his unspoken word and put her hand on his mouth ...nodded in no maan wo khatam ho gaya hai app ku souch rahe hai uske baare main ? she is black shdow and now she w ent away from our life maan . Maan nahi zindgi with lots of new hope and happiness waiting for u look she pointed to playing geet and dev who r so much lost in play in water


maan is so much scare his eyes start to get teary dadi cup his face and say lagata hai tumhe sing karke samjana hoga maan give her confused look next dadima went to geet and took her with herself both went to changing room




all gather near maan ask what happen
he say about his drram all get sad because all suffer with this so called SAm in their life all come out from their thoughts when they heard sound of song and they turn there face to look source of song and shock with person who singing and dancing dev hi fi to shasha and run to them ...


dadima in jeans top singing and dancing with geet on song maan gap them like fool and both beautiful move so beautifully , he gap to dadi who will say maan ki dadi is dancing in jeans he become snti with his dadi attempt of make him smile







is duniya men jeena ho to, sun lo meri baat
gham chhod ke mana wo rang reli
aur maan lo jo kahe kitti keli




if u want to live in this world
than lesion me just put aside all
your pain and enjoy happiness





jeena us ka jeena hai jo, hansate gaate jee le
zulfon ki ghanaghor ghata men nain ke sager peele
jo karna hai aj hi karna kal ko kisne dekha
aai hain rangin bahaaren le kar din rangile
is duniya main



living is his live who live with happiness
who drink sea from eyes from cloud of hair
what u want to do do today because no one new about tomorrow here come colorful days with colorful blossom so



main alabeli chingaari hun naachun aur laharaaun
daaman daaman phool khilaaun aur khushiyaan barasaaun
duniya vaalon tum kya jaano, jeene ki ye baaten
aao meri mahafil men, main ye do baaten samajhaaun
gham chhod ke mana lo rang reli
aur maan lo jo kahe kitti keli




i am full of life fire dancing and singing

try to blossom flower and spread happiness in all ways
u all don't get , this thought of live
come in my side so i teach u all
this two thoughts just put aside all
your pain and enjoy happiness



jo bhi hoga hum dekhge gam se ku ghabrae
is duniya ke baag main lokho panchi aaye jaye
aish ke bado aish karo tum
chodo ye khamoshi log wahi jndadil hai
kar baite jo chaye


what will be happen we will look why we have to scare of pain
there are so many flower some and go form this world whaihc is garden
u r fear free human just live fear free
leave this aloofness human that is full of life
who act like his heart , his desire


that song tailing all human there are so much pian in life live life like song and serch happiness inyour life at last all make round around dadi and start to dance on her song all enjoying all this in last maan hug dadi and mummer thanks thanks


dev pull maan from dadi hug maan make face with sudden pull but open his mouth in O shape with dev shameless comment




dev - girl friend that was so sexy yaar kash tum muje is budiya (old lady ) se pehale mil jati uma love it and he kiss diadi cheek which brougt redness on dadi face


dadi - no dev it will not happen




dev make action like his heart get brake ask why so sexy


dadi pull his ear and say because i always in love with my maan dadu so no chance for next every birth dear u have to go this your so called Old lady who all ready to kill u dev




and dev look to meera who glare him like she will kill him with glare


dev pull of his ear from dadi hand and say in soft voice dadi app na thik se yaad karo i am 100 % sure ye meera na Maan ki sagi sis hai look she same to same glare like MSK don't u think look to her


dadi giggle on dev comment meera notted he r eyes like kya chal raha ha i



same time maan slap on dev head friendly and say so dev kon sexi hai



dev say confidently kya meri dadi , main teri geet ko sexy nahi bola wo to teri eyes bol rahi thi jab tu uske her ek dancing move ko dekh raha tha and dev wink to maan and run away from him


maan open his mouth to say something ...same time all burst in laugh and poor geet all sharam se pani pani she mummer ye dev bro bhi na she make face and look to dadi
and dadi say na main kuch nahi kar sakti waise dev to sahi keh rahe the na and she wink to geet poor maaneet turn more red with teasing and msk march to dev ...who is running away from him



next may be one or two part till noon or evening





Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Part 48


Maan open his mouth to say something , and ...same time all burst in laugh and other side poor geet all sharam se pani pani . She mummer ye dev bro bhi na she make face and look to dadi .


But dadi is dadi say na main kuch nahi kar sakti waise dev to sahi keh rahe tha na and she wink to geet . Poor maaneet turn more red with teasing and msk march to dev ...who is running away from him.




They chasing like small kid and all settal near dadi geet ask kya ye dona aise hi start se masti karte hai all nodded in yes .




Sasha aise hi Dev never loose chance to tease maan, pata hai he is One Boy who kiss your maan and sasha wink to all to go with her.


Geet mouth open in big O shape ...she try to imagine kiss of Maan and Dev and she heard sound of "Gay Gay Gay " she cried babaji nahi nahi !



all get that geet start to think on that


Geet - na na di app mere ko ullu bana rahe ho, wo dono to normal hai wo aise hote to anjali kaise and she bite her tongue in embarrassment like what is she saying in front of all she look down.



Sasha nahi sachi bol rahi hu main geet u can ask meera , meera tale to her na sahsha say with serious face



meera also joined sashsa say ha geet pure canteen ke samne kiss kiya tha , main to kitne din insecure thi dev ke liye wo bhi apne bhai say " sis hoti to alag baat na" wo dekho she pointed to maan and dev who r upon each other look like fighting with each other.


Meera softly say u saw adi so much near to maan or dev. Meera play next card now geet start to get restless a nd mummer " Pata nahi kya kya kiya hai past main wo chudial kam thi kya jiska naam dream liya tha that Hotel main esa "Msk ko to ye ab Geet handa dikhagi din main tare" bahot shok hai na kiss ka ...main main ab no unko maan sir ko kabhi kiss nahi karungi thou geet thinking she saying all this in soft tone but all hearing her so called mummer geet look upward to babaji and cried Baabji and march to maan and dev who all lost in their fight and running and playing




geet eyes winded in shock when both pull of their shirt now they all shirless nude to so near to each to her all seance of movie ( gay ) part come in front of geet eyes and she cried in horror no no no ...same time dev leg get sleep and maan hold him like he holding a girl inhis hand both looking to each other and geet again hard sound gay gay




other side sahsa , dadi ,meera , adi ,pinky laughing like mad person they r now waiting of dhamakdar reaction of Geet handa na ana The geet handa poor maan dev and all start to count 5, 4,3 2 1, bhooom and next moment both maan and dev in water looking with shock to firming geet both somhow give each other hand and stand up and geet gaze on both hand like she want to burn their hand with her gaze only she again try to pull maan hand and try to clean that with his ahnd till now all gathere to them all make so innocent face like they dont know anything including dadi ...



maan look to adi like what happen her ,poor dev make face and ask with confused kya hua geet




geet snap dev angrily and say with pointed finger u stay away from my maan sir u have your merra di than why u need maan sir




dev asked with more confused face what


maan now feel smoothing fishy all so innocent face who looking him like devil with two horn , maan pull geet an d ask softly kya hua geet why u talking him like this




meera say with serious face ha bacha bol do , geet snap ...di dont called me that ok


maan - ok ok bolo kya hua




geet - kya kya hua app ku chipak rahe ho dev bro se unke liye meera di hai na aur apke liye main ...she look around and left that sentance half maan narrow his eyes and ask in serious tone come in point geet



geet - why u hide that dev bro kiss u in canteen in front of all , u both r normal dev bro ko to anjali bhi hai , hai babaji chi chi ye kaisa Dostana hai Yuk she make such face and adi fall deown rolling on sand with loud laugh sasha , meera pinky and dadi sit on sand and laugh thier heart out


pooor maan and dev their cheek turn red in embarrassment both look each other with yuk face like waht next geet word maan froze in his place now i never going to touch your lips with my hand , or finger or lips samje app she pointed finger to maan and maan look around all burst in more laugh dev look maan like kya hai ye



maan pointed to dadi and dev get his unsaid word and dev slowly went to back of dadi and closed her eyes with palm and here maan grap geet talking lips in his mainly lips for a passionate kiss poor geet try to hit geet on chest but he feel like feather is touch in his body next moment he took geet in his arm and went away from them


all r so froze in thier place before they react maan went away with geet


here dev open dadi eyes and say with smirk ho gaya dadi



dadi cried why u closed my eyes Muje bhi dekhana tha ...



meera asked with shock kya




dadi get what she say she took u turn and make serious face and say with serious tone ku kuch galat hua kya yaha jo muje nahi dekhan tha , all get in her drama and nodded like samll kid and say nahi kcu nahi dadi all went away dev come near dadi an d mummer Dadi drama acha tha but u miss the kiss and wink to dadi an d run away




in next half hour poor sahsa and dadi alone on beech and this three couple get gaayab some wear



dadi tease sahsa dekho aj tera koi hota to u dont need giv e company to me tum bhi kisi ke sath aham aham ...





next till evening 😉

passion of ...😉
guess😛 karo
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Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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part 49

dadi get what she say she took u turn and make serious face and say with serious tone ku kuch galat hua kya yaha jo muje nahi dekhan tha , all get in her drama and nodded like samll kid and say nahi kcu nahi dadi all went away dev come near dadi an d mummer Dadi drama acha tha but u miss the kiss and wink to dadi an d run away




in next half hour poor sahsa and dadi alone on beech and this three couple get gaayab some wear



dadi tease sahsa dekho aj tera koi hota to u dont need giv e company to me tum bhi kisi ke sath aham aham ...waise i say somone to come here and he will come hear in 5 min , just than dadi phone statrt to ring she took that call and say yes yes come back side of that hotel yes i am here with my grand doughter


sasha give surprised look to dadi like who ...is coming


kya hai muje aur ek jamai SIL chiye na to uski taayari kar rahi hu dadi say with grin


sasha notted her eye brow an d keenley look dadi face and ask in strin voice dadi what u upto now



dadi - to kya karu tere ko itne din diye u cant even a BOYFRIEND for u so i have to do your work so sidha boyfriend se acha jami dhoond loo na so here he is coming in 5 min dai say casualy like she saying about nay sabji



sasha took one min too get what is dadi saying she ask in loud voice KYA DADI WHAT R U SAYING



dadi -oh oh itna chila ku rahi hu i am saying A BOY COMING TO MEET U that sit dadi ask with so much innocent face



sahsa greeted her teet boy is coming to see ha dadi thats why u dont give to wear me short drss mera show piece jo banana tha bahi kya wo aaayega usko mera naam pata hoga phir bhi ask karega app ka naam kya hai , qualifaction kya hia chalke dikho an d gaake dikho jaise in sab ko Lata mangeshker chiyes as biwi


sasha hating all this think of watching ladki and all treat girl like show pece sahsa so much angry dadi want to say something but one voice make sasha turn to that source ...


she loook to that person who is saying and if i am saying that i want to say about me to u from my name to my profession if i say i wan t to share what is my fev solor to my fev singer if u want i can sing also he say sinsearly


sasha look to him he look genuine she always hate this dekhana and all but his word some waer cool her anger and she nodded in yes poor girl without her own notice she accepted his talk




sasha want to say something to dadi so she turn to look dadi but dadi is gaayeb like gadhe ke sar se singha ( horn from donky head ) sasha look here and there but she is gaayab like waha thi hi nahi sasha took deep breath and turn to face that boy



sasha feel so akwared she say wo


boy - don't worry i will not cross my limit behave like gentleman sasha bend her head read hu sprade on her cheek


ok at list we introduce each other myself Ankur Ghai , chota business hai abhi tak shdi ke baare mian socha nahi tha i want a partner who is beautiful with heart koi show pice nahi chiye tha jo mere house ko decorated kare


when savitri ji give me your pic and image i get one thing u r person like mirror , ander aur bahar se clean so a say ok but i a also don't like that all dikahi and all so i ask for casual meeting and she call me here but i want to one thing can i




sasha just nodded


ankur - u r more beutiful than pic sasha look to him both gaze meet to each other both feel somthing new behind any word somehow both look other side and for cover up he say ok can we have small walk if u r comfortable


he look to her with hope who again blush with his confession but she control herself and nodded in yes


both walk for while and he make sahsa conformable with his talk they spend more than 2 hour with each other both sit near sea and talk




after two hour ( in this three hour what they do ye to poll pe thik se comment dene ke bad hi pata chelga )kos lo mahi is devil ) all meet each other in all geet is so much blush and meera found some mark on her lips she want to ask geet is kid what r bro doing but dev read her thought and hold her hand and say don't meera ho jata hai let them enjoy and she is that big to face maan passion ...ok u and maan saying her kid but i am tailing u she is GUndi Gundi Geet Handa


meera slap on dev shoulder and he winch in pain and meera cheek trun red in shyness because it is her work or passion on dev shoulder


dev look her with naughty grin and say Geet ki care hai and mere sath carefree kya meera it is not fair and poor meera shut his mouth with her palm


meera u r so shameless dev



same time they all saw on thing and meera adi , dev a nd maan run to that thing and say in big voice please marna mat please first ask him why he do that please




other side pinky and geet watching all this with confusion both went near them




pinky app aisa ku bol rahe ho sasha ko


meera look her like she ask wrong question


mera - kya hai na we don't want nay police case and all so


meera - sahsa marna mat i will talk to him look i think he belonging to good family yaar


actualy they saw one boy holding sasha hand and in their group sasha is LADY TAISION for boy koi usko flut karne ki koshish karta to pehale uska mhoo tod deti thi



just than ankur say with smirk wo mera mhoo face nahi todegi look and pick her cheek now meera on verge of fainting and sasha roll her eyes her friend reaction


dev bend to maan and want to say somthing but geet pul maan away from dev she is so insecure dev mummer gundi kahi ki


all there confused looking to sahsa and that boy



dadi comme there with smirk so all bander back to home kya acha lakin app log kaha gaayab ho gaye the itne time ke liye ha she ask with smirk


all get embarrassed and shy with dadi question



precap -

dadi new dhamka she announce
aj sasha ki engagement along with your bachelor party
she pose for few second and say after today u will
see each other on marriage day till than all girls
staying in MY ROOM

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Lovely update mahi di...
Maan has a sweet & lovely family...
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Di me onl9 from mobile... So can't like the post...
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Edited by vartekaa - 10 years ago
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thank god wo sab sapna tha. kitna dar gaye thay. really dadi is pillar to maan. wo kitna sambhaal lethi hai maan ko ,jab bhi wo muskhil mein ho tho.
dev kitna tease kartha hai maan ko😆

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