Naina says to Raj,'tum chor ho'

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳i know i know thoda jhatka lagega yeh padhkar... par kya karoon kuch eye catching heading nahi mili....πŸ˜†

ok ill come to the point, its like main lrl ke bare mein dream kar rahi thi ya yeh meri raat ki neend ka sapna hai....

before i start guys u have to be very imaginative....

its starts with naina in a beautiful place which is something like a garden or an open area with full greenary around ...

naina is thinking in her own sweet world(yes yes dreaming about our sweetu n old the good old memories come to her mind as a flash back) there comes her best frnd.... alekh (who always predicts whats going on in her mind)alekh naina ko bulata par naina darling still is in her dream world.... alekh says in naina's hears..."tu rajveer sir ke baare mein sonch rahi thi naa... 😳" naina ko jhatka lagta.... "tujhe kaise pataπŸ€ͺ... mera matlab alekh tu kab aya???" alekh says "ab jyada nautanki mat kar yeh tera nahi ud ka kaam haiπŸ˜†...tu capt. rajveer ko bata kyon nahi deti ki tu unse payar karti hai"... naina is shocked 😳... "par dar lagta hai na....ki kahi woh na to nahi kar denge ja aur jekar unko bol daal..." "thanks alekh..."(hugs him)"ab jaa aur yeh sabh rajveer sir ke liye bachakar rakh...πŸ˜†"

naina runs the typical style of our kajol running in ddlj to catch the train...

raj ka kamra ... woh kisi se seriously phone par baat kar raha hai aur naina dabe paon andar aati hai raj the puts the phone n starts singing the song naine lage re...n just imagine apni naina sab sun rahi hai shes very happy aur tabhi raj palat ta hai n when he sees naina hes very embarrased ..😳"naina tum kab aayi?"

"woh sir kya hai na main aapse kuch imp bat karna chaati thi ... toh kya aap darwaza bandh karenge plzzz... " (door close karta... raj)" ab kaho"

"sir aap hi ho jisne mera yeh haal banaya ... ur only responsible apne meri raton ki neend udha di aur mere din ka chain chn liya"...."naina akhir baat kya hai tum mujhe kyon doshi tehra rahi ho maine kiya kya hai ... mera kusoor kya hai πŸ˜•πŸ˜­"

"aap hi ho jis ke wajah se main is haal mein hoon...(dekho mujhe dark circles aa gaye...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†) aur aap puchte ho ki 'mera kusoor kya hai?' aap ek chor ho chor!!!!"

"kyon aisa kya chura hai maine tumhara kaho..."

"MERA DIL!!!!!!"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"KYA????πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•"

"haan sir main aapse pyaar karne lagi hoon bahut pyar...kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karte..."

raj is shocked...jo uske dil mein itne din se tha aaj naina ne us keh diya...

"(facing the other side)nahi naina main tumse pyaar nahi karta .... "

"meria aankhon mein aanken daal kar kahiye..."

raj still silent..

raj ka haat apne sir par rakh kar

"khaiye meri kasam aur kahiye...."

"haan naina main tumse pyaar karta hoon bahut pyaar...aur aaj ya kal ya parson se nahi balki tabse jab tum is academy mein pehli baar ayi..... aur mera pyaar aur badh gaya tab jab mujhe pata chala ki tum mere bhai jaise yaar ki behen ho..." n he hugs her tightly....

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hows it ....

i know its too long par kya karon just thought of sharing my dream with all u people

prerna

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehehehe.......its too filmy.....hehehehe...."khao meri kasam" and " meri ankhon me ankhen dal ke kaho"

nice dreams,......wow u can go in for scriptwriting with such nice scenes.....hehe πŸ‘ πŸ‘

i can only say 1 thing.....well dreamt ...well dreamt πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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seriously....u can go for scripwriting....
it was like one of the scenes from the romantic movies 😊 πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh... thank u thank u.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you are a very good writer very nice keep it upπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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πŸ˜†
I like the way u write it....
Did u dream last night????, itna lambha sapna 😲
And u remember everything 😲, wowwwwwwww, MASHALLAH very sharp memory u have πŸ‘ 😊 😳

Edited by farislove - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 😳 awwww
wat a dream???????????????? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Ya jaise zee di ne kaha howw did u remmber tis detailly???? πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool dream!! wooooooooooow!!! u write well...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bahut acchha likha... Jo sach me hone ki sambhaavna, matlab serial me, nahi hai (I think) sapne me to ho raha hai.... Haan sacchhi very sharp memory and good writing..... Naina ko itna boldly baatein karte hue dekh acchha lagta hai πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I loved the thing when he was singing"naina lage re"/..haha...lolz..nice dreammm 😳

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