Pakeezah - ZaYa OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello sabhi. Ok kyunki mere wi-fi ka dimag satiya gaya hai toh mei PM's send nhi kr paungi. *back to punjabi mode* Ab eh teh twaadi problem hai ki tenu eh post milda hai ki nahi.
Eh waala OS mei Ridz nu dedicate krna chawangi. Tussi Ridz nu jaante nahi? Ridz -TheInstigator- ? Ab chalo yeh sab chaddo. Tussi mera OS padho ji. Tenu pasand na aaye teh meinu apni shakal na dikhana. Tenu pasand aa jawe teh twaade mu mei ghee shakar. Chalo ji ab teh mei shuru kr rhi hu.

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Haider Mansion
Aaliya's Room
Zain's POV

Sneaking in to her room every night is like a moment of happiness. Seriously. Oh hi! Didn't notice you. I am Zain. The handsome hot hunk you'll know about. No, the other one. Yeah, the other one. Yes!

"Shh Shh" I tried to get her attention. God, what is this girl reading so attentively? Book? Kya isme Zain Abdullah ke baare mei kuch likha hai? Which reminds me ki jab mei like retire ho jaunga (agar mujhe naukri mili toh) tab mei ek autobiography likhu ga. What say?

"Oh bookworm. Mei yaha aadhe ghante se latka hu yaar. Mujhe upar toh kheech lo. Hadd hai." She finally noticed me and came to the window. She pulled me up. Dum hai yaar ladki mei.

"Sorry Zain woh ek book padh rhi thi toh tumhe notice nahi kiya. Tum- Tum kese ho?" She asked.

"Haan bas book hi pdhte rhna. Accha suno mujhe kuch-" I was about to continue further when I noticed her crying. "Hey, hey, kya hua cutie pie? Meri princess ro kyun rhi hai?"

"Zain!" She hugged me tightly. She hid her face into my chest and cried her heart out. "Zain mei tumhe kese batau kya hua hai."

"Aaliya tum rona band kro yaar. Meri pyaari pyaari princess ko mei rote huye nahi dekh sakta." I pulled back. "Batao mujhe. Kya hua hai?"




About half an hour later
Zain's POV

"Zain aaj mujhe ladke waale dekhne aaye the. Mujhe pta tha ki na woh mujhe haan kahega na mei kabhi manungi. Meri Mom Dad aur uske Mom Dad ki baat hone se pehle mujhe woh ek baar mila tha. Meine usse hum dono ke baare mei sab kuch bta diya aur keh diya ki woh iss rishte se mana kr de. Woh maan gya. Jab hum aaj baat kr rhe the toh jab Dad ne kaha ki kya usse yeh rishta manzoor hai, toh usne haan keh diya. Uske baad kisi ne uske Dad ko phone kr ke btaya ki-" She couldn't complete her sentence and clutched my t-shirt into her hands and cried on my shoulder. I held her handing clutching my shirt. We were sitting on the floor.

"Kya btaya?" I asked.

"Ki mei NAJAYAZ hu! Mei najayaz hu Zain. Mei- mere maathe pe daag hai. Ek bahaut bada daag. Mei- Mei kya kru Zain? Mei kaha jau?" She cried even more. NAJAYAZ? Nahi. Tum najayaz nahi ho Aaliya.

"Nahi Aaliya. Tum nahi ho najayaz. Tum meri ho. Aur yeh hi duniya ka sabse bada sacch hai. Please apne aapko aur dukh mat do!"



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_oeXm_5RyE[/YOUTUBE]

Title da lehaz bhi teh krna payega. Teh eh lijiye garma garam song for Ridz. CC teh inhone ne bolya si ki inu eh gaana bada changa lgda hai. Teh eh twaade liye Ridz ji.

Start the song before continuing the following.
Kaafi accha impact aata hai. Maano baat ko.
5 years later
Zain's POV

"Zayed? Zayed?" A chirpy voice came from the door. Zain sat with his 4 year old kid, Zayed Zain Abdullah.

"Dekho Ammi aa gyi." He wrapped his arms around Aaliya as she hugged him with all her might. "Waise subah se toh mei bhi tumse dur tha."

"Shut up!" She said smiling. "Aww mera baccha. Ammi ko miss kiya?"

"Boo ne mujhe doraemon nahi dekhne dia." Zain and Aaliya had told him to say 'Abbu'. But all hi could say is Boo. But now they were used to it.

"Haawww. Hum aapke Boo ko daate?" She asked.

"Haan!" He laughed. Aaliya smiled and started hitting Zain.

"Kyu nahi dekhna dia mere bacche ko doraemon?"

"Mere nahi HUMARE! Aur mei kya krta. Sean ne mujhe bataya ki aaj bahaut thodu football match tha. Toh mei... umm.. woh dekh rha tha."

"Zain! Baccha tum ho ya yeh hai. Kitne bure ho tum!" She settled him back in his bed. Soon Zayed was fast asleep. Zain was frowning. Aaliya was about walk past him when Zain caught hold of her hand and pulled him flush on himself. Aaliya smiled. "Tumhe kisi baat ka bura lgta bhi hai?"

"Nahi." He kissed her hand as she blushed. "Hayy blush kitna krti ho tum?"

"Shut up!"

"I love you AZA" Zain said as he kissed her cheeks.

"I love you too ZUA" Aaliya smiled.

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Aur bhi log hai jinko yeh dedicated hai.

Ann.
Priya.
Anagha.
Sumi.
Ridz.
Suma.
Sanika.

Aap sabka bahaut bahaut thank you ji.
Ab mei apni punjabi practice krti hu.
Twaade naal kal phirse bolungi na.
Aasha krti hu tenu eh bina sir per ka OS pasand aaya.
Continue krne ki himmat nhi kr skdi mei.
Jhoothe padenge mujhe.

Chalo bye shy ji! 😃😃

-Tanu.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
It was really great.
Loved it.
Nd ur punjabi is also gr8.
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Res!
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Updated ji updated! 😃😃
Jaldi se dekho!
Update kr diya.
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aTanya ayi os layi ..
Really osum tanu
Loved it ... totally
Write more on zaya plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bwahaha, agar pasand ni aya tou apni shakal mat dikhana 🤣
that cracked me up :P
Res. Padke ayi
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Originally posted by: zayalove

aTanya ayi os layi ..
Really osum tanu
Loved it ... totally
Write more on zaya plzz


Aa gyi Tanya, OS bhi le aayi! 😆😆

Thank u Alina.
Sacch mei?
Thank u yaar.
Arre zaroor.
I only write on ZaYa.
They're d best couple.

Thank u ji! 😃😃
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Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

Bwahaha, agar pasand ni aya tou apni shakal mat dikhana 🤣
that cracked me up :P
Res. Padke ayi


Hello shello ji Sanika!
Sacch mei.
Kabhi kabhar esi linein nikal jaati hai.
Jaldi pdho aur jaldi se unress kro.

😃😃

*waiting*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was such a cuteee os tani ❤️
Mere Zain ko aadha gnte latkaya rakhao aalo ki bacchi ne 😡 but pyaarmein san jahiz huh? 😆
hw. That bloke whoever it is should be punched. Hard.
Idiot.
and Zayat-Zain scene was so cute :P lol, doremon nai dekhne di :p zain yaar football tou on9 bhi dekh sakta tha,
kyun Bechare ka cartoon band ki..

Sorry, voj masterchef us dekhne mein vyast ho gai :P
p.s- you live nywhere near gurgaon? My friend gt me tickets f that arijit- aatif concert, though I doubt my parents will allow :P cause parson concert hai..
Nd mujhe akele bhejne se rahe :'(
😭 I sooi want to go
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res! Main pasand nhi aya! Ab mein mrra muh lahan chipaon ?*thinking* Tumhe tho phele hi khe diya shakal mat dekhna agar pasand nhi ayi tho *pout*




Hogaya aaj ka nautanki dose ,now coming back to ur OS
phele boldoon, this this the first tym i read ur OS :-D
Haila! This was dedicated to me? *khushi k ansoo* itna pyaar se kisine mere liye galli bhi na de OS tho door k baat 😆
It was supercute .. Haha Zain nd his sugary dialogues "meri pyaari pyaari princess" was mahacute!
haila!twist in the tale! aliya is an illegal child :/
Haye Zain nd zayed is maha maha cute dad-son jodi .. Doremon chut gaya bechara ka ek foot ball match k wajshe...but shana beta,sab shaanti se sheliya! mumna atey ki compliant ka pitaara khul gaya :P

Awesome OS tani,i really loved it .. Thank you so much ! *hug*

I hope mera yeh msg post ho jaey! Warna net wala kal zinda nhi bacheyga *evil smile*


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