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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this short story.
Especially, how Payal made his realize his mistake, his try to branding Khushi back to respond to her treatment, his effort to seek Khushi's forgiveness.

Loved the hospital scene where he ties mangalsutra and puts sindoor this time with promise to love, cherish and protect her.

Feels sorry for Khushi and her outburst both the time. Made Arnav realize the amount o damaged he caused.

You provided the perfect end with Arnav opening up and sharing his past which made him what he is and his reasons for his decisions.

Loved Khushi's punishment for her husband.

Loved the story..👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome os. Loved it. Love the way payal care forkhushi. And way shemake arnav to understand how wrong he was in his decision.finally happy ending loved it

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