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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Loving the bond between Arjun and Aarzoo and also the mishaps ...please continue soon.

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

it was amazing.. I love it... update soon

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zurshahkhan

@zurshahkhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

its really awesome and i enjoyed it

cont. soon

thanks

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Read both parts...just amazing updatesss...reAlly awsome ritu di !!!!!!
loved it A lot...sueeppprrrbbb...
their all meets were fAntAsticcc...as wellas funny...bt really its arakshi anytime fight...miss them..b.
wowweee...i just loved Arzoo nd rjun bond...and the hug part was lovelyy...
like etfs intro...speciAlly AishA tease rjun...lollsss...
con.sssoonnn!!!!!

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: life93
hi ritu😆

you surely made me laugh 😆 i mean wow ! what a series of co incidence 🤣

first she hit him cause she was dreaming while driving really 🤣 i want to learn this too😆 and then 😉...arjun was no less😛

and then at lake 😉 what a filmy scene...again flower scattered 😆 but this time he helped her😉

and waah janab direcst shop pe pahuch gaye😆 and madam hide behind the shelves🤣

and now 🤣🤣 last scene was super hillarious🤣 but really☺️...ab kya hoga ??😉😉😉 i can imagine arjun unintentionally drenching sakhsi🤪

arzoo and sakshi dancing was awesome. update soon😎

Neeruuu🤗

Thanks sooo much!! Hahaha I am great at filminess🤣

Hope u like the next part😳

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Yes u did make me laugh

Arjun ko ab Arzoo ke saath rehna accha lagraha hain aur Arzoo ko bhi

Sakshi aur Arjun ki pehli mulaakat was too funny😆😆😆 They collided with each & flowers showering on them. Wow agar unki jagah koi romantic couple hota toh background main ek romantic gaana bajta. But yaha toh war ki background music sunaai deraha hain

Aisha is teasing Arjun that he is picking flowers for a girl. Wow Aisha tum toh Arjun ko chidaane bhi lagi ab.

Arjun ne Sakshi ko bigaadiya. 😆😆😆 Kya Arjun akeli ko bigaane main kya maza sath main tum bhi bheegte naa😉😉😉

Yay!!😃

Thank you sooo much.. hahahaa woh shayad baad mein ho 😛

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awww Update
Loved it
Arakshi's first met was very funny Loved it he didn't help her
Than they again collided with eachother
Arjun n Aarzoo's moment was Sooo Beautiful
LOL Arjun ne Sakshi ko bhiga diya...
Continue Sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much Niki!🤗

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
amazing as well as funny
Arakshi meetings were great
Loved Arjun and Arzoo's moment
beautiful part
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Hehehe.. glad you liked it Shravani!🤗

Love yaa and thank youu😳

Originally posted by: Asyalover
nica arakshi convo

Thanks so much!😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
Wow read all the pets together which I have did not read it yet
Amazing mind Blowing ...any future plans of yours to publish novel of your own ..."...in this forum you n Vidya di are the born writer for me ...
Thetrailer' s vm was amazing

Ahh thanks sooo much Prakriti! Means a lot🤗

Na na.. novel ☺️ Woh toh hone se raha😆

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Yes...you make me laugh...😆😆😆
Sakshi cycling lost in herself...& than colliding with Arjun...😆😆😆
Arjun's reply were 😆😆😆
Lake seen was awesome...I thought flowers will fall on them while Arjun holding Sakshi...😆😆😆
Aisha teased Arjun...😆😆😆
Arjun's moment is with Arzoo...😃😃😃
Sakshi's past is till not cleared a bit...😕😕😕
Sakshi-Arzoo singing was superb...😃😃😃
Sakshi saw Arjun coming in shop & hide herself...😆😆😆
Arjun drenched Sakshi...iss baar toh Arjun ki galti thi...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Yay!! Glad I did😃

Hahaa flowers falling on them would have been too filmy😆

Thanks soo much😳

Originally posted by: Swara85
Chap 1, 2, 3.
I know I'm late..sorry for that..
I never went to Kashmir, but now I want to go..kitne acche se describe karte ho saare scenarios..
Aww..the stolen moment scene was so cute..!
Arjun and Nani's relation is very sweet..Love Nani..
Aarzoo..soo cutee..Arjun and she will share a special bond..looking forward for it.

Arjun met Aarzoo again..so cute..!
Sam and Aisha are already there..ye accha surprise tha.
Aarzoo and Sakshi moments were awesome..both are each other's weakness and strength too..loved the way you have showed their relation.

This was a superb update..Yes you made me laugh..
The chapter's title was perfect..kya coincidences the..
They collided with each other and the lake scene..lol..😆!! very nice..He went to her shop..and she hide behind the shelves..like seriously...🤣!!! and the last scene..superb.🤣🤣
Their talks was awesome..No one is ready to back off..kya takkar diya hai ek doosre ko..haha..!!😆
Arjun aisha scene was also nice..
Love the song..one of my fav
But who is Antara..??

All the three chapters were beautifully written..I loved them.👍🏼
P.S: Amazing vm..nice.!👍🏼

P.P.S :My name is Swaroopa..but call me Swara.

Thanks soo much Swara! Nice name btw😳

About Antara.. will reveal that later. But I supposed you'll get an idea of who she is soon!

Hope u like the next chapter!

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Hapyyy friday didu!!!!!!!
It's weekend here... Still I had a lot of work..
Just read ur update..
It brought a big happy grin in my face..
I just loved it...
Let's see what happens next..
Con soonz..

Eashaaa😳

Thanks sooo much.. aww I understand!

Hehe glad I could do that..hope u like the next🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Superb chapter
arjun-arzoo interactions were always cute
arjun feels happy in arzoo's company
waiting for next part

Thanks soo much Anita🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: AamnaKhalid
Annndd this is another beautiful story of yours..
Just completed reading train of coincidences, and now am here.. And I guess no need to mention I want to read the next chap ASAP
And now I guess, Rawte will know that arzoo is sakshi's daughter? Nahi?
Awww I loved the sweet bond of Arjun-arzoo and I just wished if t
Sakhsi and arjun would share sweet moments as well..
I just want you to know that, I have become your fan in just 21 hours.. Hahahah
Seriously they way you write stories and mention each and every emotion is beyond anything..
I really love these kinda stories and I basically write like this as well, but I can't even write a bit like yours!! I simply love it!!!!
Infact, give me the classes.. And am serious ;)
Hahaha
Lovevvveee ittt

Awww thanks soo much.. am overwhelmed again! You have noo idea how much comments like these motivate me.. 😳

Yep he will realise that and soon!😉

Aww that really means a lot! Thanks soo much🤗

Hahaha classes.. naaa.. itni achi nahi hoon😆

Originally posted by: kunchu
That was hilarious Ritu
Loved indeed a series of mishaps
The nok jhoks was so funny
Esp the water pipe wala
And that lil moment between arzoo n arjun was sooo cute
And that mom beti dance
Par ye Antara wali funda kya hai?
Another lollipop??
Moi waiting

KK🤗

Hehehehee yesh that is a lollipop.. to be revealed later😛

Thanks for the comment.. love youu❤️

Originally posted by: Areesha566
hey ritu*tight hug*

what was in vm?

using mobile and youtube also banned in Pakistan

Hey Areesha!😳

The vm was just a trailer on the story.. ahh! That's bad.. but it's okay.. no biggie!

*hugs back*

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
beautiful story.
amazing concept.
just loved it.
cont soon and thankx for pm.
sorry being late in commenting.

Hey Pari! Seeing you here after soo long.. thanks soo much for leaving a comment!

Originally posted by: Devangana
Loving the bond between Arjun and Aarzoo and also the mishaps ...please continue soon.

Thanks soo much for leaving a comment!😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
it was amazing.. I love it... update soon

Thanks a lot🤗

Originally posted by: zurshahkhan
its really awesome and i enjoyed it
cont. soon
thanks

Thank you so much!😳

Originally posted by: anu91
lovely update!!!!!!!

Thanks anu!!😳

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Read both parts...just amazing updatesss...reAlly awsome ritu di !!!!!!
loved it A lot...sueeppprrrbbb...
their all meets were fAntAsticcc...as wellas funny...bt really its arakshi anytime fight...miss them..b.
wowweee...i just loved Arzoo nd rjun bond...and the hug part was lovelyy...
like etfs intro...speciAlly AishA tease rjun...lollsss...
con.sssoonnn!!!!!

Aww thanks soo much Gausii.. your comments mean heaps and heaps😳 Love yaaa🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Heyloo! I'm late I'm latee!

But not tooo late😛 This is a strange chapter.. dunno if you'll feel the same! I'll leave you to it to read and judge. My urge to visit Kashmir is just getting stronger day by day.. sigh!

Note: I haven't actually been to Kashmir.. but just writing through virtual travelling (Google of course😆).. so koi galti ho jaye toh maaf kar dena!

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Do let me know what you thought😳

Anddd thanks for reading.. it means a lot🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

res/unres...

Yipppeee!!!!!! Me first...
Once again a super awsome update...Realllyy loving this story...Aww Saki having nightmares...its scary...loved that bridge wala scene ...emotional nd cute...finally the little one came nd stole moment...just fantastic...lovijg this bond...her last line...awweee...cute...con.sssooonnn!!!!!

Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 11 years ago