@ I STILL LOVE U @ [ PART 8 UPDATED ] - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Rd planned purposly
Poor Sanyu
n their Fhgts
Lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
lovely lovely lovely lovely update
so cute
continue soon

Khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Nice update...your work is awesome.
Can you pls update today as a gift for completion of 1 year of sadda haq if its possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

thnku

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Its awsome
Lovely...
Do continue
Nd update soon


ya sure i will
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: don girls

awesome update

update soon


ya sure

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Very interesting update!

Samar knows him mum too well
he knows that Sanyu is missing her family ...
very mature kid!

Pls add me to the pm list
Continue soon


ya sure i will add u and i will post soon

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

wow nice
awesome update
update soon


thnku so much


Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wow yaar its getting interesting by each chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part😃


ya sure i will post soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: newmoon18

The updte was awsme yr

So much hppnd

Rd came to know abut sanyu child
He was hell angry
He insulted her
Sanyu slapped him
He crossed all limit

He wants to take revenge
Dat trasha cheapo kahi ki
Sanyu family really too much
She's so broken bt she has Samar who luvs her so much

Precap intrstng
Excited
Update soon

Keep smiling


thnku so much for ur comment

i will post soon...


ya sure

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Rd planned purposly
Poor Sanyu
n their Fhgts
Lovely


thnku
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

lovely lovely lovely lovely update
so cute
continue soon

Khushi


thnku so much dear i will post soon...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Indhu27

Nice update...your work is awesome.

Can you pls update today as a gift for completion of 1 year of sadda haq if its possible


sry dear actually i didnot saw ur sms or else i will sure upload it

in 1 hr i will upload dont wrry sry to late
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Nice one update soon...


ya sure dear in few min
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Posted: 10 years ago

@ I STILL LOVE U @ - PART -11 :

One day..

Samar was returning frm d scl..the scl bus stopped in d mid way due to sme engine prob..

Samar was standing beside d road with his frnds..

Rd was passing by same path..

when he pointed samar..stopped his car..

R:hii..genious..yahan kya kar rahe ho??

S:hii..ghar jaa raha tha..bus kharab ho gaya..

R:to chalo..me tmhe ghar chhod deta hun..

S:sachi..maza ayega..

R:ek min..me ata hun..Rd goes to d bus conductor..& informed he is taking samar with hm..as he knw d child.. Both rd & samar..went to d car..continued their journey..

R:ye tmhare ghar ka rasta h? Issi road pe to mera v ghar ata h..

Sa:Ye to achha hua..tm mere ghar kavi v aasakte ho..aur me tmhare ghar jaa sakta hun..(they both smiled)& they finaly reached their destination..

Sanyu was already there..waiting for d scl bus..

S:itna late ho gaya h..avi tak bus kyn nhi ayi..Jst then a car stopped...& samar cme out of d car..running towards sanyu..

S:apka scl bus kahan h? Itna late kyn?aur aap kiske sath aaye?

Sa:mumma wo..Before he could cmplete..rd cme out of d car..

Seeing rd sanyu was surprised..the same situation was with rd..he was mre shocked..

Sa:mumma..bus kharab ho gaya tha..to frnd ne mjhe yahan chod diya..maine apko kaha tha na mera frnd h..ye h frnd..(he pointed towards rd)frnd,,yahan aao na..ye h meri mumma..Sanyu's shock turned to anger..

S:samar chalo..!!

Sa:haan..aap pehle frnd se mil to lo.

S:samar..chalo.late ho raha h..Saying ths..she hold his hand..& proceeds to her home..

Samar bid a gd bye..to rd..Bt rd stands there in same position for a while..

That day in afternoon..Rd waited for samar in d park..bt he did n't came..rd knws d reason..(sanyu refused samar to go to d park)..

Nxt day in office...

Rd was eagerly waiting for sanyu..He called d peon..

R:sanyukta..ko aate hi bolna..mere cabin me aaye.

P:ji sir..

After 15mins sanyu entered his cabin..

S:sir..apne bulaya?

R:i wanna talk to u..He sd geting up frm d chair..

S:sir apne jo files diye the me wo thodi dair me apko de dungi..

R:i'm nt talking about work..kal jo v hua..Before he could cmplete..sanyu interrupted..

S:sir ye office h..personal baatien nhi karna chahiye.

R:ye mera office h.tm mjhe mat sikhao ki kya karna chahiye aur kya nhi..jst listn mjhe nhi pata tha ki samar tmhara beta h..hum do genuily frnds h..

S:apko pata nhi tha??strange..!! Apna revenge lene k liye ek chhote bache ko use kar rahe h..

R:dusron ko use karne ka kaam tm karti ho..mai nhi..

Tmhe jo sochna h socho..& dare u scold hm..

S:samar,mera beta h..aap mjhe mat sikhaiye..mjhe uske sath kaise behave karna h..(she shotback)Jst then d door knocked

R:cme in..A boy entered..

B:sir me karan malhotra..aaj hi appointed hun..

R:k.sit..

S:excuse me sir..

She left d cabin..

2 days passed..

Samar was nt allowed to go to d park..rd was also restless..At last..kaka tried to convience her..by using sme emotional blackmail..& sanyu agreed..nly for samar'r happiness..


Sanyu allowed samar to go to d park...

samar & rd became happy...they both were playing..

R(im): no matter..how much i hate u sanyukta..bt i cant hate samar...i'll cntinue ths relationship ever..

NXT DAY..OFFICE..

Randhir had n't arrived yet..Sanyu was doing sme work..jst then karan(the new employee) cme to her..

K:hi sanyukta ji..i'm karan..Sanyu looked at hm..

S:hy..(she sd normaly & continued her work)

k:wo..actualy mjhe apki thodi help chahiye..aaj mera pehla presentation h..aur me koi mistake karna nhi chahta..to kya aap ye file check karke meri mistakes clear kar sakti h..plss..aap mana mat kijiye.pls

S:arey aap manoj ko kyn nhi kehte..wo isme expert.i'm sure he'll help u..

K:manoj..avi tak aaya nhi h..aur baki sab k sath maine avi tak baat nhi ki h..ab to aap karengi na help..

Sanyu had no choice..

S:k..file dijiye..Karan sat beside sanyu on another chair...slight close to her..

whr as sanyu was bsy in checking d file..A

fter some time rd entered..he was checking sth in his ph while going to his cabin..

Suddenly his gaze fall on sanyu...He saw..sanyu was explaining sth..with a file in her hand...

karan seemed to so close to her..& he was continuously looking at sanyu's face..rather than d file..

Rd sensed sth weired..with karan..the way he was looking at her..

R:wht is going on..he murmured..wt why do i care?He rolled his eyes..went to his cabin..& pick up a file to be engrossed..Bt his mind wasnt there..

He put d file on d table..& called sanyu..

R:hello..maine jo files diye the wo leke mere cabin me aao..with coffee..quick..He hanged d ph..before listening her ans..Sanyu reached his cabin..with files & coffee..She put them on d table..while rd was playing game in his mobile..

S:sir.ye rahe files..She turned to go..

R:maine tmhe jane k liye nhi kaha..Ye files me jitne v mistakes niklenge rectify them..

S:sir..aap file check to kijiye..

R:haan to baitho yahan..me check karke deta hun..aur tm usse thk karo..baar baar me nhi bula sakta tmhe..sit..

He started sipping his coffee..

whle sanyu sat infront of hm..


There was an imp meeting..

all were bsy with files...Karan always tried to be close to sanyu...

Sanyu aware of his intentions..was behaving normaly...

Rd noticed ths..bt didn't sd anythng coz of hs big fat ego...

The meeting went succesful...yet d clients asked for some tym..

Rd went to his cabin..he was talking on ph..then he heard some hootings..he cme out of d cabin.. saw Manoj proposing Shweta...& others were cheering..

His eyes automaticaly went to Sanyu..who was standing near her desk..silently looking at them..Manoj was proposing Shweta..in a filmy style..sitting on his knees..

All d tym rd's gaze was on sanyu..as if he was trying to understand wht she was thinking at tht time..

Suddenly all clapped their hands...sanyu too clapped..Rd looked arround..shewta accepted d proposal..she cme running & hugged sanyu..

Whr as Manoj gestured a thank u to sanyu..(sanyu helped manoj to confess his feelings)sanyu smiled..& congratulated d couple..

Rd immediately went to his cabin...sat on d chair..

Randhir's pov-

for d first tym...i m thinking of tht day incident..tht day...I was barking on her..infront of all...She was trying hard to convince me to calm me..bt my anger was on cloud..& my anger was justified..she cheated me..how could she??? bt still she was trying...

suddenly she got numb...after hearing the word Bitc** ..frm my mouth..She didn't spoke a single word..untill i left her..for ever..

Now after long 5 yrs..i met her..bt she all changed..she is n't lyk tht grl..who used to fought for herself..all tym silent..lyk a doll..

she didn't even cmplain..all r messed up..her lyf becme messy..nthng is clear..& dnt knw why d hell i'm thnking of tht grl..i hate her..bt ths tym i jst want an ans..was she remembering tht day???

End of d pov..

Sme one knocked his cabin..

R:yes cme in..Verma entered..

V:sir apke liye cl h..Rd talked on ph for sme tym..& cme out of hs cabin..

R:guys..i hv an announcemet..congrats all..the deal is done..He sd happily..All becme happy..started congratulate each other..

Bt karan suddenly hugged sanyu..

K:thanku sanyukta ji..apne help nhi kiya hota..to mjhse ye nhi ho pata..thanku so much..Sanyu distanced herself..

S:its k..congrats..

There rd was fuming inside..bt he cntrolled himself..Rd called hm..

R:congrats..gd work.

K:thank u sir..(he was overjoyed)

R:hmm..tmhara focous kaam tak rahe to thk h..otherwise u knw how am i??Saying ths he left d office fumingly...

Rd fumingly left d office..


In d afternoon he went to d park..still d office incidents were in his mind..He saw..

samar sitting on d bench..was thinking sth..

R:genious..kya hua? Chup chap kyn baithe ho?Rd asked in a normal tone..as he sat beside samar..

Sa:ek prob h..bas solution soch raha hun..Rd raised his eyebrow..

R:prob..!! Me kuch help karun..chalo btao kya hua?

Sa:ok..meri scl me ek frnd h sonal..wo hamesa mere sath khelti h...aur hamare cls me ek ladka h Bunti..wo hamesa sonal ko paresan karta h..Aaj usne sonal k seat me glue laga diya tha..maine issiliye usse mana kiya tha wahan baithne k liye..aur tabhi miss aagayi..unhone hum dono ka danta..

R:phr..

Sa:sonal mjhse gussa ho gayi..ki meri wajah se usse dant padi..

R:to tmne usse sab sach btaya kyn nhi?

Sa:are wo kuch sune tab na..aaj to gd bye v nhi bola.

He sighed..

R:ye ladkiyan hoti hi aesi h..jo chiz samajhna chahiye..usse dekhti tak nhi..

Sa:meri to fault v nhi tha..

R:achhe ..bure ki samajh hi nhi h..

Sa:maine to sry v bola..

R:help karo to prob..na karo to prob..

Both were letting their frustuatin out..

Suddenly they stopped..Looked at each other..& brust out of laughing..

R:boys r best...h na?

Sa:haan..

There sanyu was trying nt to think over tht day incident..

Nxt mrng..

Rd was driving to d office..Bt in d mid way..his car damaged..He started repairing..after some time the car got started..

During d repairing some grease planted on his right cheek..which was unnoticed by hm..

He entered d office..Staffs greeted hm..gd mrng..& they started laughing a little seeing grease on his cheek..

Rd glared them..& all got back to work..

He called d peon..

R:sanyukta aate hi bolna..mere cabin me coffee leke aaye(his regular habit)Then he went to his cabin..

After sme time sanyu knocked & entered his cabin..Rd was searching for a file in d shelf..

R:mjhe vo gupta wali file nhi mil rahi h..search for it..

He sd while his back was facing her..

Sanyu proceeds towards him,,actualy to d shelf..her leg slipped..

Rd raised his hand to hold her..bt bymistake he pulled her..

They got imbalanced..& d nxt moment they were n floor with a thudd..

Sanyu was on top of rd..A cute eyelock..

They broke d eyelock at same time..

R:tm dekh k nhi chal sakti? Jb dekho girti rehti ho..

S:me niche nhi girti agar apne mjhe khincha nhi hota ..SIR..

R:to kya hawa me jhul rahi hoti??They were still in same positin...d door knocked..They started getting up..

R:ek to help karo..upar se attitude..huh (he murmured)

S:hadd h..Verma entered..

V:sir.apse kuch clients milne aaye h..

R:aap unhe conference hall me bithaiye..me aa rha hun..Sanyu noticed d grease on rd's cheek..due to which verma was smiling..He left..Rd also started leaving..S:sir aap aese jayenge?

R:kyn? she was looking at hs cheek..

R:ab ghur kyn rahi ho?

S:wo apke cheek pe grease laga hua h..

Rd immediately grabbed hs ph..saw his face.He removed d grease with a hanky & murmured a thank u before leaving d cabin..

all were working in office...

rd was discussing sth with other staffs..when his gaze fall on sanyu..who was working silently..

An evil idea striked in his mind..he went to sanyu..

R:ms sanyukta agarwal..tmhe jo file diya tha..wo kahan h..

Sanyu stood up..

S:sir ye raha..She forwarded d file..Rd checked one page..

R:ye kya..!! Itne din hogaye tmhe yahan kaam karte..aaj tak ek file thk se nhi kar payi tm..(he sd in a sarcastic tone)all staffs started looking at them..

sanyu stood there with her head low..

R:tmse achhe to new cmers h..dekho kitne ache se kaam karte h..

Nw take ths file..& rectify d mistakes..he forwarded d file..bt before sanyu could hold it..// the file falls down frm rd's hand..

sanyu bent down & rd smirks..whr as Tasha with sme others started laughing..

R:aur haan sabse pehle mere liye ek cup coffee..mere cabin me..

Sanyu went frm there..

Karan planned to sooth her...as he want to close to her..He went behind sanyu..

Rd saw tht..& followed them..Sanyu was preparing d coffee..when karan put his hand on her shoulder..

Sanyu jerked at d sudden action..

K:sanyukta..its me..i knw tmhe bahut bura laga hoga.. sir ne jo v kaha..so aap chinta mat kijiye..sab thk ho jayega..

S:its k..mjhe adat h..Saying ths she focoused on d coffee..

Rd was fuming..by seeing this..he left for hs cabin..After some tym sanyu entered his cabin..

She put d coffee mug on d table..bt then suddenly she was dragged off..And d nxt moment she was pinned to d wall..

R:aur kitna niche girogi??His anger was clearly seen in his eyes..

S:wht?? (she was confused)

R:dnt pretain..as if u didn't knw anythng..i jst cant believe..itna sab kuch hone k baad v tm itna nrmal hoke lyf jiti ho..& har jagah apni gande shouk puri karti ho..

Sanyu was soo confused..bt hearing his word..her eyes filled up..she wasn't struggling much..

Rd was about to spat more..he stopped..& left her with jerk..

Sanyu immediately left d cabin..wiping her tears..

Rd closed his eyes..// her tears filled eyes scene started flowing infrnt of hm,he banged his feast on d wall..

To be continued.....

Edited by muskan760 - 10 years ago

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