MaNan- Love The Way you Lie

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay, don't know what this was,this is the first time ever I'm writing anything, if it really can ever be called an OS or not but it was a result of my MaNan deprived brain and I had to pen it down.
Feedback would be much appreciated.


You are an enigma, Manik Malhotra.
You say you are a monster and yet it is you who turns out to be my own personal knight every time I am in trouble.
You save me from falling into despair, you save me from myself.
You give me strength and courage and encourage me to keep fighting all the way.
You say you do not want to be known as the hero but you always act like one, saving the day when all hope is lost.
You say you do not want to be the good guy but you want me to believe the best in you.
You say that the opinion of the world doesn't matter, that you don't care what people think but you don't leave a single chance to know what I think of you.
You say that you have never lied to your friends but for me you keep on doing so over and over again.
You say that it was all an act, a big scheme designed for revenge, that your Nandini Murthy mission is accomplished but every time I look in your direction, I see your eyes searching for me in the crowd, waiting for a glimpse of me.
You say that I'm dumb and naive and a fool for trusting you so blindly, but your eyes convey how right I was in believing in you, in trusting my feelings for you.
You say that Dhruv would make me happy but your actions speak something else entirely.
You tell me to stay away from you but you don't seem to be able to do the same.
You are full of contradictions, Manik Malhotra.
You are a good actor,I grant you that,but not good enough for me.
You say that you don't love me and I don't question you.
You say that it all meant nothing to you and I don't believe you.
Coz I know, I know the real you.
And I love the way you lie.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I had Eminem's voice saying all that in my head. You got him in all sorts of corner, M16. Awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!👏 Manik is such a confused soul😆 You penned it down wonderfully!
btw, my name's Zainab and I'm new here😳 I have a bit of a newbie question, sorry - I've been wondering why does everyone call him baba? And call nandini laddoo? If you know please!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And I love the you written this story... It's really awesome... Thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really love it babe!👏! Fantastic 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: charminggenie

I had Eminem's voice saying all that in my head. You got him in all sorts of corner, M16. Awesome👏


thanks genie, i was listening to this song yesterday n it got stuck in my head n came out in this form!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly_16

Loved it!👏 Manik is such a confused soul😆 You penned it down wonderfully!

btw, my name's Zainab and I'm new here😳 I have a bit of a newbie question, sorry - I've been wondering why does everyone call him baba? And call nandini laddoo? If you know please!😃


Hi Zainab,
welcome to the forum!
I'm glad that u liked it.😊
well we fondly call Manik n Nandini baba and laddoo...laddoo because she is really sweet with round chubby cheeks...as for baba, i guess someone started using it and it got stuck...he behaves like a 'baba'anyway, sometimes bindaas, sometimes hot, sometimes cold n now he is the sacrificing baba!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Noorie30

I really love it babe!👏! Fantastic 👏


Thanks noorie!
Glad that u liked it...I didn't know what I was doing anyway!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic piece of writing medha 👏 👏 👏.. You should write more..Loved it .
Now i kind of want something like this to play out too 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written..Loved it !😊

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