AarYa FF: BE WITH ME final part updated - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nirmalac99

jhil don feel bad abt d situations tat u cant control.
Enjoyed d romantic update...Aarti's punishment to Yash reg bed time stories 4 their children s hilarious...Truth to b told Aarti should take part in Speech Competition ,god she speaks so much....nd Yash controlled her in his style lol<img src="http://www.eemoticons.net/Upload/Milk%20Bottle/binhsua47.gif" alt="" />...






thank you very much nirmala di, updated next part. Hope u'll like tht
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

<font color="#9900ff" size="3">Hi Jhil</font>

<font color="#9900ff" size="3">I know i cam after long time and read part6 to 9 in one go</font>
<font color="#9900ff" size="3">i really loved the way you wrote and set the flow of story from prashant dearth to kids demand n aarti expectation all collide in one trip and in all this your aarya were superb naughty , emotional , romantic , understanding , sensitive and passionate</font>

<font color="#9900ff" size="3">full on masti ride this one for me</font>

<font color="#9900ff" size="3">tc gal</font>




hey riya thanx.
not to worry for late. Even me too was absent nd updated aftr quite long time for sm usual reasn so dnt worry.
i just glad u remember about ths nd still reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update jhil...👏
wow !! finally they r a family ...feels good to see them so happy ...finally yash and aarthi got their love in their lives and ansh and palak got mumma and papa...

aarthi s got double dhamaka in the form of yashs love and palaks acceptance ...😃

but its like the happiness before the storm which is so scary... yet i m positive that they will be together no matter what... now i m waiting for u to unfold it furthur...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for a great update. Looking forward to the next update. Have a great day.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Palak finally accepted Aarti as her mother, nice family bonding
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful part.. finally palak accepted aarti as her maa.. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jhil,fantastic update it brought back me d memories of good old PV days...

Did Aarti planned dis wit her children,lol...Loved d conversation bw Ansh nd Palak...Such a cute children dey r...



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Posted: 11 years ago


here is the next update of BE WITH ME


PART 11


9 months passed..


"so aarti, what you decided the name of our new member?", vidhi asked while working in kitchen

Aarti: bhabi, its just 5 month now. Still have so much time. And we don't know that will be boy or girl..


Vidhi placed her hand on aarti's shoulder, "aarti, are you happy with this baby?"


Aarti looked at her surprisingly, "what are you saying bhabi? Cant you see how much happy I am? How much happy yash is? What he don't do for my care, for my happiness! And which woman don't be happy in such beautiful situation of life?


Vidhi: I know aarti.. we all can see you both are happy. I just asked because you were not ready fo this now, isn't it?


Aarti: yeah, that's right. We didn't think anything or plan anything. It was sudden for me. I said you like that because I was confused. But I am happy bhabi, so as yash. I was happy then also but you know what I mean for me our family was complete. That moment I come to know I couldn't understand how to react. Bur yash's reaction clear all the confusion..


"and now see, I am the happiest and luckiest person. I didn't even imagine that I can get all this in this life. This much love and care from you all. Honestly I forgot what is love. Definitely sobha maa and babuji gave me enough love, that's why today I am here with my family. Yash is mo This much loving husband, this much caring family and specially my children.. my two hand full with happiness only. Yash is most wonderful person I ever seen" she gets emotional, "and he loves me so much".

"aha, you are here but mind is with someone else, if my devar ji will listenthis much praising of him then...",vidhi started her daily teasing season.."


"Bhabi..."


Vidhi: you know I am teasing but really.. I know you also love him that much.

Aarti smiled, "you know very well nas how much important this stage is for a woman when she is going to be a mother. She need all the affection and love, and yash giving me everything.. when I was pregnant with ansh that time was so difficult for me. I was fighting with myself. I was alive coz of my unborn baby, ansh was my strength. But this time I don't need to think anything. After aap sab jo ho..


Vidhi: yeah, see how much exited everyone. Specially ansh and palak.. hey, they returning today na?

Aarti: haan, finally. House become empty without them. Time don't want to pass, missing them a lot.


Their conversation get a break when they heard yash calling aarti..

Vidhi: now go, your lovely husband is calling you..

"I know why he is calling" she left with a smile"

As aarti entered in room yash asked, "why are you this much late? And what you were doing?"


Aarti crossed her arms and started to say, "aarti, don't rush behind kids you will fall down. Don't stand on any high place, don't go to terrace alone. No need to drive, its my order that you wont drive alone, don't do heavy works... I know you will say all this before leaving to office and see I remember every single word of you, how I can ignore then? And again for your satisfaction saying, I wont stand on high place, no need to go to terrace alone as I don't have any work there, I just go with you if don't feel sleepy at night., I don't even dare to do heavy works coz bhabi will kill me with her words only. And if driver there then what need to drive?, I drive alone then only when you with me. And kids not in house so after whom I'll rush?"

Aarti said all this in one go and yash was smilling to see her blubbering like this. Aarti pu her arms around his neck, "why you worry this much yash? yeah maa is out of house but bhabi is here, you know how much she is caring for me and I am enough responsible to take care of myself and our baby. And this is not first time for me. Why you take tension this much? And see I remember everything so relax sand go to office.. ... now why you smiling like this?"

Yash: I am smiling because from the time you come to this room only you here who talking,, not giving me single chance to speak up.. so I was thinking to use my formula to make you quite..


Aarti blushed and pushed him away, "jaao, I am not talking with you, you always have one track mind..


Yash pulls her closer, "arey, whats wrong in it? If you keep talking like this then I have to choose the same option na"

Aarti giggled, "yash please, the door is open.."

Ysash: kids are not in house, so not to worry about that..

Aarti: there other people also in house..

Yash raised his eyebrow ,"is that so? The let me close the door.."

Aarti stopped him, "yash, if you wont listen to me then I'll ask palak and ansh to sleep here tonight, as they are returning today, so you decide what you want ?


He looked irritated, "is it necessary to blackmail me always? But I am missing them..

Aarti: me too, feel so bored without them, thank god they returning today..

Yash: I have some important work so I wont able to go to pick them up..

"don't worry, you concentrate in work, I'll go" she assured yash.

"But.."

Aarti kept her hand on his cheek, "why you worry this much.. you remember once you bring me out of the fear of driving then?? Don't you trust me?"

Yash: not that aarti, you know the traffics and ways, please not in this condition specially when you are alone.. please don't go alone, take anyone with you.. ok..?

She just smiled to see this much concern in his eyes, "ok, done.. now you go.."

Suddenly he hugged her, "I don't want to go aarti.. don't know why today I want to be with you"

Aarti: I know you will be with me.. but now keep your excuses aside to be here.." she almost pushed her towards door..

He held her hand, "but you forget some of my words, take medicine at time, take food on time, don't stress for the kids, they will reach safe..

Aarti: I didn't forget dear, I know you'll call me to remind those..

She become quite now, looking little lost, for which yash asked, "are you thinking something?"

Aarti: don't know why feeling today is different, I mean something different, like any anniversary or birthday, but cant remember. Usually I remember all this things but whats today.. I am sure there definitely something today..

"I don't think its much important aarti otherwise you definitely remember that, and if anything special then you'll remember latter, what here to take tension.. ok, now I am leaving," he placed a kiss on her forehead..

He was going to leave when aarti said, "by the way i didn't get my tax properly today"

Yash looked at her surprisingly and get a naughty smile on her face, "and why you stopped me then with the excuses of open door and other thing..?"

"I stop you everyday, do you listen to me everyday?" she pouted..

Yash laughed, "you and your mood aarti.. but for this I love you this much.."

"don't blame me if my mood will change in few moments.." aarti warned him with her finger..

Yash grabbed her towards him, "I wont give you the chance sweetheart.."

Point to be noted that yash closed the door before, in case...😳




hope you liked.. will be waiting for likes and comment..

and from next part it'll be serious so be ready..

thank you for reading..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
after reading this part... the first thing came to my mind was nazar naa lage is jodi ko...
par it is quite evident that some storm is coming to hit them...which is scary ...but i m confident that nothing can make them apart...
awesome update jhil...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part.. aarti is pregnent.. yash was caring so much.. loved it .. waiting for next

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