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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Priya🤗
It was amazing 😃
Loved it❤️
But from next time i want a long update oki?😳
Continue asap
Tnx 4 pm😊
Love Aman❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aman1605

Hey Priya🤗

It was amazing😃
Loved it❤️
But from next time i want a long update oki?😳
Continue asap
Tnx 4 pm😊
Love Aman❤️

hey aman 🤗
Thanks for the sweet comment dear...
Yes pakka a long update next time...
U r wlcum...
U can get the update by Sunday as I tomorrow I will complete our nikkah os
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ufff finally I got time to read and Comment😛
I'm really really sorry Darling for late comment... pls Maaf kardena pls...
A chapter was Amazing, loved it darling...
I'm loving these Despos😆
Gulaam laughing like donkey🤣, I'm visualising it, tooo good
Zain ne Aliya ko maaf kiya just bcz she called him Jaanu😳 loved it
Thank u so much for lovely update and Pm
Chudail hug🤗 Bye bye buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Ufff finally I got time to read and Comment😛
I'm really really sorry Darling for late comment... pls Maaf kardena pls...
A chapter was Amazing, loved it darling...
I'm loving these Despos😆
Gulaam laughing like donkey🤣, I'm visualising it, tooo good
Zain ne Aliya ko maaf kiya just bcz she called him Jaanu😳loved it
Thank u so much for lovely update and Pm
Chudail hug🤗Bye bye buddy

it's okey..
I know you r busy with your exams toh chalega...
Thanks for your sweet reply...
Yes deponess ki height...
Chudail hug 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello guys..

Finally got time to update this story..

I hope u all didnot forget the story till now...

Here is the chapter

...

CHAPTER-6

Aliya was standing in the balcony impatiently to see whether any car was coming or not..

Ayat was standing there only and was doing the work of teasing her a lot...

Aliya folded her ears and scolded her but her eyes were fixed on the road...

It was spring which made mussorie to look more beautiful..

Zain car travelled over the roads made by cutting the mountains...

Zain had his binoculars in one hand and a hankie in another as he was suffering from the damn irritating cold..

He peeped out of the window as they reached mall road and took out the binoculars to look here and there when he saw aliya standing and looking towards there only...

He rubbed his eyes to check whether it was his illusion or what because now a days he used to see her everywhere only to find that she was real aliya..his aliya...

Aliya who had her eyes fixed on the road saw zain peeping out of the window and looking towards her only..

She blushed and ran inside the house

Ayat:abbu ammi jaldi aayiye voh aagaye

Usman become happy hearing this while suraiya was rather angry

Suraiya:aagaye muh othkar..koi sharam bhi nahi hai

Usman:suraiya begum and came closed to her

Gar apne unke samne muh kholo toh yaad rakhna mujhe bura koi nahi hoga

Suraiya went inside the room..

Car came and aliya ran to see zain and hided herself behind the pillar

Everybody greeted each other and went inside..

Ayat took saif with her while zain was standing their only to see how beautiful this place is..

As he was going to enter he heard a sweet sound calling him

Aliya:ruko zain

Zain:aliya tum yahan kya kar rahi ho

Aliya:tumhare liye paani layi hun

And she passed the glass towards him..

He sneezed making her worried

Aliya"zain kya hua?are u alright?

Zain:yes bas zara sa cold

Aliya:bas zara sa?apni halat dekhi hai..

Your nose has become red by sneezing...wait i am going to bring syrup for u

Zain:syrup no no..i hate it

Aliya:pls jaanu mere liye

Zain:ek shart par

Aliya:kya?

Zain pointed towards his lips and aliya blushed

Aliya:nahi koi dekh lega tho?

Zain:donot worry koi nahi dekhega...everybody is busy...

Aliya: okey..

She brought the syrup and made him drink it..

Zain: abb kiss

Aliya: close your eyes then only

Zain: par

Aliya: agar chaiye to

Zain:okey and he closes his eyes ..

Aliya tiptoes from there and zain waits for the kiss but this doesnot happen

Osman who came out to check whether aliya was out or not saw zain like this

Osman :are zain beta kya hua tumhe?

Zain was shocked with mixed emotions of anger

He stammered

Zain: wohhh haan wooh uncle i was enjoying the scenery

Osman:oh enjoy beta enjoy

Zain:jee uncle

The whole day aliya was hiding from zain because she didnot want to lost herself in the proximity of zain

Dinner time...

Aliya made food for everybody and served it too..

Every body liked it b\and ate more but our dear zain in anger didnot ate it though he liked the food a lot when he tasted it..

Aliya saw this and was feeling bad as she herself wanted to kiss him like fools..

After the dinner everybody engaged themselves in playing antakshri while zain went upstairs and aliya too followed him

Zain:tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Aliya:woh i am sorry

Zain:sorry?sorry for what aliya

Aliya:that i ditched u

Zain: so why didnot u did that time

Aliya:i was afraid because if i will kiss u i will lost myself and will be in some other world

Zain came more closer to her and she moved backward till she her back hit the wall

Zain: u now what aliya i have never ever touched anyone but when i touch u i want to do it more...i want to feel u..

Aliya smiled hearing zain's confession as tears of happiness made their way from her eyes to her cheeks...

Zain moved his thumb and wiped her tears and hugged her

Aliya too reciprocate the action and hugged him tightly

Aliya:toh tumne mujhe maaf kiya..

She said by pulling her out from the hug

Zain:haan princess..u r so sweet that no one can get angry from u easily

And they both hugged tighly again

Next morning:

The family decided to go to the dargah..

Zain and aliya were together through out the whole visiting

Every body started moving towards the home

Zain:bhaiya i want to spend some time with aliya so ppls do someting for me

Fahad:mein kya karon

Zain:bhabhi samjaiye na inhe ppls

Nafeesa:fahad tum agar nahi gaye to ghar jaakar tumhari khehar nahi

Fahad got scared and ran towards ghulam and osman

Fahad:dad and uncle saif want to visit the campty falls ..he was saying last night and ws crying for the same

Saif who was there only said meinekab kaha esa

Nafeesa who already pointed out fahad will not be able to do anything was moving behind him only and when saif said maine kab khaha esa she covered it properly by saying he is a kid...and in shyness he is saying this and took saif along with her

Osman:okey enjoy

Fahd came and announced that osman has agreed for the outing

Everybody was happy specially zain and aliya...

They all went there...

Since it was morning time there was silent everywhere and the whether was too pleasent for the love birds..

They walked hand in hand to the bottom of the fall

Fahad and nafeesa leaved the two alone by taking ayat and saif with them too...

Zain: uff finally shanty...

Aliya: haan

Zain:it seems like it is going to rain

Aliya:yes and can u hear the birds chirping ?

Zain:yes the voice is as sweet like yours..

She smiled

Zain:waise tum apna promise kab pura kar rahi ho?

Aliya:kon sa?

Zain:dare u forget?

Aliya smiled:i donot remember tum kiske bare mein baat kar rahe ho?

Zain:iski..

He came more closer to her and was going to kiss her when it started raining like cats and dogs..

Both ran to find a place which could save them

And yes they find it also...

It was a big peepal tree on which many threads were tied

Zain:aliya yeh thread kiske liye hai

Aliya: yeh manat ke daage hai..

Zain:i see..haam bhi bhandte hai

Aliya:wait i am having the same as nafeesa bhabhi gave it to me to tie in dargah but i forgot to do

Zain:so tie na

Aliya:okey

And both tied the thread

Zain (monologue):allah pls hamen hamesha ek saath rakhna

Aliya:(monologue):allah hamesha zain ki dua qubool karna

And both smiled to each other after sending the quick prayer to allah

After rain stopped both went to catch up with the rest of the family hand in hand

Peer baba who was passing from there saw it and blessed the two...

...

This is more than 1000 words chapter..

I hope it was big enough..

Waiting for the replies..

Priya

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome awesome yaar
Kiss hote hote reh gayi
Ufff
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Awesome awesome awesome awesome yaar

Kiss hote hote reh gayi
Ufff
Lovely update

haan toosad na...
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yaar...very very nice 👏👏

thanks...for the pm 😳

continue soon ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing ...
Zain despo ... Lolzzz
Kiss nahi hui ... !!
Continue next part fast :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter once again...plz continue soon.ASAP

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