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Posted: 10 years ago

Finally, its over - PART 6 :


mr. randhir singh shekhawat, you should hv told me his truth earlier.. n tum itne din office m mujhe ignore kyu kr rhe the??' I asked looking straight into his eyesI didn't told u coz I wanted to plan this evening fr u n I ignored u coz I didn't want that u get any hint that I m ur secret admirer..


every tym u smiled seeing my gifts, I'd feel as if I m on cloud 9I just wanted to make u feel special..maine ye sb sirf isliye kia so tht m karan k tortures n uske wrong intentions se tumh bcha sku.. agr m karan ko ye kaam krne se mna krta to wo kisi aur ko dhund leta is kaam ke liye n tum to wse b uske pyar m pagl thi us wqt so tum meri baat nhi sunti I knw so I insulted him n proposed u in the party but u left me broken..


it took me a week to handle myself n thn I decided this secret admirer wala idea n it really worked.. uh fell for a guy who u hvn't even seen.. uh fell for me again. N then I planned this evening, ur dream evening n I want to say u once again..' he said n then sit on his kneesI love you sanyukta, I love you more than uh lv urself.


I promise I ll do what u want, I promise I ll not doubt u ever, I promise I ll nevr break ur trust... please give me one more chance...' he was having a commitment ring in his hands..


Uh wna know my answer na?? so listen mr. randhir singh shekhawat I ll give u a chance but on one condition'


I was really rude n I knew itwhat?' he spoke up softlyyou hv to bring that karan in my feet n make him apologize me.. agr aisa kr paoge to I ll think about u' I said proudly


'how cn I do that? U knw his ego.. He ll never apologise u' he said looking

down..


'if u lv me thn prove it, either make karan apologize me or forget me,

mr. randhir singh shekhawat' I said pointing my finger at him.


'for ur sake, I ll do I ll get him on ur feet, I promise sanyu' he said


'my name is sanyukta aggrawal n better call me that. Uh don't hv ri8 to call me

sanyu. Pehle prove ur lv n thn call me sanyu' I said giving him a tough look..


He went outside the restaurant n I called him from behind.. 'thnx' n I went my

way leaving him stunned..


Aftr 2 weeks of that condition, I got a text from randhir..'meet me at terrace of ur building sharp at 5.


I went there n saw randhir n karan togethr, karan's face was down. randhir

signaled him n karan lied on my feet n apologized..


i m sorry sanyukta, m trisha k pyar m pagl ho gya tha.. M sorry for all the tortures sanyu .. M sorry' karan said pleading...


I was surprised that guy whose ego was everything for him, was pleading .. Amazing.. But how?? aisa kyya kia randhir ne...?? Aise kse karan ne mujhse mafi mangi.. randhir signaled him to get lost from there n then our convo started..


'abhi to thik h na ?? Ab to accept my love' randhir said looking at me 'frst tell me tumne aisa kya kia ki uska ego tut gya n he apologised me??' I asked

FLASHBACK:


randhir went to karan's house.'karan, bahr aao... Bahr aao I wanna talk to u...


'Karan came outside'kya hua h randhir?? Yaha kyu aaye ho?? ''tumhare gunaho ki sja dene' randhir held his collar'


randhir get lost' karan pushed him Randhir challenged him...

'himmt h to aao maidan m.. Let's have a boxing match n jo harega wo dusre ki baat manega'


'mujhe tum jaise loosers ko hrane ka showk ni h so bettr get lost from here' karan pointed hia finger towards the door'aisa kaho na ki tumh dr lgta h harne se.


Bloody loser' randhir signald thumbs down.'shut up u loser.. Jis ldki ne teri itni inslt ki uske liye tu apne childhood best frnd ko challenge kr ra h.


Tmrw at 8 pm lets hv a match n haroge to tum hi n u ll hv to be servnt for one whole day ' karan challenged him back ..Nxt day at 8pmrandhir won n he orderd karan to apologize sanyu n lie in her feet


FLASHBACK ends


'see as simple as that' randhir smirkedHaan haan thik h..' I replied coldly.


'Abhi to u accpt my lv na' he asked making a puppy face..'Not so easily mr. randhir singh shekhawat' I replied looking into his eyes n thn I went back to my apartmnt leaving him stunned once again ...


'tmrw, meet me at garden behind ur building sharp at 6..

I hate late-comers' I texted him

I met him at the garden, he was as usual looking really awesome like always...


'friends??' I broke the silence with my hand going towards him.'sirf friends?'he frowned'abhi k liye sirf friends, baki sb we ll think na' I smiledwe shook hands 'lets go to disc today...!!! For celebrating our frndship ... Pleasee' he made a puppy face ...


'okay.. Meet me outside my building sharp at 11.' I turned back' thnx for giving me a chance' he said..

I just smiled n came back home.



I was getting ready for disc. I was really confused about my dress , doorbell rang.


Outside, was a gift with a pink colourd dress.. 'Wear this', a note in the box said... 'you already hv matching footwears' it continuedI smiled n got ready..


Outside the building'looking really stunning.. Randhir said as he moved forwrd to put a strand of my hair behind my ear.


i backed off. 'dont wry kuch ni krunga.. ' he smiled n we drove to disco.It was really nice ni8 .


We danced our hearts out n

we celebrated our friendship to the fullest..



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Everything was going well until I felt thirsty. I dragged myself to the drinkers corner n randhir followed me.


Vodka for me' said randhir.. one soft drink for me' I said.


But we didn't know that fate had another plans for us. Some1 spiked my drink n i started feeling drowsy.


We decided to hire a room in nearby hotel as I was not in condition to go back home n randhir was drunk too..


On the way to hotel roomrandhir, u knw tum bahut hawt ho' I said as he was carrying me in his arms coz I was not able to walk properlyHe made me lie on bed.


He was about to stand straight when I pulled him towards me.. randhir, come closer na!!!' I exclaimedsanyu u r out of ur senses.


Uh sleep, we ll talk tmrw' he said out of awkwardness.I pulled him really closer, my lips brushing his lips n he fell on meI was not in my senses n he was already in love with me.


We were lost in each other.The environment was really getting hotter n thn I kissed him with all my force, with all my intensity I sucked his upper lips n then lower lip n then I bit his toung n he was responding with equal passion.


The intensity was reaching its peaks when I was unbuttoning his shirt n he kissed on my neck n then I removed his shirt n then his jean n he removed my dress kissing my shoulder n in few seconds after that, we were in each other's arms, without any clothes..


just he n me together nthng else n he pulled blanket over meN REST ALL YOU KNOW(i told na i m too bad in writing these scenes)


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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress

Unress
Yipee moi first

The update was awsme
I so luved it

Sanyu is ready to accept his luv bt he have to bring karan on her feet
N prove his luv

N rd did dat karan apologized
Vo b boxing me harane pr

Bt sanyu still not ready
She's ready to give him a chance as a frnd

Everything going perfect
Bt they got drunk

I think now sanyu will regret n will be angry on rd

Wtng for next
Update soon

Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey amazing update...
Well sanyu has too many conditions ha...
But rd accepted all of it and proved her that he really love her...
Well who spiked her drink??
No matter whatever happens between them she should not blame rd for it now...
Thnx for pm...
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
but who spike drink
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice 1 di
u know u shud try ur hand at an os
ok got dance class now...gotta go
detailed cmmnt later if I remember 2...warna itna hi
bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome but abhi to friends bane the aur ab ye sanyu ka reaction kya hoga...cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!
rd is so cute n smart!!!
omg ab kya hoga😲
continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
finally sanyu forgiven rd
karan apology part was too gud
thanks for pm
continue asap :))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
Nice one
Thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
i didnt really xpct sanyu vl bcme stubrn...
i liked her attitde bt felt sad fr rd...
atleast thy strtd frdshp...
rd's boxng plan was suprb...
i cant wait fr nxt updte...

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