MG FF Uljhe Rishtey--kahanni ek unkhili kali ki last epl- 98- 7 jan - Page 16

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Awesome update . Wow Geet will have twins. Waiting for the next.
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part 45


geet lesion carefully and look to pinky and ask di ye chote apko apke husband ne ...




pinky took deep breath and say husband usko main next day hi chode ke aa gayi thi




ye papa aur chacha ne di hui hai , muje village main rakha tha till last month



all gasp with pinky ans


meera - tera husband


pinky - wo aaya hi nahi


all say in union kya


pinky make face and say wo us din room main aaya hi nahi shaayed wo bhi force marriage main hoga after ritual i can not saw him she took long breath acha hua us din main room ka door hi nahi khola tha and next day in early morning i come back bolna assan tha adjust karna lakin koi aur muje haat ...she stop in half its kill me and i took that decision that no one touch me other than adi so ...she look to adi with love , and adi look her with proud and love he want to hug her and love her he so much lost in pinky he come out from pinky land with beep '
of a mobile


" huamre aas pass bache aur budde log baite hai so stop to eat pinky sis with your eyes " dev send this massage to him


adi cheek turn red in shyness he look to dev who have grin on his face


pinky ask in painful voice uske baad i don't wan t to say wo yaade phir se mere zkham please


dadi come near pinky and say its ok beta we will get kya hua hoga but how u come KC


pinky look with so much respect to maan and all get ans


maan - ok ok i hide it in my one tour to that village for work i get her all injury doing work in near house i am so shock with help of her sis i success to bring her back nahi to its impossible tha i make complent against her father and uncle so that's was now closed chapter


geet hug maan with his ans she crying like small girl yes she saw more difficulty in her life but this was and above pregnancy make her like this all get worried but all take brake and make excused and went from there they all know geet need her maan now


maan thanks all in mind and took geet in tight hug than just toook her in his arm and went to there room ...



maan make her stand and again hug her and mummer its ok geet don't cry its hurt me u know na but geet sob no wear to stop and maan have to stop her he make her look to him and kiss her both eyes ...your cry make my heart bleed geet don't do this please


than he kiss her cheek , forehead and bend near lips , geet hold her breath when his hot breath fall on her lips she want this ...maan get her mind and brush his lips on her rosy lips when that pick not turn in kiss geet open her eyes and look to maan


maan caressed end of her lips and ask u want now , a red hu come on her face she try to look down but maan stop her and make her look to him


maan - abhi nahi geet sab hai na waha humara intazaar kar rahe hai and if i start to kiss u dotn know when i stop and where he say like true man geet blush with his word but she want that


geet - chotasa ...kis*


maan just hug her oh geet u r so nave and with that he took her rosy lips for passionate kiss and his hand start to travel on her body ...the marriage in three day that thought itself make him wild and now geet demand his desire now make him beast and he himself don't get his hand just open her b** button under top and cup her first time like this he keen that and geet moan with shock in maan mouth , she first time get touch by maan on her feminist part ...when his long finger touch her erect NI******* geet feel like he will fail down any moment her whole body shake with maan touch and kiss his finger caressing her there and his mouth on her lips he feel wet down she took maan hair in her hand to control herself this passion , this touch so much for her to digest but she want more more like want his touch to her other one blos****** that thought brought red hu on geet face


next part till night or evening

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Part 46

geet feel like he will fail down any moment her whole body shake with maan touch and kiss his finger caressing her there and his mouth on her lips he feel wet down she took maan hair in her hand to control herself this passion , this touch so much for her to digest but she want more more like want his touch to her other one blos****** that thought brought red hu on geet face


red hu of geet face say about her thought his hand ready to discover other beauty of geet , her other Blo***** but same time someone knock there door and both come out from there la la land geet in fear hug maan tightly and maan groan with her touch tho they have cloth but when she touch him he so much ... but next second both eyes winded in shock ye geet ka chotusa kis* kaha tak chala gaya geet turn her back to maan she is in real mess her top all crush lose Blo***** she closed her eyes she try to closed the her inner butten but cant her hand shaking like anything her swallon lips


the thought maan touch her there her forbidden part first time she turn full red in shyness one thought come in her mind ager kisine knock nahi kiya hota to shaayed SR shadi se pehale hi oh god her eyes open with thought and maan get her thought she is open book for him he bend little and say ha SR ho jati to kya Chalta hai


poor geet feel so shy shy in-front of him she closed her face with palm


maan chuckle with her reaction uski devil kid to shy girl ho gayi he bend littel
and mummer in husky voice aise shy mat karo muje bahot kuch hota hai ... she cried maan sir


just than someone knock door with loud voice its dadi ma poor maaneet scared like hell


maan - gulp hard main close karu kya wo button


geet tunr more red with qus but she don't have other option she turn her back to him and shut her eyes maan in passion easily undo that things but now he feel shiver run in body , he mummer bahot shock hai na chotusa kiss dene ka than bhugto MSK


both make them self presentable and come out with shy face they know they have to face tease now


but there surprise all just runing here and there like someone going some-wear


dadi called maaneet and say chalo chalo change your dress and please Msk wear some casual not this three pic ok and geet meera ne cloth nikale hai tumare liye so fast


aur jo qustion hai na wo car main ask karo now go both make face maan roll his eyes and went to change here geet sit near meera she feel so shy shy even to look maan her red cheek turning more and more red



all get that something happen in room but all know ye kid pura 18 + hi na bol de so all stopping themselves to ask anything but giving teasing look to maan who get irrited all are going somwear in bus all toghether but all hell bend to not tale him





upon that geet glue meera like fevicol she so want to sit near her her red shy face
and all teasing gaze on him same time his mobile beep its massge from dev

maan read and trun dark red in shy " mr msk band kamre main aisa kya kar diya ke is kid kaand ko shy shy girl bana diya "( in closed room what u done so this kid kaand turn in to shy shy girl ) he add kissing smily face and say iske alwa kuch aur to nahi kiya na ...ahem ahem




maan control himself and glare to dev to hide his shy face and dev start to sing


Bade miya diwwane asie na bano
mohabat kya hai humase suno


maan want to kill him for tease him like this
here dev stop and sahsa start to sing

ankho hi ankho main ishaara ho gaya



saha just wink too maan poor maaan turn his face to hide his smile his friend bend to make him shy shy he look to geet who sit there with bending head maan want to once look in her eyes but she avoiding it and that make restless maan he think for second kuch jada ho gaya kya ( mahi thinking ye msk kame kab karta hai )


meera get maan restless she make note ye geet se baat karna hoga her shyness may be hurt maan , she bend to geet ear ...geet your shyness may be maan took other way geet give confused look and meera say ye man are so dum look u shying for those beautiful moment and i bet u abhi bro think kar rahe hoge main geet ko hurt kiya kya



geet ask with so much worry succhi




meera - mucchi look in bro eyes he is scared , sad i know geet ye closeness , desier make u shy but cherished this moment it will be life long beautiful memory for u geet this first hug to first kiss all become beautiful memory dear meera say softly




geet look to maan there eyes mate and geet get it like he asking with eyes that i hurt u , geet eyes turn teary with his face she get up from her sit and went near maan and sit next to him all wristel and hooded on her action ...




dev took chance and sit next to meera all laugh on them

meera roll her eyes

dev put his hand on meera shoulder and pull her to himself and say loudly kya
meri hone wali biwi ho ...


dadi - dev behave


dev cried like child kya dadi mere liye restriction wo deknho maaneet lost in each other eyes jaise eating each other with eyes and pinky adi unko to last corner wali sit di abhi hum to bache nahi hai na ke haumko pata nahi why u give them last wala sit ha dev ask with frown



dadi , besharam dev chup ho ja


dev like kya what i say wrong and meera slap him and say suder jao dev



all in fun mood


maaneet eye lock brake after some time maan took geet hand inhis hand and say
please aise dur mat jana


geet nooded in yes




maan - wo room main i cross my limit kya


geet put her hand on maan mouth and nodded in no




geet - she look down wo first time u touch me like this so me feel shy ...bus nothing eles wo to bahot acha tha her cheek turn dark shade of red



maan want to eat her raw but control himself just than bus stop and all come out from bus and after looking to sea ...geet try to jump in happiness but all
say in shock GEET poor girl froze in her place for second maan give her side hug and out his hand on tummy and say for them geet slowly ok


poor geet nodded like student who caught by many teacher and principle



and all took long breath maan love this surprised and all start to enjoy after so many year they all together and all happy without any tension but whose no this will be going for so long jo anhi apne sath ho ...jarrori nahi hota na ke agle pale wo sath ho




all know geet want to know about dv past but her reaction on geet past they don't want disturbed her so all aarage this picnic for maaneet specialy for geet to divert her mind kuch past bahot Nud* face main samane aa jate hai ...




geet start to nuge maan she want to play in water and maan give helpless look to all
alll ignore him and at last maan get up and say chalo meri ma ...geet glare to him ok ok mere hone wale bacho ki



both start to walk both went away from all in geet non stop talk they went far from all geet went in water and start to play like kid maan think ...she is kid lakin meri hai shhyad meri berang zindagi main rang bharne ke liye baabji ne bheja hai usko


geet who full drench in water say maan i want to go more in water now maan say no u don't bahot ho gaya geet come out



geet maan please , ilove to play in water



maan -please geet sardi ho jayegi



geet make pout and say please



maan make frown and say if u dont want to lession me than jo karna hai karo and he
turn his back to geet in ager he thought geet come out with his fake anger he wait for her for 2 min first he heard her bangel and payyal sound and he though his kid is
upto somthing but than all silance is there not one sound that make him surpriced and he turn to look her


and his floor slip from his foot there is no one ...geet nahi thi waha she vanish like wo thi hi nahi uske sath




maan froze in his place his mind turn numb ...a big leher of water come to maan and brought maan back and he cried in hige voice GEEET a voice of fear , sad , hurt , braking something big
like he lost somthing biggg his life his geet



precap
don't know 😃
ok ok look teaser down 😉



note - geet meet main pm nahi diya tha kal kisiko dear
how i will forget u when u start to express yourself in sentence than wordbig hug u dear


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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teaser


maan cell start to ring he took with so much fear

jisko dhood rahe ho mere pass hai


maan mummer sam took geet



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comment from my one reader

nakh5683


part 36 WOW awesome im yeh pinky to kafi bold hai but shes right shadi ke naam pe rape hi hai if she dosent love her husband ab har husband to maan nahi hota no jo control kare aur apni biwi ko apne pyar mein puri tarah dhale ki who uski hojaye poor adi loved this part

part 37 hahahahahaahaha it was so funny mera has has ke haal bura hogaya maan sir ne meri first kiss chura li seriously geet ur a kid god awesome poor adi phir se in pain hope this time pinky stays forever in his life


part 38 haye adi and pinky were so helpless but destiny brought them together surely they r gonna be together now nice emotional and yet blushy blushy update

part 39 god is geet ka kuch nahi hosakta jhalli lekin ☺️ek proper kiss to hogayi awesome
part 40 hahahahahaahhaa geet kya bolu chalo meera dev ka patch up hogaya maaneet ka passion was just WOW I love it it was amazing

part 41 loved it maan calls his dadi Amitabh bachan 🤣 itni danger hai dadi hahahahahaha nice one lets see what happens with our dearly beloved maaneet bachan manti hai ya nahi

part 42 jai ho dadimaa ki itna bada jhtka haila no words re awesome dadi ha ya james bond god marriage in 3 days hmmm more action on marriage day lets see awesome mahi

part 43 wah kya planning hai sam to gayi aur shadi ka fair dekhe sasha ka dulha kon banta hai real serial mein msk ke chakkar mein akeli reh gayi thi lets see who u patch her with

part 44 loved it when maan said mein teen teen kid ko kaise sambhloga hahhaahaahahah awesome 😡 sam kitni evil hai and im guessing aur evil hogi love ur ff yaar nice

part 45 emotional update really loved maaneet passion was icing on the cake absolutely delicious although teaser is scary but waiting for it

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pinky did suffer a lot.
Sameera is out for good, I hope.
Dadi is really dramebaaz.
Waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update love it
Lovely maaneet romantic moment😊
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for update
pinky suffer so much
adi feel shy by dev remark
and geet desire for maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mahi...
ho god how much pinky has suffered..
but her love for adi made her come out of that hell..
great relief that maan has seen her and helped her..
devs message😆
dev babu bhool gayi bacchi bolne ki sazaa..
and geet crying
haw maaneet moment just dreamy..
lovely one dear...
waiting to know whts going to happen next..
continue soon mahi...
big hug🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feeling sad after knowing wat happened with pinky.
She has suffered a lot.
She loves adi so much.
Geet is crying lyk a small baby.😆
Maan kisses her 😳 .
Geet wants more.
Her pregnancy hormones r making her crazy. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
mahi hearing about pinky's pain just made me cry 😭 aur felt really proud on our maan mahi ke he brought pinky out of that hell aur hearing all this our child geet started crying aur all knew ke she needs her maan now aur maan let his innocent love know ke seeing her cry his heart bleeds aur di sachi main geet ki innocence is the one thing that made our maan head over heels in love wid her aur here bhi aisa hi howa she so cutely demanded a chota sa kiss aur wht then transpired was just heavenly beautiful mahi aur u stopped at a very wrong time but waiting for the update in the evening dyingly mahi😊

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