FF: FANAAH in your love.... |Chapter 6- Page 16|

Main writer: afreenamna

This story wasn't intended to be story but it became a story.
It started with giving a caption of a SaaYa creation and afterwards became a story.
Hopefully, it will be appreciated by all as its Afreen's first story.

Thank you!

PART 1


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Sarthak: My wife, my business!
Yamini: Wife in another life! An... (she
stops and starts walking away)
Sarthak (thinks): Humara pyaar kabse waqt ka
mauhtaj hone laga Preet...
Yamini (thinks): Tumhe ne toh kaha tha pyaar
mein saat hona nahi pyaar ka hona zaruri hota
hai main bus wahi... (she close her eyes)

Lost in her thoughts Yamini collided with a
young
beautiful girl in her 20's...
Yamini: Oh i am so sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur
tha...
Girl:No no i think main hi kuch zyada jaldi
me thi..u know when we r going to meet
some1 we love after such a long time v get so
impatient..btw apne kahi Sarthak ko dekha
hai...
Yamini: Sarthak? (with a confused angry jealous
look)
Sarthak: Nidhi!!
(An extremly happy Sarthak interrupted their
convo..just to get a rib crushing hug from
nidhi)
Nid: i missed u so so so much..
Sar: but i missed u more..
Yam: errr!!
Sar: oh main toh tum dono ko introdce karna
hi bhul gaya..yeh hai nidhi my-
Nid: the love of his life (she interrupted which
made him knit his brows)
Sar: aur yeh hai yamini my...my
Nid: yours (with a raised brows)
Sar: my past life's daughter's MIL's son's MIL
(he said as fast as possible) ab chalo yaha se
(he drag nidhi away from there leaving a
glaring yamini behind)

Looker room
Sarthak enters looker room just to face a
fuming Yamini standing folding her hands right
in front of him..
Sar: hmmm?
Yam: kya kaha tumne..main saasu mom...kiske!
Sar: q tumhe pasand nahi aaya? (both his on
his waist he act as cool as possible) mera paas
aur bhi hai how about 'mere bete ke wife ki
saasu mom' or--
Yam: just shut up sarthak..u know what tum se
baat karna hi bekaar hai..(she interrupted)
Sar: exactly Sarthak..jab tum mujhe Anshuman
bulate hi nahi toh Sarthak Yamini se aise hi
baat karega..(he said in a serious tone n
started to leave just to hear Yamini saying
something which made him smirk)
Yam: woh ladki kaun thi tumhare saat?
Sar: q tumhe jalan ho rahe hai? (now its him
folding his hands)
Yam: Jalle mere jooti..
Sar: chal hut jhooti..(smiling) waise woh ladki
kaun hai kaun nahi hai its none of ur business
qki Yamini ho Preet nahi..Yamini joh ab mujhse
pyaar nahi karte remember..
(she opened n closed her mouth n left the
place leaving her words unsaid)
Sar (thinks): chahe joh bhi ho preet main
tumse humara pyaar qubool karwake
rahuga..kismat ne hume ek dusre se phirse
milwaya hai..taake hum humare adhoori
mohabbat ko poora kar sakke...


TO BE CONTINUED...

UPDATE 2
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(Flashback)
A Scene where to prove his love to Preet, Anshuman went n stood in sunlight in front of her, he was looking to her without blinking, trying to show her the extend of his love for her, she looking him right into his eyes in disbelive shocked when her eyes went to his body it looks like its gonna burn any second..without wasting a second she rushed to him n hugged him, moving him behind with her in the shadow of tree..
Preet: Yeh..yeh kya kar rahe thea tum? pagal ho gaye ho kya (breaking the hug she starts shouting at him with teary eyes)
(he cupped her face n removed her tears)
Ansh: Pyaar karta hu main tumse preet..bohat bohat pyaar..hudse zyada, khudse bhi kahi zyada.. Pyaar karna nahi aata mujhe, nahi jaanta ke main apna pyaar-
Preet: jhoot (she shouts n starts moving closer to him, closing the little distance left between them) jhoot kehte ho tum ke tumhe pyaar karna nahi aata (n she brought her face closer to him n they got lost in their love unknown to them that its been witness by some1,some1 who will ruin their love forever)
today!!
Sarthak who was lost in his past came in present..
Sar (thinks):kaash..kaash uss din woh nahi hua hota..kaash sab kuch waisa hi hota jaise maine socha tha..toh hume u sadiyon ki doorie na teh karni padti..

Yamini was watching Nidhi eating in cafeteria through the glass wall..the way she was looking her it was not a pleasent one..she was thinking about the way Sarthak was interacting with her..they seem's close very close..
Yam: love of his life hmmm.. (she was muttering when a evil smile crossed her face)
Sar: aisa sochna bhi mat (his voice came from behind who obvious saw her watching nidhi)
Yam: aur main kya soch rahe hu? (she turned n replyed cooly)
Sar: hum dono ke beech aisa kuch nahi hai.
Yam: really? (folding her hands she asked sarcastically)
Sar: listen if u hurt her u hurt me (he said in angry tone n went in cafetaria to join nidhi..n it didnt go well with Yamini)
An angry yamini enters locker room..furiosly she throw her stethoscope which made a scared Prateek stop from entering n leave as far as possible..her mind was repeating Sarthak's same word again n again 'if u hurt her u hurt me' when suddenly a thaught crossed her mind n her expression softened..she went to her locker n desperately starts searching n she found what she was looking for..a small glass perfume bottle half filled with water (Muskurane ki wajah unplugged tune in bg)
Flashback (PreeMan scene contd)
when they were holding eachother in the shadow of the tree it starts raining..no sunlight no misunderstanding just rain n them..she moved in the rain n starts enjoy..while Anshuman was mesmerized by the girl in front of her, her innocence, her smile..she was preet his preet..
Preet: Anshuman waha q khade ho aao na..
(he joins her..it was their first rain together..when he got a idea he starts going away)
Pre: Anshuman kaha jaa rahe ho (she asked when he starts moving toward his hut)
Ansh: tumhe kuch dena hai..
(he came out with a empty perfume bottle)
Pre: yeh kya hai?
Ansh: ek minute..
(he hold the bottle out into the rain and watch as the steady flow slowly fills it. When there is enough, enough that Preet can clearly see, he close the bottle and hand it to her. She raises a skeptical eyebrow, but accepts the bottle)
Ansh: Yeh humare baarish hai Preet..humare pyaar ki pehle baarish..ab jab kabhi tumhe mere pyaar pe yakeen na ho tum isse dekh lena..
(he smiles n she smiled back n they hugged) (flashback end)
(Yamini was holding that bottle n smiling with tears in her eyes)

[INDEX]
Chapter 1 & 2: Pg1
Chapter 3: Pg 2

Originally posted by: rima4ever

congo for new story

thanks yah..this was so not planned lol!!

CHAPTER 3
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[In The Cafeteria Sarthak n Nidhi]
Sar: Tum world ki best medical institute ko chodke yaha intership karna chahte ho aur woh b mid term aur tumhari mom maan gayi (he was shocked to hear this revealation)
Nid: Meri Mom? woh tumhari..actually na rehne do ..tumhe kuch samjhana hi bekaar hai, tumhare chakkar mein main q apna khana thanda karu? (she concentrate her focus again in eating her food)
Sar: bus kar..itna khayegi nah toh aur moti ho jayegi..
Nid: moti? aur main (with raised brows) main moti nahi tum lukkhey ho..i mean just look at urself (moving her hand up down in the air in his direction)
Sar: tune mujhe lukkha bola (now he has raised brows) btw joh main hu nah usse lukkha hona nahi fit hona bolte hai (placing both his hands on table he said it in a secret revealing tone)
Nid: well i that case joh main hu nah usse mota hona nahi healthy hona kehte hai (she mimicked his hands action n tone.. n that was true she was not fat but not even skinny girl..she was perfect) waise b main bohat gusse mein hu..n u know nah gusse mein mujhe kitne bhook lagti hai..
Sar: gusse mein? q?
Nid: pucho mat..lagta aaj subha se saare akdu gussail log mujhe ko mil rahe hai..jab main hospital mein aaye na toh main iss world ke sabse akdu creature se mille..
Sar: Creature?
Nid: yes creature, insano mein toh main uski ginti kar hi nahi sakte..tumhe dekna chahiyeh woh mujhse itne gusse se baat kar raha tha as if..as if maine usse billi maar di ho (she said in most dramatic way)
Sar: Aisa kya kar diya tumne (he asked in bit high curious tone)
Nid: woh actually maine-
(she saod cooly when their convo came to an halt from msg tone from their phones..a msg from Meghna asking them to come in class)
Sar: chal (he stood up)
Nid: tum jao main apna khana khatam karke aaugi (this made sarthak shake his head n leave)
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[Vivaan Mehna in class]
(Vivaan enters the class n stood in front of meghna folding his hands)
Viv: yaha pe q bulaya hai?
(Meghna gave him a paper..a paper with interns name..
Sarthak.Yashvardhan.S
"Nidhi.Pratima.Suryavanshi" the last name caught his attention)
Viv: new intern woh b mid term mein? its so unethical..
Meg: Jab higher authority ko isse problem nahi hai then y do u mind..aur waise b that girl is good, not just a topper she got good remarks from her earlier institute..
Viv: yah i can see that daughter of "Pratima Suryavanshi" the politician right? aur woh aise mid term join kar rahe hai isse pata chal raha hai woh kitne responsible hai..
(all other intern join in except the new intern)
Nid: i m so so sorry i m late woh actually meri-(she start blabbering the sec she entered the class but ended up with a freezed mouth opened look the momemt she saw Dr vivan)
Viv: i was so right (he said to himself n stood in front of Nidhi) paach minute mein mujhe mere cabin mein aake milo n for god sake apna muh band karo (she closed her mouth n vivan left the room)
Meg: so guys this is our new intern plz make her feel comfortable (saying this she left n nidhi starts introducing herself to other interns one by one)
Nid: hi i m nidhi (she said to sarthak with extended hand n smile)
Sar: hi i m sarthak (they shook hands)
Nid: ahh sarthak..nice name..
Yam (thisks): yeh dono aise q behave kar rahe hai jaise ek dusre ko jaante hi nahi? (thats when nidhi stood in front of her)
Nid: so we meet again..i m nidhi (she extended her just to make yamini glare at her hand first n then frown at her face n she started to leave but not b4 Sarthak rushed n opened the door n got deadly glare from her in return)
(every1 left except Sarthak n Prateek.. Prateek who stood in front of him n was waiting him to say say something)
Sar: Kya?
Pra: tu kuch bolega nahi?
Sar: Mujhe kya bolna hai (confused)
Pra: yahi ke kaise Nidhi ko mid term admission mill gaya? woh apne dad ke paise aur power ka use kar rahe hai etc etc etc (Sarthak shakes his head)
Pra: by the way tere aur yamini ke beech mein kya chal raha hai?
Sar: mere aur yamini ke beechme? kuch..kuch b toh nahi..
Pra: seriously? pehle toh tum dono itna jhagda karte thea, phir time k saat notice kiya k woh teri kitne care karte hai..then Rose aur mera prank aur tune usko sabke saamne kitna insult kiya..
(Sarthak got a flashback..he was shouting at Yamini..
Sar: agar tum iss duniya ki aakhri ladki b hogi nah toh b main kabhi tumse pyaar nahi kar sakta..u know y? bcoz u dont deserve to b loved)
(Sarthak closed her eyes when he remember his harsh words to her..damn his emotionally complication ruin it all..he cant believe he said those words to her n that too in front of every1)
Par: lekin main dekh raha hu..jabse tum dono Vivan sir ke diye Dehradhun orphanage wale assignment se wapas aaye hona something has changed..
Sar: errr mujhe kuch important kaam hai main tujhse baadme baat karta hu..
(n he left, he left to meet yamini his preet..he have to make everything right between them)

OWWW!!

Originally posted by: Winds.of.Heaven

OWWW!!

DEHRADUN! Interesting...😉

So you added Vivan-Nidhi story as well. KaranIka fans will be very happy😆NICE!

Loved it!👍🏼

BTW, Prateek aur Rose ne kya prank kia tha?? I am curious...

Aur banao beechme se khayali pulao..sab kuch flashback mein hi dikhana padega..
their prank hmmm..
if any KaranIka fans read this fic then i'll add their scenes too..otherwise i'll wtite their scene when they r connected to SaaYa..there is no way i wanna imagine avni!!

is vivaan a vamppire as i am not able to get it

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Aur banao beechme se khayali pulao..sab kuch flashback mein hi dikhana padega..
their prank hmmm..
if any KaranIka fans read this fic then i'll add their scenes too..otherwise i'll wtite their scene when they r connected to SaaYa..there is no way i wanna imagine avni!!