Arjun-Draupadi OS: Passion Redefined

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello/Pranipaat!! Since, People wanted me writing a Hot piece of writing and I can't give on my Arjun-Draupadi FF, I thought of writing a OS on their Suhaag Raat and now I need comments!! Here you go!

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 11 years ago

I am totally *SPEECHLESS*❤️

I so adored the use of shudh hindi, Ajuna's naughtiness and of course such beautiful expression!

You write so beautifully and yet you tell me that you won't be good at it?😲

This was wonderful Yagya! Romance and passion is definitely your genre. Okay?

Stop doubting yourself. Now, coming back to the OS!

This was long (for once in your life)😛

But, it was superb, so full of passion and profound feelings😳

This made me blush SOOO much☺️☺️

P.S. - My hot updates are nothing in front of this and I love it dear!😃

I'm the first to reply🥳(Sorry, I know it's long)😭

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Sanjana_JA

@Sanjana_JA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yagya Maar daala,jalaa daala😳☺️!!!!

Hot hot,i need a cold shower now!!!!😳

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA
Yagya Maar daala,jalaa daala😳☺️!!!!
Hot hot,i need a cold shower now!!!!😳

I was all gone after writing this one!! I am still unable to control, Sanju!! Thanks a lot, dearie!!

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK
I am totally *SPEECHLESS*❤️
I so adored the use of shudh hindi, Ajuna's naughtiness and of course such beautiful expression!
You write so beautifully and yet you tell me that you won't be good at it?😲
This was wonderful Yagya! Romance and passion is definitely your genre. Okay?
Stop doubting yourself. Now, coming back to the OS!
This was long (for once in your life)😛
But, it was superb, so full of passion and profound feelings😳
This made me blush SOOO much☺️☺️
P.S. - My hot updates are nothing in front of this and I love it dear!😃
I'm the first to reply🥳(Sorry, I know it's long)😭

Heheh...Ab Hotness personified mera nick name yoon hi nahi aya, Navu!! I write long updates when my mood is compatible with the update given and I was singing a sensual song while writing this for the same reason!! Arre, tu bhi bohot achchi likhti hai, Navu!! Thank you so very much!!

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Bhagvan Devranijee u killed me 2day😳

I lovedmy devarjee and devranijee a lot🤗

Very nice update😉

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
Hey Bhagvan Devranijee u killed me 2day😳
I lovedmy devarjee and devranijee a lot🤗
Very nice update😉

Thanks a lot, Jethanijee!!! This was completely by requests!! Or else me writing a hot OS is something weird for everyone to accept!!

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow what a intense hot update Yagya...
really rocked it girl!!

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Wow what a intense hot update Yagya...
really rocked it girl!!

Thanks a lot, Mamta!! And I enjoyed writing something different!!

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Heheh...Ab Hotness personified mera nick name yoon hi nahi aya, Navu!! I write long updates when my mood is compatible with the update given and I was singing a sensual song while writing this for the same reason!! Arre, tu bhi bohot achchi likhti hai, Navu!! Thank you so very much!!

Bilkul tera nick name hoga!😆

You know I really want you to get lost while writing because I've realised it gives better updates since even I too get carried away while writing and I get a better result! Long updates from you are always pleasing😊

And your welcome dear but you really do deserve the appreciation!

(Sorry, mein CC ki conversation ka yahaa reply kar rahi hu! I get messed up you see!😳)