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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mala_TM

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Jiji!! WHAT AN UPDATE!!! You made me cry!!!! TOO AWESOME DEAR!!
It's heart wrenching!!!😭😭😭 I cant bear to see ParYa suffering like this!!!
Perfect song choice!!!!
Seriously no words to say!! Reading the update again!!!
Update soon!!

Thanks a lot, dear!! Didn't expect that you would like the song choice!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

It Was Soo Emotional Di, And The Song Was Well Chosen ! Loved It ! Keep Writing !!

Thanks a lot, dear!! Glad that you liked the song!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Please excuse me devranijee

I will come later😭

Waiting, Jethanijee!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzs200

emotional update 😭 luv the song u use super update πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks a lot, Ritz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

I can't comment Jiji 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I understand, Devika!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

Awesome ff..πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ especially ds update.. very emotional... u portray d inner feelings f every1 beautifully... especially yagya's emotions..πŸ₯± I cn sense d anger nd hr emotions n dese lines.. t not oly made arjun shocked..😲 even myself..

" If you remember, your brothers were also my husbands and I did love them, too! Then why are you the only one to claim rights on me, Arjun?"

Waiting fr ur next update.. πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š

Thanks a lot, Darling!!! Welcome to my FF!! Shall do soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 39:

Yagya was quiet throughout the journey. Subhi, with whom Yagya always went back home, couldn't even dare to come in front of her for she knew the mental turbulence of her mind would make her unstable. And she being a reminder of her past and one of the reasons of the pain in her love to her Aryaputra could only increase her pain. She silently went home, for it was only Kanha who was capable of restoring everything back to normal.

Paarth tried to confront Yagya many times but she acted as if he didn't exist. Not that it was the first time he was seeing this side of hers but it hurt him that reunion of their souls had to be delayed. Little did Yagya realize that it was not only her who was in such a deep pain of separation always but it was always more for the one of greatest warrior, the earth had ever witnessed.

His dreams had the shadows of her and as she faded in his dreams, Arjun had always woken up screaming. The silence which caused rift between them was truly a fault but where tears and eyes spoke heights, was there any need of words? But sometimes, tears failed him, utterly. So did they today. His tears were of no value to her, to the outside world but Yagya had shed twice the drops of blood from her heart than the tears shed by Arjun.

Again, a thought would strike them, ' Why are we doing this?'. The answer could only be, ' The offer of self-sacrifice to the never ending fire of love'. They knew the pain was intolerable for both and they wanted to cease that pain of their beloved's. The fire of love, if had shown them the way had also burnt them along the path.


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Paarth had reached home, with his heart wrenching to witness a huge conversation and giggling session happening. He was truly in no mood for all this and was about to leave the place silently when Sahdev said,

" See, Mata!! Bhratha Arjun our new Dulha is here!' in a teasing voice.

Arjun's world came crashing down all over again and was silently praying to his Madhav to give him some strength for the coming shock. He calmly said, controlling his inner storm,

" New Dulha? I am not interested in getting married so soon!"

" Arre! Tell the name to Devarji and he will be all in the mood to marry soon!" said Devika, in a voice of enthusiasm.

" I don't want to know the name, Mata!" said Arjun, feeling his anger rising.

" She is Subhi, your Madhav's sister! Still you won't change your decision?" asked Kunti teasingly as she didn't know what was coming next to her...

" I don't want to get married and that is final! And I don't want anyone to interfere in this as I think I can decide very well, myself!" said Arjun in voice ringing with confidence and anger.(Paarth bane Arnav Singh Raizada!😎)

" Mind your language, Arjun!" said Yudhishtir.

" Enough Bhratha, I can't take this decision of yours, no matter how much I respect or love you all! I already had witnessed the consequences of this! I want no more discussions on this matter! Good Night!" and Paarth took the stairs to go to his room.

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Yagya was greeted by Dhris on the door who was all anxious to see his sister getting late to home and no messages at all.

" Where were you, Yagya?"

" Freshers Party, Dhris!" replied Yagya in calm way.

" And Subhi was not accompanying you? Why?" said Dhris in a veru concerned way.

Yagya was on the very verge of crying as in her previous life Dhirs had lost his life while protecting his nephews. And even now he was showering her with so much of love and concern that she couldn't hold herself any more and immediately took Dhris in a bone-crushing hug.

Dhirs was shocked to see his dear sister whose will power can never be broken was now crying in his arms. He hugged her tight and decided not to question her any further as he knew something was very wrong and whoever was the cause of her pain was going to suffer in his hands. But little did he know that every pain to the cause of her pain would only increase it.

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At Night,

Chhoti chhoti baatein, yoon hi aate jaate
Yaadein sehla ke jaati hain
Raaton ko sirhaane, baasi muskaaneN
Mujhko sula ke jaati hain
Milna nahin hai mumkin, itna batao lekin
Hum phir mile kyun hain
Tujhko bula na paaun, tujhko bhula na paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain
Sab kuchh wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hain

The wait of 12 years just to see her beloved in her previous life had made her heart-wrenched and now a whole new life was again becoming a aahuti to their love, where the only remains of their love, would be ashes of their saga, which was ever-cherished but never realized.

Maine nahin jaana, tune nahin jaana
Jaane anjaane jo hua
Kuch toh hua jo, mujhko hua na
Tujhko magar kyun hua
Galti nahin hai teri, galti nahin hai meri
Phir bhi gile kyun hain
Tujhko bula na paaun, tujhko bhula na paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain
Sab kuch wahee hai, par kuch kamee hai
Teri aahatein nahi hain

Both knew it was not the other's mistake but complaints remain for the love is blind and makes us oblivious to the reality, wishing to be lost in love always. And when that need is not met, the pain covers us in its darkness never letting us feel the bliss of love until countered by pure and true love. Many tests of their love were taken by the destiny and this was yet another, in which they were bound to succeed.

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TBC
Is it the longest update I had ever written to this FF?
Hope you liked it!!
Please comment and like!!


Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay dear. To start with :
writing was very good
Emotions were well expressed
Song was well chosen
Yagya's emotions in particular were excellently expressed.

Loved this update a lot. Update soon!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's beautiful Yagya! even the song was perfect and Subhadra's silence much needed.
Loved the way you penned this down. The emotions were wonderfully expressed!😳
I loved this so much! Slap on mata kunti and yudi's face! (I hated Yudi for coming in between and saying ki maa ki agya ka paalan karna hoga😑)
" I don't want to get married and that is final! And I don't want anyone to interfere in this as I think I can decide very well, myself!" said Arjun in voice ringing with confidence and anger.(Paarth bane Arnav Singh Raizada!😎)
The bond shared by Yagya and Dhris is so pure and profound it brings tears to my eyes and the way you expressed it!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by 8520NK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Yagya!!!...best part was Paarth lashing Kunti and Yudi,like ASR!!!πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜†...they deserved it!!!!😈
Now time to overcome all pain and unite these eternal souls!!!😳

Edited by Sanjana_JA - 11 years ago

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