SANDHIR FF- I OWE YOU AGGARWAL...!! UPDATED ON 26TH NOVEMBER - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitra

Superb prologue plz pm me when ever u update ...




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Heeyyy janavi..!! 😳

Super exciting prologue
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Sorry for being late...!!! Hope you like it... Happy reading



I OWE YOU AGGARWAL PART 1







SANYU'S POV

God what's happening with me?? Ho kya raha hai mere saath... Pehle marriage problem and then family problem and now fite main survive kaise karna hai uski problem...!! And Haan how can I forget ?? Pyaar ki problem...!!! Sabke saamne confess kar ki I love him but woh Ek number ka egoistic jerk...!! Kaise flirt kar raha tha uss ladki ke saath...!! Main college main itne Dino Baad aayi huin aur woh hai ki uss ladki ke saath coffee pee raha tha...!! And upar se Ek aur naya syaapa...fees ka... Ab toh scholarship bhi nahi ho Rahi ... Karu toh kya karu..??



Sanyukta was pissed off her life...! So many challenges...!! She checked her phone whether she had got any message by her family but no...!! She took her bag and went to the admin counter...!! She was waking to the counter when her eyes went on the boy sitting in canteen with a girls hand in his hand...!!


She flared and nostrils and he looked at her and smirked...!! She ignored and him left from there full of anger...!!!! She reached the admin office and asked about the dead line of paying her fees...!!


S- excuse me sir...

A( the person of the admin office ) - yes... Ek second aap sanyukta aggarwal ho na??

S- yes sir... Sir mujhe actually puchna tha ki fees pay Karne ka last day kab hai...??


A- last day?? Last day nahi tumhe puchna chahiye ki dead line kya hai?? Tumhe Aaj hi fees pay Karni hai shaam tak...!!

S- kya?? But mujhe toh koi warning nahi aayi.. Then how come .??


A- sanyukta aapko message AAya hoga ..!! But I think sapne check nahi kiya...!! Now I would request you to pls go and pay your fees before it's late...!


Sanyukta leaves from there and goes to the library...!! She opens her laptop and starts searching for quick money jobs...! So that se can pay her fees...!! But she was not able to find anything...!! She hit her wrist on the table which made a loud sound...


L- snayukta aggarwal get out of the library ...!!

S- ma'am but...

L- get out...!


She picked her bag and left from their on the way she saw Vardhan sirs question... She rushed towards the board and took a chalk...! She was solving when she felt one more hand taking a chalk and dividing the board into two parts...! She smile to herself but remained a stiff position and acted as if she was ignoring him...


He started Doug the question and both of them finished at the same time... She turned to look at him but he left the place...!!! She ran after him and pulled him inside the store room...!!


R- what the hell aggarwal?? Let me go...!

And he pushed her and was about to go when she pushed him to the wall... She was damn angry...

S- what the hell do you think of your self?? Han?? Bloody egoistic jerk...!!
Don't you have any idea how kuch I have gone through?? Bass pyaar Karne ka natak karte the tum...!! Main aise hi Paglo ki tarah tumse unconditionally pyaar kar Baithi...!!

R- oh ... Poor Farzi..!! Aise hi mujhse pyaar kar Baithi...! Tch tch tch...!! Now let me take a leave...!! Or else you will suffer...!!


He pushed her and walked towards the door and was about to leave but stopped and turned towards her...!!

R- and Haan... Woh tum keh Rahi thi ki mujhe koi idea nahi hai ki tumahri life main kya Chal raha hai and how much you are suffering...!! Then let me make myself very clear..that I give a damn about your life...!!


He closed the door with a thud and sanyukta sat there shedding tears...!! She wiped her tears and went to her room and saw vidhushi sitting on her bed...!! Vidhushi looked at her condition... Kajal smudged and marks of tears...!! Her hair made shabbily...!!


Sanyukta went and sat down on her bed ...!! She held her head in her hand...!! She was lost in her thoughts when reality struck to her ..!!! She took out her bag and started to pack her bag...!!


Suddenly her phone beeped...!! She opened the message and saw that it was a message from the admin office that she has to vacate the room within two hours and full the forms...!!! She went to the mechanical lab...she saw a machine and went near it...!!! Tears were not stopping from her eyes...! She felt weak on her knees and fell down...!!

She didn't knew whether she will be able to come to college again or not...!! She was missing her parents and moreover she was missing randhir...!

She went to the corner and remembered her old days in the college...!! The time she spent with kaustu... Her best friend...! Who was always by her side ...!!

The time she spent with randhir... From hatred to love...!! Their fights ... End number of challenges...!! She remembered the time when the whole dream team worked tie best to win ...!!

She closed her eyes and was feeling her pain when she felt someone'a hand on her shoulder...!! Without looking she wrapped her arms around him...! He also wrapped her safely in his arm...


S- randhir yeh humari last hug hai...!! Kal se main tumhe irritate nahi karungi...!! Aur tum fir uss ladki saath bhi kabhi bhi flirt karna... Koi nahi hoga tumhe Rockne wala...!!


She cried and her tears wet his shirt...!! Randhir was trying hard to control to hold his tears...!! She separated herself from him and looked into his eyes...!!


She moved closer to him and stood in her toes and joined their heads...! She rubbed their nose and whispered..!!!

S- I love you...


They looked into each other's eyes...! She loved closer to his lips and latched them softly...! They were smooching each other softly... They were kissing each other with utmost tender love and care...


She sucked his lower lip...!! They were actually kissing each other like it was their last kiss...!! Like sanyukta was going to leave the college tomorrow...!!


They broke apart being short of breathe...!! They looked in others eyes...!! Sanyu distanced herself and wiped her tears...!!



" aggarwal... Mujhe toh laga ki tum ghar chodne ke Baad so called shaadi todne ke Baad strong ho gayi hogi...!! But no... Tum toh yaha lab main side main chup kar ro Rahi huin...tch tch... He smirked


" randhir if you can't help me then pls don't make more problems for me too...! Just get lost... She spat


" ohh..! I am not increasing your problems..!! Balki tum toh apni saari pareshaani mujhe kiss karke nikal li...!!


She cried hearing This and fell down...!! He was not able to take anymore and bent down...!!


R- okay I have an option for you... Usse tum apni fees bhi pay kar paogi...!! And he smirked

She looked at him ..!!! He was smirking...!! Damn this guy.. Main itni problem main huin aur yeh maze le raha hai...!!


" kya?? She asked tears in her eyes...Which broke his heart ...!!

He can't see her like this..!! He wants his strong sanyukta back...!! He again smirked and replied...


" 15 days...! I owe you for 15 days...! I can do anything with you...! I can ask you to make coffee food anything I want in the middle of the night too...!! Bolo manzur hai...??

" nahi...!! She spat

" Kyu?? Itna Acha offer hai ... Fees bhi pay ho Rahi hai... And mere saath time spend Karne ka mauka..!! Golden chance baby...!!


" I can't be your doll for 15 days..! Do whatever you tell to me...! Neither I want to act like a Slave to you...! To you no no..!! I don't want to act as a slave to anyone ...!!


"Arre tumhe slave nahi girlfriend banana hai...!! soch lo.. Thirty days tak meri girlfriend BANKAR rehna is just like a dream...!! And uppar se tumhare paas sirf 1/2 hour aur hai fees pay Karne ke liye... Ab tum choose Karo... Fees ya no fees???


" okay...!! Mujhe karna kya hoga..???


" just behave like my girlfriend...!! I have full rights on you...! I OWE YOU AGGARWAL...!! I can do anything with you... He smirked...


He turned around to leave and spoke...!!

" 10 min main tumhe message aa jayega...!! That your fees has been paid...!! And Haan tomorrow is day 1 of the challenge ...!!! Hope tum enjoy Karo ... And one more thing..! Now you are my girl.. Then you should do a little of makeover...!!


" sadu...!.!

" I heard that...!!! He told and left the lab...!!


Sanyu went to her room...!!! She received a message after 10 min that her fees has been paid...! She kept aside her bag...!! And lay down on her bed...! Thinking about the days upcoming in her life... Full of excitement...!!



So here I end...!! This part was based on all sanyukta but next part is day 1 ...!! So be ready and pls do leave ur reviews...! Thanks a lot guys for loving my work and me...!!




Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago

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