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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

awesome update !!!😳
please continue soon😛
thanks for pm...😊.

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oriyu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
<font color="#CC33CC">awesome update !!!😳
please continue soon😛
thanks for pm...😊.</font>

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Riya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Wow...

It was really amazing...

Hope zain finds all his answers in the diary...

Please update soon...

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Chapter 8B

1 Week Later...

He stood there...He stood there all numb...He stood there speechless.

He had failed just like last he failed, he wanted to scream he wanted to do nothing else, he wanted this to be a dream, She can't go, she just can't...He remembered her words:

Hum ek doosre se ladh jhaghad sakte hein, lekin bhaag nahi sakte...

Tum chaho toh bhi mein kahi nahi jane wali, esi hi tumhare ird girdh mandraty rahungi...

He had to find her, he needed answers, how can she just leave? She always leaves behind answers...she must have left some this time to...atleast some sentences which he had to 'Fill in the Blanks' for...

''She just said, she needs to return, someone needs her back home she said, we asked her but she took a promise from her, If you love me even at the amount of a rye, without asking further let me leave...I might return for someone, but right now someone else needs me more.'' Surraiya stated crying in Zain's arm...

''You need to find your love Zain, she loves you too it's just she's scared of expressing it once again, bring her back.'' Nafeesa ended putting her hand on Zain's shoulder.

He ran of to a place he remembered, that was Aliya's best secret sharing place, the little hut in the corner of her Mamu's garden...

Yes! Thats where he probably filled the first blank, Why did she leave?... Medical reports...Aliya Haider, pregnancy report Postive!

Oh no! It didn't hit him, it had to be, they were dated just of yesterday, and she left yesterday! Their child needed her more than him, but if she promised to return she would but she needed him the most now their child needed him...''Princess, The search is on!'' He said half smiling in between his tears.

5 months later...

She stood there...like always crying, convincing herself that he has no space in her life anymore, she dosent know him & she will not return because if she could break 2 promises what's wrong with one more...but whenever she thought that, she used to hear a voice...''Dad kab aayenge?'' She always broke in to sobs,she could feel her angel cry with her too...

But today it was different, probably the knock at the door helped her in keeping her promise...

Ek anjaan dastak aayeyi,

Par kisne jaana ki woh thi jaani,

Kya jaana kya dastak layei hai yeh jaani anjaani dastak...

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Part B complete! One more to go...likes and comments please,

~Princess

Edited by zayacrazy - 11 years ago

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

I know it is short, but the next one will be heavy, and I will update tht by Sunday, but yes Remember about the next Attempt i got as a result? Well tht attempt is on this Friday so if You pray and I pass I will Update a very heavy dose on Friday itself...SO PRAY!

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oriyu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Awesome dear...
Loved it...
Aliya left leaving zain alone...
I think instead of year u wrote month...
It was super duper fabolous...
Continue soon...
Sending pm right now

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya
Awesome dear...
Loved it...
Aliya left leaving zain alone...
I think instead of year u wrote month...
It was super duper fabolous...
Continue soon...
Sending pm right now

No it isnt yrs it is months,

She hasn't delivered yet,

It is 5 months,

The thing to look forward to is the knock,

So wait for it and do PRAY...

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oriyu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

No it isnt yrs it is months,
She hasn't delivered yet,
It is 5 months,
The thing to look forward to is the knock,
So wait for it and do PRAY...

oops sorry...
Fingers crossed