a swaron FF : It Was Always You PART 3 updated PG:17 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Preetirox

Finally you both thought of updating it!!

How impatient I was to read this!!

Coming to update I felt bad for sharon!

And swayam all broken cause simmi loves nil! But he's clueless that his friend is non other than sharon!! 😲

I'm loving the way the story is heading!!

Update soon!

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

*flashback*
Dumbo...you know uncle offered ME taani n
SIMMI
a job in his company...we r working there...
I really wanted to do something
Where papa won't help me...
Friend"

This is bit of a goof up i guess...because of Sjaron sent him this then Swayam must ne knowing that Simmi is someone else and Simmi and Sharom are two different persons!

Anyways I liked the update...the flashbacks were cute :)
I feel for Sharon...It must be hurting her so bad!
Swayam's mom is so cute :)
Update soon...this is cute :)
Chitra :)

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyy😉

sorryyy

im hell late na

was busy

sowwie

thanx for the pm dear.😃

i read it when u pmed me,

but late cmt sorry for that

not only because of busy,

i couldn't able to cmt after reading this

what the hell was that😡

im sooo sad by the update😡

my swayam and sharon both are sad😭

arggg😡

im hell angry with u both

plz do me a favour

dont pm me if the update is emotional😭

no!! no!! no!!

im kidding😆

do pm me,otherwise i will kill u both

mind it😡

about the update

no need to say yaar

as always beautiful

i loved ti

but emotional one😭

plz make swayam understand everything

he is world class buddhu😆

she gave him clue

but he as always buddhu...😆

the whole mail part was sweet

swayam's mom was great

she is funny😆

both swayam and sharon are broken😭

i hope everything will be okk soon😃

soo

update soon

im waiting

love u both

keechu😃

Originally posted by: ujwalv

update..

curious to knw wat next😊

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

comment from rosy

read your update

it was very nyc chapter

there was gud developmenys in the chp which was quot interesting

specially with the flashbacks where you guys did a very gud job

i dont know who has written this update

whoever has written it

dat person did a very nyc job i must say

particularly with the flash backs you had given some part of the history

like very emotional stuffs

sharon teasing swayam which was very nyc thing

there was another quotient where he will say he would recognise her as soon as he sees her

but the pinches sharon somewhere

dat got us see 2 povs where sharon is completely heart broken

she feels sad and also bad where he cant recognize her

and the opposite thing is happening with swayam

he thinks its simmi because she is extrovert

so its a very gud contrast dat u guys ve put up

there was small emotional scene between swayam and his mom

where she request swayam dat she will not let him go back to london

which was very nyc scene

istead of giving a hard core emotional stuff giving a light scene just to show a bond bw a mother and son was very nyc brilliantly written

next comes the thing which actually was very sad to read

sharon sees swayam being happy on hearing dat simmi will also accompany them in the office

she felt dat swayam likes simmi it was pinching to read

coz poor sharon has to face the thing

watever the trust she had on him was shattered into pieces

and now she has to collect those pieces lay them out and see how the things are going to work out

apart from the whole chp m very excited now if they mail eachother

der will be a part where swayam will be excited and sharon will be completely broken

wanna read the next chapter

lets see how ua gonna shape the next chapter

rosy

lovely swaron akwerdness is reduced.. swayam will surely think about the mail sender again hope he realise that it is sharon update soon thanks 4 d pm

Nice update

this was an awesome update
totally swaronish
buddhu swayam how many clue u want ??
to knew d truth stupid
update soon

Lovely update
The awkwardness has gone
Now want the truth to be revealed