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Very nice story, brilliant writing. Its vry nice 2 c vivek n tasha aftr long. Freddy sir, vivek n tasha- thy r in mission widout any senior & proving tht thy r no less thn thr seniors. Kuddos
Plz updt soon.
Plz pm me.

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Very nice story, brilliant writing. Its vry nice 2 c vivek n tasha aftr long. Freddy sir, vivek n tasha- thy r in mission widout any senior & proving tht thy r no less thn thr seniors. Kuddos
Plz updt soon.
Plz pm me.

Story:

The second part..

U may not like the last scene..so sorry in advance...

EIGHTEENTH SCENE

Next day Vivek and Freddy was present in the bar showing themselves busy with drinks but looking around alert..

They noticed Madhav Singh coming in...vivek's grip on the glass grew strong Freddy kept a hand over vivek's hand...

Madhav Singh sat on a nearby table and ordered for drink...

Vivek whispered "sir hume jake usse sab ugal lena cahiye.."

"nahi Vivek abhie nahi...aab wo kuch uglega nahi aur yaha hum apne tarike ka istemal kr nahi sakte..yah Mumbai nahi hey..hume ise police station le jana hoga aur fir jo baat tum Rathode se chupana cahte ho wo to khul jayegi hi saath mey yeah log chaukanne bhi ho jayenge..ise nikalne dey yeahi se..bahar ayega to tab dabochenge.."

They were waiting when Freddy's cell rang. It was Rathode..Freddy didn't pick it up but it continued ringing..so Freddy thought if he was to give some information..so he moved out cautiously with the phone..

Here Madhav Singh also receives some call and paid the bill in hurry and moved out..Vivek followed him hurriedly...and from backside pointed the gun on him with "Madhav Singh vagne ki koshish mat karo warna sare goli chala dunga.."

He turned...looks at the gun... "tum..tum kaun.."

"CID..Mumbai.."

"Mumbai...CID" Madhav Singh looks around...Freddy comes up and grabbed him with "arey yeahi woha kisi dhund raha hey.."

Madhav Singh in a bit tensed voice "kch nahi kr payoge tumlog mera..tum nahi jante kiska haath hey mere.."

Vivek touches the gun barrel on his temple "wohi to janna hey...kaun hey tere piche..."

"yeah banduk se mey mey nahi darne wala..tum.."

Vivek opens the safety latch... "mein darta nahi hu...mein.."

Vivek smirks and touches the gun again..

"batata hu..batata hu.."

Freddy roared "batah jalddi..aab kya muhrat nikalu.."

"yeah banduk to hata.."

"yeyyy.." Vivek pretended that he is about to shoot.

"iss sab ke piche.." and a gunshot a bike moved way in speed...

The bullet has passed directly through the skull... spot death..

Freddy informed Rathode..he had to...

Rathode didn't seemed to be shocked or tensed with question how did they knew about each and every plan of Vivek and Freddy...

Vivek's doubt got stronger with his attitude..

But before Vivek can confront him Rathode was called to Delhi HQ for some case...

After all the needful Freddy informed Rajat all the happenings

"Freddy ek kaam karo Madhav Singh ki jo phone mili hey uski record nikalo...aur har number ko trace karo..."

Vivek was checking the details he sees two numbers most frequently calling Madhav Singh...

They took out all the information about those number, one number was an international one but its currently switched off... the other one was registered under fake id and the location showing is very much near the house they have visited earlier

Vivek excitedly told " sir ho na ho yeahi yoginder ka number hoga.."

Freddy nodded.. " hume yeahi raid kerna cahaiye..."

And they both got ready to face things

NINETEENTH SCENE

Yoginder is seen speaking with someone one on phone that he had to immediately send the girls to Dubai..and for now send them out of town

Yoginder after cutting the call murmurs "bhaiji ko bhau ne hi marawaya sayed..per...nahi humare dhande mey dimaag lagana hey serf..dil se kaam nahi lena hey.."

He moved to the room where the girls are kept..

He found all the girls panicking..the girl who earlier had already detoriated in health is now in severe condition...

He checked the girl and found her on the verge of getting unconscious...

He murmured " aab kya kare..bhau ko call kerte hey.."

He moved out..

20TH SCENE

Vivek and Freddy are still keeping a check on the two numbers while moving to the location and found the international number had turned on..but strangely its location is in Delhi! "Sir Delhi my international number..."

Freddy nodded "ha Vivek baaki to Yoginder haath lagne ki baad hi pata chalega.."

They soon reached their destination and came out...

Freddy after looking around said "Vivek hume chup ke pehle dekhna hoga ki wo.."

But he stopped listening to a sound of a car..they both hid beside a nearby wall.

A big matador came to halt and the driver and another person came out of the car while speaking on phone..

The driver knocks at the door of the hose where they had traced Yoginder 's location.

A man came out of the house and after having some words with the driver moves back in the house..

Vivek whispers "sir kahi yeah log firse location change to nahi ker rahe hey?"

Freddy shrugged.. they both cannot hear a single word due to distance..

Then the other man who had accompanied the driver ended the phone call and moved in the house..after some moments the man bring all the girls with their hands tied at gun point towards the matador and Yoginder follows carrying a nearly unconscious girl..

Tasha was there among the tied girls..

It was enough for Vivek he shots aiming at the man's hand holding the gun..

The man shouted n pain as the gun flew away..

Tasha looked around she found Vivek and they signaled each other..

Yoginder held the girl in one hand and pulled out his gun..the driver too became ready with gun..

Tasha took all the girls behind the matador and made them all sat down to avoid injury..

The injured man was about to flee when Freddy shoot at his leg..

Freddy and Vivek taking shelter behind the wall started shooting these two also took positions..

Tasha was busy in untying the knots with the help of her teeth..most of the young girls are frightened too their wits Tasha at last succeeded n opening up the knots.. she opened all the girls and said "beta aap log ruko abhie ati hu mein.."

She slinked near the gun fallen from the injured man and after picking it moved to the girls "chalo aap log."

She was about to move with the girls when she heard "aye..sari banduk niche.."

She immediately pushed the gun at the back of her jeans and then turned to see the scenario..

Yoginder has placed his gun barrel at the temple of that semiconscious girl and asking Vivek and Freddy to put down the gun..

He hadn't noticed that Tasha to have a gun so ordered "yey sari larkio ko leke gari mey baith..(turned to the driver with) Munna gari start ker.."

The girls were literally shivering. Tasha moved towards the matador.. the driver entered the driving seat and Yoginder looking towards Vivek and Freddy was taking back steps..

Tasha pulled out the gun and touched it on the back side of Yoginder's head..

"bachi ko utar do...aur gun mere hawale.."

She pulled the gun out of his hand and signaled one of the girls to come forward and take away the girl..

Vivek and Freddy had also picked up their guns and Freddy had moved to the driver.. and pulled him out..

Vivek took over Yoginder and Tasha took the girl

Local police and ambulance were called and the girls and Tasha and the injured man were taken to hospital and Yoginder and Munna to police station.

Tasha tto joined them after basic check up "kuch bataya usne kaun hy iss gang ke piche?"

Freddy nodded in no "uska kehna hey usn kabhie cehra nahi dkha ska..do numbr hey jism phone kerke contact hona hota hey.."

Vivk shared his dobts about Rathode "mujhe to lagta hey koi connection hey unka iss sab ke saath..warna job hi plan hum unke saath baithk banate they wo inn taq pahuch kaise jati thi?"

Freddy nods with "ha mein tumhari baat samah to raha hu per wo ek senior inspector hey..hum rank ki hisaab s junior hey nse..hum.."

Vivek cut him with "to asehi jane dey.."

Tasha was silent for a while thn says "ager hum koi chara dale to?"

Both vivek and freddy looked at her in confusion.. she smiled "vvek phone do.."

"haa..'

"phone"

Vivek handed over his phone..

She rings up CID mmbai..

"hello sir mein tash bol rahi hu.."

'haan mein bilkul thik hu..aur wo dono bhi..sir ek help caiye.."

And she explains her plan..at which rajat agres..

She then explains the matter to vivk and freddy.. who really praises her at heart nd agrees..

21^ST SCENE

Vivek Freddy and Tasha was seating at the lounge of rathode's home..when Freddy's phone rang.. he said to others "Rathode.."

Tasha nodded "sir yaad hey na.."

Freddy nodded and received the cal with an urgent ton as "tum achuke ho kya bapas?"

"ha..kiu kya baat hey?"

"baat serious hy..tm abhie gher ajao.."

"per baat.."

"phone pey sari baat nahi ho pati na.."

And cut the call...within half an hour the door bell rang.. Tasha moved n a room inside and Vivek opnd the door..

"Fredrick baat kya hey aise.."

"Madhav Singh humare haath lag gaya tha..per.."

Sweats appeared on his forehead.. "p..per?"

Freddy was looking at him continuously "kuch kehne se pehle hi kisin se maar diya.."

A relief expression came over rathod's face but he soon covered it with "oh no..yeah to bahut bura hua..fir Tasha ki bareme..to.."

Vivek started as "nahi sir hume bahut acha clue mila hey.."

"clue?"

"ha..ek international number..jo pehle Delhi mey on tha aur aab yeahi Ahmadabad mey..sir kitni ajeb baat hey na aap Delhi mey they to number bhi Delhi mey ar aab aap.."

"kehnakya cahte ho tum..?"

Freddy answered "aab uss international number ka location address pata hy tm?"

Rathode looked at Freddy who continued "iss gher ka address..'

yeah nahi ho sakta..'

"per yeah hua hey.."

"it's nt possible..'

Vivek answered in a teasing tone "aap cahe to hum aapko sabot dikha sakte hey..'

"arey kuch bhi dikhao..it's nt possible"

"pr kiu..aisa bhi to ho sakta hey ki koi tumh fasane ke liye..'

"nahi..tum uss phone ka location aab pata ker hi nahi sakte.."

"arey aisa kiu.."

"kiuki wo phone mein pichle 24 ghante se off kerke rakha hey.."

He stopped abruptly... Vivek and Freddy smiled it took a minute to Rathode to grasp the situation...then a smirk appeared over his face

"tum dono jan ke bhi kya ker loge?meine koi official statement to nahi diya..meine kuch kaha kya?(he teased) tch tch.. sub inspector hoke senior inspector pey arop lagoage to kaun sunega?isse behtar iss baat ko dafna do..Tasha tmhe wapas mil jayegi..use sahi salamat wapas pane ke khushi ke saath mumba lat jao.."

The lounge has two room doors one in which Tasha had entered and one other..

The other door flung open and Rajat came out followed by ACP Vikrant , Ahmadabad CID ACP

Rajat smiled "per tumhare ACP aur ek senior inspector to..waise let me introduce.. mein senior inspector Rajat CID Mumbai.."

Rathode was looking at ACP vikrant continuously..his eyes is having no fear but some teasing questions..

ACP vikrant cleared his throat with "Rathode..tumhe abhie ke abhi supend kiya jata hey aur tumpey inquiry hogi..fir uss hisab se sajah..u should feel shame on you (h turned to Rajat) thank you officer (to Freddy and Vivek) aap dono ne bhi bahut bara kaam kiya..thank you..aab hume apna farz ada kerna hey..unn larkio ka bhi pata lagana hey..but now you all don't worry I will myself see to the matter..aap log nischint rahiye..thank you.."

He ordered "chalo Rathode.."

He was abot to move when Rajat teased jarahe hey ACP Vikrant?per abhie to humara dil nahi ker raha hy aapko jane dene ki"

Both turned.. Rajat smiled "Yoginder ne do number bataya tha..ek to Rathode ka hey samajh agaya..dusra kaun.."

ACP vikrant managed "hum hum jaldi hi pata laga lenge.."

Freddy nodded "per hum pata laga chke hey.."

ACP looked at him with a jerk Freddy continued "humare ACP sir kehte hey jab bhi koi criminal over confidence mey ajata hey tab bahut garbar ho jata hey..aur yeahi bhi aisa hi hua...aap ne kya kiya galti se aapni actuall number se Rathode ki uss international numbr pey call ker diya..baat nahi kiye..ek ring hn k bad aapko sayed yaad agaya hoga..to phone kat diya apne..per..number to agaya.."

Vivek made a sorrow face "arey yaad ana hi tha..to ring hon se pehle ata.."

ACP Vikrant's face had already turned white "tum log..yeah..yeah.."

Rajat stopped him "arey ghabrao mat..HQ sab jan chuke hey tumhe ab koi bahana sochn ki jarurat nahi.."

Tasha opened the door and came out with two HQ agents

ACP vikrant looked at them and sighed..

Freddy looked at Rathode "mujhe sharam arahi hey ki tumse meine dosti ki thi.."

"huh...imandar ho na tum..Aj taq mila promotion...aur mujhe dkho..arey yeah kal ka aya hua Rajat tumse senior hey...aur mein yeahi ka second in command tha..saath mey itna kama chka hu ki aj ager mein nabhi rahu to mere bache jo best boarding mey rehke parte hey wo ayesh ki jindegi bita payenge..tum Mumbai CID walo sab imandari ki misail bante firte ho..kisi ke paas itna paisa nahi.."

Vivek replied "per sakun hey..raat ko chain se sote hey.."

"Acha? Tm logo ka ACP n iss kanun ke chalt apne bte ko goli mar di..chain se sota hey wo?"

Freddy replied in a confident tone "haan..kiuki unhe dukh ho sakta hey pr unhe pata hy unhe koi naafraat nahi kerega..aur tmhe to kal sayed tumhare hi bache..(he laughs) aur rahi baat promotion ki to meri promotion na sahi pr puri jindegi apna yeah chota sa post hi garv se bol to paunga..tum to kahoge k suspended senior inspector hey na?"

The HQ people carry them out..

22^nd SCENE

Fulwa and her father are standing out of the main gate... the trio and Rajat came out... Fulwa smiled seeing Tasha... who paatted her cheks "thik ho tum aab?"

"Ha didi...aap?"

"mein bhi thik hu.."

"aap logo ko mein kaise sukriya.." her father started..

Freddy stopped him with "humne jo kiya humara farz tha...aap log bas yeah kijiye ki aise kisi ki bhi saath apne bacho ko vej mat dijiye.."

Rajat nodded "hum jante hey aap logo ko paise ke jarurat hey...per paisa aapki bachi se to jaruri nahi na..."

Her father nodded "ha sahib agey se aise koi bhi galti nahi hoga .."

Fulwa looked at Tasha "didi aap Yamuna mausi ko sajah jarur dena..unhone.."

Tasha patted her head "beta aap ko agey barna hey..yeah kuch din vul payoge tabhie agey baroge..aur khub parna...tai agy koi kabhie aapko.."

Fulwa nodded "ha didi..min khub parungi..mujhe aapki tarah banna hey.."

Trio smiled.. Rajat said "ha jarur banna..per serf kanun ki ijjat kerne e liye..uss Rathode ki tarah nahi.."

They after bidding bye to them moved to Mumbai...

They entered the bureau.. Abhijeet is pacing up and down and Daya is standing in a corner with a tensed face.. Sachin's face is telling that these two had already taken his class.. other juniors are also standing with downhead when these four enter..

Sachin nearly shouted "agaye..."

Al looked up and a smile cam over all the faces..

Abhijeet came forward and scanned four of them "ho gaya.."

Rajat smiled "je sir.."

"haso mat..hum HQ se pata chal raha hey ki humare officer Ahmadabad CID ki corruption ko sahi kerne mey lage hey..aur yeah dono (pointing to Vivek and Freddy) koi official help hi nahi sidha tapak pare udher..

A smile made its way to all the places.. but soon stopped with the fiery glance...

Freddy looked down "wo.. meine socha Rathode..wo.."

"kash thora kam sochte..ager use Delhi nahi bulaya jata to..yeah Madhav Singh ata pakar mey?"

Vivek said "per sir ato gaya.."

Abhijeet sighed "aur aap to pure khule raste mey action pey agaye..shaq tha ki Rathode hy iss sab ke piche per nahi..stunt king jo thehre.."

Again he heard some giggling.. he was about to shoot his fiery glance once again when Daya interrupted "arey boss choro na..bacho ko kiu daant te ho.. ar waise bhi case to solve ho gaya aur Tasha bhi thik.."

Freddy nodded "ha wohi to.."

"Freddy..."

Freddy stopped..

Abhijeet shook his head "ha sab thik ho gaya per mein daant isliye raha hu ki take agey yeah galtiya na ho...waise Freddy bhabi ji se baat kerni hogi.."

"je sir.."

"hmm..bhai tumhara dimaag mey itna plans arahe hey..."

Now everyone broke in laughter

Rajat interrupted "..waise sir sorry.."

Abhijeet patted his shoulder "arey nahi Rajat...I'm proud of u all bas mein to galti isliye keh raha tha ki agey bhi tum log asehi..or else I'm really proud of u all..specially Tasha.. kaise ho tum.."

Tasha sighed "to yaad aya aapko puchne ki?" she pouted..

Then smiled "thik hu..Vivek aur Freddy sir bilkul waqt pey agaye.."

Abhijeet turned to them but they were very much engrossed in their LARAI about god knows what...

guys my first ever investigative try pls let me know all the loopholes taaki agey thik thak ho... u all r seniors na...

Beautiful ending, totly action packd 😃
luvd it 😃
plz do wrt more story.
Thnx 4 pm.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

KRITTIKA, Very Lovely Story...😳👏
I liked that U worked on Every Minute Detail...👏👏
TASHA Updating the Team and giving them Details about Specific things are Awesome...⭐️⭐️

What a Lovely Portraying of a True Security Officer...👏👏
Excellent moment where TASHA telling All about the Culprits...👏
I really really Loved it...😳
Only One Confusion, did TASHA using Blue tooth...?😕😕
cz if Culprits grabbed Her during Talking...
They must first snatched the Cell, Put Off it immediately and then doing further either in this Chapter U told that TASHA during Fight regularly updated about the Culprits...
plz Clear it, might be I missed Something...😕😕

the man talking in presence of Girls although knew about inclusion of a CID Officer was little Unacceptable as might be TASHA having any Bug or they must keep in mind this...😉😉
TASHA Idea about Nail Carving was Nice...👏
I loved VIVEK take Snap of MADHAV SINGH Sketch...👏
RAJAT call is also Nice...👍🏼
the Flick of Doubt in Both COPS minds is really Fantastic...⭐️👏

Somehow I m Surprised that after have Doubt on RATHORE...😲
VIVEK Threatened MADHAV at Open Area...
Ok, Attempting Direct Murder is Little Beyond Thinking for CID Cops but they Must aware that May be RATHORE Use any SPY behind Them...
VIVEK Direct approach was also Weird as TASHA and Girls Still in Their hands and Till Now CID Team did not get any Clue about them...

ACP Ahmedabad was a Big Surprise for Me as a Culprit...👏👏
BTW, the Number Dialing Idea was not much Convincing for ME... (ahannn😉😆)...
The Confession against Some main seniors looking really Good...👏👏
Seniors Concern about the Juniors and some Cute Daant to VIVEK and FREDDIE Sir really gives Glow in Ur Story...😳👏👏
Thank You so very much Baccha...👏😳👏

nice query... actually I thought it as the goon is trying to snatch the mobile and Tasha struggling not to give it so in between she is speaking out...and at last the man snatched the phone roaring with that chup..

I don't know if its satisfactory...yeah I admit this is a loophole...per aapki bachi ki pehli full fledged investigative ek galti to maaf ho hi sakti hey na boss?

aur baaki quo ka answer to mujhe bhi nahi pata... sochti hu...
aur thnk u very much...

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

nice query... actually I thought it as the goon is trying to snatch the mobile and Tasha struggling not to give it so in between she is speaking out...and at last the man snatched the phone roaring with that chup..

I don't know if its satisfactory...yeah I admit this is a loophole...per aapki bachi ki pehli full fledged investigative ek galti to maaf ho hi sakti hey na boss?

aur baaki quo ka answer to mujhe bhi nahi pata... sochti hu...
aur thnk u very much...

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Krittika after GD's long review I don't have much to say except I really liked it. It was something new and innovative and I loved how you showed Tasha in a strong light and not as a weak cop who can only fight women. 👏