Veer: This is all about respect & ties of the heart

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Veer: This is all about respect & ties of the heart
(In response to Vinnie's Poem 2)

Pakhi dear, this is all about respect
and bonding of the heart
You say there is not even a teeny bit of space
between Anshuman, Ayaan and you in your heart
So dear, it is time for me to depart

If I am just a certificate and ink for you
Then separate I must from you
Certificates and ink are not ties of the heart
It is the heart that truly binds families in bonds that do not tear apart

Yes, I will continue to raise Ayaan as my son
Just as I raised Rhea without being around her in person
My promise I will keep
I will not let Ayaan weep

You did insult my Jiji, Pakhi dear
For that is no way to treat a guest, is that clear?
You invited her for a special stay
Just to break her heart and send her away

Then you rave and rant
about how dirty I am
Without a clue
that my thoughts really are true

You say you need me and so does Ayaan
But there is no space for me here so I better be gone

It is best I leave you and Ayaan with Anshuman your dearest
And go about my ways while keeping Ayaan's interests
A father's loss he will never express
For my arms will be ever around him in a caress

If ever your heart strings beat for me wild and true
Then, before you know it I will be with you!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vinnie good one!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anonee

Veer: This is all about respect & ties of the heart

(In response to Vinnie's Poem 2)

Pakhi dear, this is all about respect
and bonding of the heart
You say there is not even a teeny bit of space
between Anshuman, Ayaan and you in your heart
So dear, it is time for me to depart

If I am just a certificate and ink for you
Then separate I must from you
Certificates and ink are not ties of the heart
It is the heart that truly binds families in bonds that do not tear apart

Yes, I will continue to raise Ayaan as my son
Just as I raised Rhea without being around her in person
My promise I will keep
I will not let Ayaan weep

You did insult my Jiji, Pakhi dear
For that is no way to treat a guest, is that clear?
You invited her for a special stay
Just to break her heart and send her away

Then you rave and rant
about how dirty I am
Without a clue
that my thoughts really are true

You say you need me and so does Ayaan
But there is no space for me here so I better be gone

It is best I leave you and Ayaan with Anshuman your dearest
And go about my ways while keeping Ayaan's interests
A father's loss he will never express
For my arms will be ever around him in a caress

If ever your heart strings beat for me wild and true
Then, before you know it I will be with you!



Anonee

you have expressed Veer's sentiments soo beautifully.

However this show ends Veer will always have my respect for being strong enough to be able to show his weaknesses, being comfortable in himself enough not to be threatened by what others thought, loving, respecting and taking care of those that are not his own, not allowing others to disrespect him without consequences.
Edited by payal7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Poem , bravo.!!!!! ... and I will respond momentarily... I love this so much fun!!!...
I guess we can console ourselves with these until the show is done!!!

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