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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part

Maan's mom is so sweet and understanding ... her son's love for geet...

So, now maan knows geet's truth...

waiting for precap 😲

thnx for pm sweets
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ... Maan has full trust on his love to win her.
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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 7


Mother knows child best. Sakshi already aware of Maan's decision and determined to get Geet for him at any cost. She went to Aasha and convience her for Maaneet's marriage. Though it wasn't easy but she make sure that Asha cant escape her proposal.

'whatever you said is right. Even i have only fear what about her after me? But you know...' Sakshi wont eve allow her to complete. She doesn't want her to deny her.


'Asha now you are her mother. So its your responsibility to convience her for her betterment. I am sure tum samjhaogi to wo jaroor ha karegi. Aasha wont you want her to see happy again. She to deserve a chance to live life again. Not just carrying her breaths.' Now Asha wont have any words to argue.

'ok i wont promise but i definately try my level best to convience her.' though her ans is not satisfactory but Sakshi has a hope now.

In office Maan behave complete proffesional as he promised her. After both left the office in evening Maan went behind her. He wants to talk with her. Both reached to her place. As she come out Maan catch her. He clampsed her wrist. 'Geet we need to talk.' he told her.



Geet shuddred as she know what imprtant talk he have. She knew he will try to convience her. 'sir i already told you my decision and you promised me that we dont started this again' she said codly.


'i agree. But i promised for office only thats why today i came here at your home. Geet atleast listen to me.' Maan pulled her to him softly. Both glance in each other's eyes. 'Geet just listen to me calmly pls. I know y u denied my proposal i knew each and everything related to your past.'


As he revealed Geet's body violated badly. Her hands trun cold and body freezed. She casually wont like talking about her past and today a stranger deliberately telling her that he knew everythhing. She staring him with her paniced eyes. Maan pull her more closer. He knew she shuddred and need wamth of loved one. Though she wont gave any right to him bu his love for her encouraged him. He palmed her white cheek. 'Geet you r not weak. So pls stop running from yourself. Whatever Aunt told to my mother about you,it clearly shows how much courageous you are and have a will to live,then why this much hesitation for living a life when i wanna make you my life? Geet may be you dont need anyone in your life but i need you. Why dont you give cance to both of us?' Maan put his proposal again. His heart beating very faster. She can feels that.


Geet turn numb for a while wont understand what he wants excatly and what she wants exactly. Her horrible past still haunted her. 'please leave me and let me go.' she pleads but Maan not leaving her. 'kyu kar rae hai aap ye sab? I had nothing to gave you. Neither my love nor my hatered. I am a dead soul just carrying my life. Please dont spoil your life for me.'


'who said i am spoiling my life? And i want your love and hate? Geet i only need your company. A partner who is sensible and matured. And both qualities are in you. And second thing like days all men are not same. You r not dead you have a will to live thats why you ran to your massi. Geet when all are against you,you ran to your massi. You know why? Because you know she wont let u down. This is called trust. I know whatever had happened with you is not right but why you punishing yourself for other's sin. Geet aaj main tumhari ha leke ki jaunga. I will wait for you here only,till you make up your mind.' Maan leave her and walked to the other side of road.


Geet was so disturb so she ran inside furiously. At dinner she was lost in his word. Asha told her about Sakshi's visit and explain her everything. She tried to convience her. 'see beta i am not forcing you but its a truth that you need someone who cares for you till the end of life. Geet Maan is a very good human being.'


'Yash k time b papa ne yai sab kaha tha.' Geet had a reason of fear. Aftrewards Asha wont said anything. Geet went to her room and think about his proposal and her massi's words. She was disturbed more than ever again her past clutching her thought and paniced her towards future. Geet laid and slept soon.

In mid night window's dapmed strongly against its frame. Wind was very cold can frozed anyone. Geet's sleep broke and she moved to shut it properly. Night was dark but street lights r on. Child wind blowed furiously and frozed her face in a sec. She shut it but after reaching to its bed her step pulled her back again. She opened the window and glance downwards. Maan still standing there. She feels pain. The cold outside enought to froze anyone and he without any warmer and having his meal stands there from hours in hope of her yes. Unwillingly her feet took her to him. She took jacket with her and covered his frozed body. His hands and body aching badly but lips smiled seeing here there for him...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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PART - 8



'Please sir dont do this and go back home. You cant force me like this.' Geet feld bad seeing him in trouble.


'then Geet go back and sleep. I am ok here.' Maan was not ready to leave the place.


Both are arguing when some ruffins came there. They want to robbed them. Showing knief their leader demands whatever they had. For her safty sake he gave evrything. If he was alone he can teach them better but he afraid she may hurt if he reply in his way. After robbing him they moved to her. They want the golden chain she weared in her neck. But Geet denied giving as it was of her mother. Her last memory she had. One of them having a knief on his neck and other were forcing but Geet again fighting. When she wont gave it easily,goon raise his knief to stabbed her. But before he push it in her stomach it struck an inch away. Maan kicked off the goon holding him and hold the knief before it cause harm to Geet. Her eyes opened wide. His blood is oozing but he not ready to leave the sharp edge of knief. Maan kicked him and he too fall far away. Both attacked on him but Maan better replied them noe. Soon police arrived there and both ran away for their lives. They are on petrolling. Maan told them everything and they went behind them.


Geet hold Maan's hand. He was weltering in pain. She asked him to get inside but he still struck on his condition. 'Please sir zidd mat kariye. Ye baate baad me bhi ho sakti.' Geet pleads and her eyes filled with tears.


Maan doesnt want this so he went with her. Geet quickly brough first aid box. Her aunt wake up too. She too horrified seeing the cut mark. 'Maan ye kaise lagi?' She asked and he look at Geet. She told her everything. 'Maan please bete zidd mat karo.' She trying to convienece her.


Geet cleaned his wound and put ointment and then wrapped bandage around. 'Maan sakshi ko pata hai ki tum yaha ho?' She asked.


'nahi.' he told her.


'have you any idea how she feels when she saw this wound?' She scold him. 'raat bahut ho gai hai or tume chot b lagi hai. So better you slept here.' she commands her while giving a tarmeric mixed milk to him. Maan gulped and she showed room where he can rest for a night. All moved to their room. Soon Geet went to Maan's room. He was sleeping calmly. Geet covered him properly and checked weather all windows are closed or not. She turned off the lights and come out. Geet was again in turmoil. Whatever had happened tonight shaked her again. Next day before her awake Maan left the house with a note near her pillow.

"Geet i wont have any intentions to force you or hurt you. But can't you give a chance to both of us as you give your destiney and came here in Canada to save your life.
Waiting for your reply and thanx for the duvet."


Note ends and she come out of her bed. Geet opened the window and allowed the fresh air coming inside. She was blank and scanning outside. Last night memorried frsh n up again how he protects her. Her aunt came to her.

'kya socha beta firr?' she asked again.

'massi i am blank. Pehli baar kisi ne mujhpe aai mussebat apne pe li hai. Mujhe protect kiya hai. Papa or yash k hote hue b mujhe kabhi safty mehsus nahi hui. Papa step mom k aage kabi meri shield nahi bane or Yash ne to shadi k har vachan ko toda. Protect karna to durr wo to khud hi meri jaan ka dushman bann gaya. Last night Maan injured himself for my sake. Massi i dont know wo kaisa life partner hoga. Coz shadi se pehle Yash b bahut achha tha caring tha. Wo b bahut sweetly talk karta tha. Massi i am scared now.' Geet rested her head on her shoulder and poured out her feelings.

Aasha stroked her back softly. 'beta par har insan ek jaisa nahi hota na. Khud ko ek muka to de.'


'pata nahi massi. Main apne past se kabi bahar aa paungi ya nahi. I dont wanna spoil his life.' she revealed.


'dekh Maan or Sakshi ko tere bare me sab pata even teri halat bhi. Firr bhi Maan razi hua hai to kuchh soch kar hi na.' She trying to assured her.


There was a pin drop silent in the room. Only wind coming through the loops of curtains make noise.


Ashsa called Sakshi and told her that Geet agreed for this marriage but on a condition. She dont want any noise and grand scale drama. Maan and Sakshi were happy so both agreed. They do court marriage and decided to give a small reception for staff and close relatives. All are happy for them. Even Maan who have no limits of happines. But Geet was silent and gloomed. Maan understands she need time to accept him and new environment and more then usual,so he tried his level best she wont feel uncomfortable in party. He was stood with her all the time to make sure she will not paniced with the arrival of his relatives. All came and blessed the couple.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

amazing part..due to geet bitter past she is scared to move forward..but maan is not less..finally maaneet marriage..hope geet will have some faith in maan..pls cont soon..

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
geet is so scared to move forward hope everything will be fine
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing 2 part Mann convince geet she not willing to give up but the incident changed her mind so there married please continue soon love your story's girl
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates
geet is scared to start a new life with maan due to her past!!!!
but finally she agreed for marriage, now maaneet are married!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing parts,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's amazing richa. i really loved it. maan determined to make geet agree for marriage. he tried her best to tell her that she has all rights to get her all happiness. she is a courageous woman who wants to live a life. but geet's past is so much hurtful that she can't able to decide what is right or wrong for her. she couldn't able to see the difference between maan and yash. but after that robbery incidence, geet was sure that maan is not like yash. she decided to be agree with maan's proposal. maan and sakshi both are very happy. i know geet didn't accept this relation whole heartily but i am sure seeing maan's love for herself she will be come out from her dreadful past. she will also live a normal life with her love. waiting for next dear.

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