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Posted: 10 years ago
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''Finally, its over'' - PART 2 :


I m sanyukta, a young

photographer in a leading fashion studio n I live with my bf karan srivastav, a

model n actor .

I met him 5 year ago when I came to mumbai to give wings to my dreams, for

being a successful photographer.

Flashback

I went for interview in the leading fashion studio of mumbai n was

mesmerized,by the frst scene, a handsome guy, six pack abs, full of enthusiasm

n dedication towards wrk. Yes he was karan.

Fb ends

Karan enterd the room

''baby still angry??'' he, asked softly

'.No, just too tired to handl your anger '' I replied rudely .

'Oh I see'. N he kissed my forhead making me feel much relaxed.. This was the

best thing about him. If he knew how to make me sad, he also knew how to make

me feel relaxed n happy..

'Let's go for dinner' he

asked like a gentleman.

'I m not hungry. You go n eat something. ' I replied making him realise his

mistake.

He lifted me up n let me sit in car ..

'Leave me karan' I exclaimed with anger

Shhh sanyu n he put a finger on my lips n we went for a dinner date. But I

knew this happiness was not going to last long... We came back n dozed off

MORNING

Sanyu

meri white shrt kaha h??' He was getting really late n I was busy in njoying

the weather . He came n held my waist tight..'ek baar m sunai nhi deta?? M late

ho ra hu n tumhe ye weather ki pdi h'

'Its hurting karan plz leave me' I was crying in pain. He made hus grip more

right leaving his fingerprints on my waist

'aagey se meri baat nhi suni to dekh lena. Pta nhi konse lover k bare m soch

rhi thi jo meri aawaz nhi sunai di.

N again i cried whole day.

Evening

karan was back home..

tum office kyu nhi aayi? Aj to koi outdoor photoshoot bhi nhi tha' he asked while he was removing his shirt

Actually I was not feeling well so I decided to rest at home' I replied trying to cover up my tears.

you r sick n I don't even know about this. What happened? Let's go to doctor' I could clearly see that this was just a formality. He was not at all concerned.

Nothing, I m alri8 now. You sit here I ll bring you a coffee' I tried to get up but I was too weak to get up.

shhh baby u rest I ll make coffee for both of us' he said n moved towards kitchen.

While we were having coffee he broke the silence baby aj ghr pr koi aaya tha?'

haan koi Randhir aaya tha but I asked him to come at night. I didn't even let him in the house, I swear' I was afraid as I thought he'd again doubt my character.

But he was still angry.

Stupid girl, janti bhi ho ki wo kon h? have you lost it? Tumne randhir ko insult kia...'

but maine insult nhi..' I cut his sentence n he cut mine.

Let me complete first. You should have asked me about randhir. You should have called me. Bloody hell.' He was spitting fire on me n I was standing there numb. Tears again made their ways from my eyes.

I was too shocked to react. I knew if I'd hv let him in the house, karan would blame me of being a s**t n now, when I didn't let him in, he is blaming me for insulting him.

ab wo aayega to better apologise him otherwise I ll let u face hell miss sanyukta aggrawal..' he had a hurting accent. He never cared for my feelings. It was just him n his ego.

After a long pause, I dare open my mouth karan, who's randhir by the way?'

I thought he'd be more angry but he replied softly

randhir is my childhood best friend. He recently came to Mumbai for being a model' he seemed really calm n nostalgic while talking about randhir

TING TONG. It was the doorbell

Karan, ruko main jati hu' I said as I headed towards the door.Randhir ap??? I m sorry mujhe nhi pta tha ki ap karan k best friend ho. I m sorry for my behaviour' I apologize him without any pause.arrey its okay. Maine thodi board lga rkha h that I m karan's friend' n he laughed. He was too soft spoken just opposite of karan.Karan came out of the room.Oye karan, 6 years mein kaafi change ho gya h. aadtein bdli ya nhi?' said randhir winking at karanab tu aa gya h to sab pta chl jayega dhire dhire n they both laughed.

I have never seen him so happy with somne1.Sanyu, he is randhir, my best friend.' N randhir, she is.. bt in the middle sentence randhir spoke.. 'sanyukta aggrawal, your girl friend'.

He was the only one who dared Cut karan's sentence.I went inside to bring coffee for them. They had a lot of talks n I was feeling bored in their childhood stories Karan, mujhe nind aa rhi h. tumhe kuch chahiye to bta do' I asked making a sleepy face.nhi baby uh go n sleep, gunnite' n he kissed my forehead.

Goodnight sanyukta' randhir smiledGood night n kuch chahiye ho to jaga dena' I walked inside my room

MORNING

I woke up at 9.oh no karan ko aj office zruri jana tha n wo to utha hi ni hoga..' I rushed to the hallThere he was sleeping on sofa. aww he is looking so cute' I said to myself n woke him up softly utho baby. Uh hv to go to office.'sanyu, randhir kaha h' he asked drowsingly.mujhe nhi pta baby. Main jb uthi to randhir was not here' I replied

why can't you take care of this? Agr randhir kisi problem m hua to I ll kill uh. Mark my words.. I LL KILL YOU.' He threatened me and pushed me hard against the wall n rushed here n there in house in search of randhir.Here I hit a wall n fainted, blood all over my forehead.


Next I remember is when I opened my eyes in hospital n saw randhir moving here n there in the room. He looked really worried.'Ran... Randhir' I was too weak to speak normally'Sanyukta, thank god tum thik ho. Mujhe I mean hme bahut fikr ho rhi thi tunhari ' his voice had a clear mark of care for me.

'Karan kaha h?'i asked in a very low voice'wo karan to office gya h. Kuch zruri kaam tha use' he replied softly.. 'Mujhe hospitl kon laya?? Mujhe hua kya tha???' I asked curiously

Flashback

Randhir came back from morning walk n heard karan's voice calling out his name. He rushed inside n saw sanyu fainted on the floor with blood all over her face. He asked karan about it but he answered that he doesn't know n randhir lifted sanyu up n rushed to the hospital while karan didn't even care n just went to office'

Flashback ends

'chlo sanyu , I mean sanyukta u rest I ll bring u a cup of soup' he continued'you can call me sanyu' I smiled at him.

He went out n brought soup for me n fed me . That was the first tym I noticed him, his well built body, his beard complimenting his handsome face . He was just too hot to handle. As he put his arms around my waist!!..

To let me sit comfortably I felt Goosebumps. I was mesmerised. 'pagl ho gyi ho kya, karan ko pta chla to wo to maar hi dalega. I should stop thinking about him' I thought ..'Sanyu sham ko ap discharge ho jaoge to abhi to smile na.'

He said smiling I smiled . We had a lot of chit-chat, n I was feeling really relaxed after a long tym.

At night all three of us went for a wonderful dinner n I just wished everything to be normal.

To be cont.


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Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
lovely lovely lovely lovely
superb fab awesome amazing
very interesting concept
bloody karan poor sanyu
sandhir are really cute and sweet.
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Superb dear...
Seems like new lovestory is developing...
Karan is such a looser!!!
Sanyu shud leave him...
Conti soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome n Lovely update😳👏
love it❤️
Update soon
thx 4 pm...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
awesome lovely lovely update
karan is so cheap yaar
hamesha apne bare m sochta h
I hope sandhir friend ban jaye
Aur unnhe pyar ho jaye
update ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dear do pm me your all work

I like them a lot

and this story is very apt to present scenario of male dominating society
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey it nice.. Waiting fr d nxt updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Grt story!
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