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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely teaser! Maan gng 2 look 4 her cos of his dad! So Maan did nt change! Geet shld put Maan in his place! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice teaser.. n I know.. Geet will at Railway station.. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser...
Ab maan geet ko dhudhne nikala hai!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser dear.
Maan is railway station to find geet, hope he find her.
Waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 10 years ago


thanks for the lovely teaser

maan bhaag raha hain geet ke peeche

and am loving that😆

though i dont like the reason🥱... as he is going to bring geet only for his dad... selfish kahin ka...

but dheere dheere i am sure u will bring him on geet track😳

will be waiting for the update ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
it is inevitable tht Geet will go back 4 RK bt she needs to stand up 2 Maan! Will she ask 4 divorce b4 he does? Maan has nt learnt a lesson! Geet needs 2 b strong!
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you priya..for making such a beautiful banner!!

Thank u all for ur responses..guys love u !!

All the pics are edited by priya..guys so..Appreciate her!!

ENJOY update...

PART 11


After that maan went to his room.

Doc uncle's words floated in his mind...Did he actually made a mistake in recognizing the real face of chamsish??

The way everyone was so protective about her , the way she spoke meekly everything was fake isnt it??

He sighed deeply as he sat on the bed. He just hoped that chasmish comes back soon..he was hell worried for his dad.

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Adi and pinky went to geet's house .the door was locked..

Sir..yeh toh lock hai..matlab geet isn't here..omg kaha gayi hogi woh

ADi- I don't knw pinky ab use kaha pe dundege do u knw any place where she used to go...

Pinky- nahi sir..

Adi- lets at least ask the neighbours ki geet yaha ayi ti kya..

Adi and pinky went to next house and asked about geet to which the lady said Haa ayi toh thi..but bohot weird behave kar rai ti..kuch boli hi nahi..seedha ghar chali gayi..

Pinky sighed in pain..and looked at adi

Adi- thanks aunty

Aur ha..apna saman bhi lete hue gayi...Wahi ek air bag.joh apne sath KM nahi leke gayi ti .hai..jate time..kuch hua hai ..kya Everything is okay na..

Adi- saman bhi...pinky widen her eyes. Biting her nails.nahi..nahi...nothing happened thank u

He held pinky's hand and rushed outside.

Pinky - Sir saman leke..kaha jaa skati hai..woh..

Adi(st)- lagtahai..koi baat uske dil pe jake lagi hai..warna she would never do that..and jab use Rk sir ki condition kaa pata chalega toh...she will be devastated and feel guilty too..

Pinky- Sir...kya hua

Adi- huh..nothing ek kaam karte..hai..hmm bus depot jate hai..and.. He stopped as his cell started ringing.

It was maan...

Adi picked up the call..

Maan- Adi kya hua..did u find geet..

Adi- n..No sir..she..ummm he paused not knowing how to tell maan about her

Maan- adi tell me clearly...what happened?? He said sternly

Adi - umm..sirr ..woh we were here at her place and neighbours told us she left with her bags..

Maan- what?? She left???But where did she go..?? He raised his brows...

Adi- sir..yes.. we dont knw sir..umm we are leaving for the bus depot and then will go railway station..and airport..

Maan- nahi adi u go bus depot ill go railway station..and jaha tak mujhe pata hai...Who air pot nahi jayegi..

Adi- s..sir...aap jayenge...aap..are u sure he asked him again unsure of what he said just now..

Maan- Yes adi..do as I say..leave for bus depot and I will go railway station now..

Adi- yes sir.. and cut the call..

Adi told pinky and they left for bus depot.

I wont let u go chasmish...though I want to..i cant...He said pressing his lips in a thin line clenched his fist before strolling outside.

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Adi and pinky searched the whole bus depot and inquired about geet but dint find anything..

Adi was hell sacred now..

He called up maan

Adi- hello sir...

Maan- ha adi..

Did u find geet did u find chamsish.. Both said

Maan shut his eyes...U couldn't find her adi.

N..No..sir I dint find..and u,..also dint..Adi asked

Maan- no.. damn he banged his hand on his car.. where the hell is chasmish damm

He was getting frustrated he was suppose to be with his dad but here he is searching chasmish..

I wonder y everyone finds her responsible, innocent...look at her dad's bed ridden and here madam is roaming in the city aram se..no maybe planning vacation o god... she is not capable of anything .

Sii...rr...sir..are u..der

Umm..ya..adi do one thing search her in the city ill check the airport...may be waha gayi hogi..

Okay sir...bye

MAan settled in his car...and started the engine driving furiously to the airport.

He drove a little further but stopped as his car broke in middle of a road.

He groaned and climbed out of car and banged it.. His car was out of diesel..

O lord what the hell...he brushed his hand through hair.

He took a deep breath to calm himself

I guess I should walk a little ...ohh..its M.G road yaha par nizamuddin dargah hai..

He clearly remembers this place. He used to come here with Rk during his childhood. His mother used to come here to pray for him.

He decided to visit the dargah and pray for Rk just like the old times.

He reached the dargah and removed his shoes ,tying his handkerchief on his head ,he entered through the ancient door.

The aura of the place was so scared and serene. The environment was calm which were soothing his senses..the daragah was very familiar to him but it was the first time he visit this place in years.. The

He walked inside and knelled down...he held his hands with palms facing upwards and closed his eyes..praying.

He offered prayers for his dad and prayed to help him get out of this mess. He did want to live life according to his wishes with his won rules but not at the stake of his father..he asked for peace his heart was uneasy dint knw y ...Thee time doc uncle said those words for chasmish the scenario is changed making him highly confused ..He was disturbed with everything that took place nothing seemed right.

A man seated in right corner... he was one of the devotee..He sang...in hindi

(m translating it in hindi...)

"If you're looking for inner peace from the outside world, you're not going to get that. The inner peace starts with looking at you from the inside. Understandin "I want peace." If you remove I (ego), and your want (desire), you are left with peace. That everything that comes to you is what you are."

Maan opened his eyes ...HE blinked ..his lashes Somehow feeling that these words were mocking him.

He got up on his feet...and and stood aside..

A small boy came to him..

Babuji ..plz take this thread..i m trying to sell these since morning ..and nobody has purchased it..plz take it.. The boy pleaded maan

He dint believe in all these but just felt like taking..the thread to help the poor boy

He took the daga and gave him money..

Take all he said..to the boy

The boy smiled at him..thank u babuji..tie the thread ..its called mannat ka dhaga isse band dijiye waha he pointed at ...

MAan faintly smiled and nodded..

He walked to the other corner...He found a women standing der. The lady was wearing a white anarkali. With her head covered..she had her back..to him..

The lady was in the wrong section..

He knew that this was the mens section..and here people are particular about their traditions

Excuse me...he called..

He felt the lady going stiff...he called her again..

Excuse..me..aap..galat section mai hai..this is only for men..u have to go to the other side..

The lady slowly..turned and faced him...looking straight in his eyes..Making maan froze in his spot

Chasmish... Maan whisprered

She gasped as she as saw maan...and clutched the chunri over her chest..

She parted her lips...but no words came out..Her heart was pounding in her in anticipation


preetki lath moheaaisilaagi

hogayi main matwaari

balbaljaaunapanepiyako

he main jaaunvaarivaari


She continued staring him ...with a layer of tears in her eyes..behind those glasses..

She looked him in awe...as if she got the a treasure ..

She smiled with with tears in her eyes


mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki

Yeh toh jaane duniy asaari

Bebas aur laachar phiru main

haari main dilhaari - 2

tere naam se jee loon - 2

tere naam se marr jaaun - 2

teri jaanke sadke mein kuchh aaisa karjaaun

tune kya kardala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Maan stared down at her and for the first time..felt some usual thing in her..the way she smiled it was...it was...he couldn't name.. he was taken aback with the emotions in her eyes..
the lady who was passing by saw them...


hoji ha ji hogayi main

teri deewani deewani- 2

tune kya kardala marrgayi main mitt gayi main

hoji ha jihogayi main

teri deewani deewani - 2


Beta..this is not for ladies..come with me...she held geet's arm and dragged her..

Geet dint even blink and continue staring him..while maan for the first time gazed her eyes...he looked her in the eyes..Strangely he could read them..They wer delighted...but to see him the tears wer contradicting...his thought


Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2

Haste haste aashiq suli chadhjaaye

Ishq ka jaadu sar achadh kara bole - 2

Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole


The lady dragged geeet to another window..where ladies tied the thread.. Geet felt her throat choking ..as she clutched the thread in her hand. A tear slipped own her cheek..


Ishq ka jaadu sar achadh kara bole - 2

Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole


Maan narrowed his brows at her..bewildered..

Chamsish Is here ..and we were searching her all over the city..and y is she crying..

Maan shook his head still looking at her...He tied the thread on the curve and prayed silently for the well being of his dad.

A smile curled on her lips as she saw him..praying.


Yahi ishq di marz ihain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

Yahi ishq di marzi hain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

tere bin jeena kaisa

haan khudgarzi hai

tune kya kar dala marrgayi main mitt gayi main

hoji ha ji hogayi main

teri deewani deewani -

After maan was done he turned in geet's direction and found her already staring him..

He moved to her slowly..

HE came by her window..where she was standing completely dazed..She looked completely out of her mind ..he looked at both sides and found no one..

He held her hand and helped her tying the thread. Geeet felt current passing through her body when maan touched her.


he main rang rangeeli deewani - 2

ke main albeli main mastani

gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun

he main deendhram se begaani

ke main deewani main deewani


She closed her eyes in realization. She belonged to him..only with him. she was destined to be with him.


Tere naam se jee loon terenaam se marrjaaun - 2

Tere jaanke sadke mein kuchh aaisa karjaaun

Tune kya kar dala marrgayi main mitt gayi main

hori ha rihogayi main

teri deewani deewani

teri deewani deewani


After maan tied the thread he held geets hand in his firmly...and moved out. She simply followed him quietly.



Precap-

HUSBAND & WIFE TALK

I hope u guys liked this update

The reason y I wrote this scene..when this was shown in GHSP I loved it..Its one of my fav scene in the show...And I felt it would go really well with this story

Why was geet here u'll get to knw in the next part...!!!!

Plz let me knw ...ho was this!!

Waiting eagerly for ur response...

A special thanks to all of u for patiently waitng for the update..

And to my lovely frnd dhvani for giving hr lappy...to me..!!!(she is not in IF)

NOTE- NEXT UPDATE AFTER 120 + LIKES AND AT LEAST 60 CIMMENTS...!!

Love

Sweta



Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update!!!!
dargah scene from the show is one of my fav scene too and fitted perfectly here too!!!!
loved the update!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh Maan na ek number ka idiot hai...humesha galat karta hai...pehle uss sam ko like kra aur phir Geet ko hurt karta hai... kab isme dimag aayega aur woh real aur fake ke beech me differnce dekh payega... I loved the lines which u wrote yaar those ego and desire one...pata nahi Maan ke dimag me kab kya chalta hai kabhi Geet ko dur bhejna chahta hai yeh jante huye bhi ki RK loves Geet too much but abhi unhi ke liye usse dhundne nikal pada tha... Idiot Maaan Geet ki ankhoon me pyaar dekh lega toh tax nahi lagega... samjhna uske emotion and feeling.. humesha usse hurt karta hai kabhi pyaar se baat bhi karle...
Waiting for Hubby and Wifey talk😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
sach mein iska ego hi usko sochne nahi derahi hai. abhi bhi wo geet ke baaremein galat hi soch rahehai. chalo finally dargah mein milgaye dono and now he is seeing different emotions in geet, and may be geet bhi yeha aane ke baad apni saawalon ka jawab milgayi hogi, issliye maan ko aise dekhne lagi hai.

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