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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31


@U yes !! dear...because the situation where she fallin love is same..that's y..but nothing is going to be similar like karna's wife

@B:: whose love dear!! can u explain me😕


Uruvi's Dhiv.. I thought it would be a story of her secret love for Karna

And, I thought of too many details .. my mistake .. yes Dushala's personal life is irrelevant here... 😆
Edited by swathi.priya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathi.priya


Uruvi's Dhiv.. I thought it would be a story of her secret love for Karna

And, I thought of too many details .. my mistake .. yes Dushala's personal life is irrelevant here... 😆


oh!! Uruvi's love for karna cannot be a secret one..because she will express it to everyone..but still I cannot understand..Y u thought it wud be a secret one when her mother spoke about arjun?😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

I am standing in front of the mirror.I am staring at my eyes..my nose..my lips..my shoulders and I am laughing myself.suddenly the question arises. Am I beautiful?I asked the same question to my maid..

"Nandhini! Am I beautiful?"
"yes! Rajkumari..Yor are so beautiful..looking like an angel' she replied
I don't know why but the answer irritates me.."Lie"
" all r saying Panchali is more beautiful..and I saw Angarani..she is also more beautiful than me"
my maid looked at me strangely..me too..I don't know why I am comparing myself with Angarani and Panchali..
my maid now replied.." may be Rajkumari..but your beauty is unique..You have the most expressive eyes.."I remembered the words of panchali now..this was the first word she spoke to me..
ok!!which colour saree I can wear now..red..no green..no..no red..
after a longtime spending before the mirroe i felt little satisfied in my appearance now..It is the early morning..Suryadev is in deep thinking of coming out..
Now i am prepared myself to meet my king..I said to myself..noI should not faint again i should not give room for silly emotions ..i should see him..i should speak to him..come on Uruvi!! You are a kshatriya princess..gather all our boldness..yes you should do it..

Typical girl in love.. hours before mirror.. choosing sarees., pestering ppl around asking about looks 😆

"just out mother to see the beauty of hastinapur in the early morning..
my sedan chair (litter) is ready ..i will return soon.."

I first read this as sedan car, not chair, and I could not really get that car imagination out of mind., it was really weird reading Karna in horse locking eyes with Uruvi in car.. 🤪

"a sun in the horse"..no!! a man with radiance of sun..he is extremely handsome..the morning rays slightly fell on his face..his kavach and kundals are glowing..I cannot take my eyes from him..now I can see him freely because he cannot see me..
He started moving..while crossing me he turned his face casually and looked at me..no my eyes..suddenly he gave a second look..i can see a sudden change in his face..I can see a kind of astonishment in his eyes..few seconds..very few seconds..our eyes met each other..then he went rapidly..

Here., Aarya finally enters 😉.. Oh Uruvi dear!! your eyes are still in open for everybody to see.. And see our aarya has sharp eyes 😆

Now he is standing alone..His face is filled with some kind of grief..I can even hear his sigh..

Karna is sad 😭 Swayamvar has taken its toll on him...

come on uruvi!this is a rareopportunity..

We know you are in a hurry Uruvi... but no its not a rare oppurtunity.. you can find him here everyday .. so., calm down..😳

suddenly I here a sound of a chariot..oh!! Yuvraj is coming..I truned to move back..but I cannot..something stopped me there..I totally adhered to the tree..

What Dury here?! 😲
Dhiv., I thought there will be some romance here.. but we get bromancing 😒

The whole mitr-mitr, my fault-my fault, heart to heart convo was good 😊

oh!!! she is not my mother ..who is standing? the most beautiful women in beautiful attire..Drupad kumari..

Draupadi is next..
After bromance., now sismance is it?! 😲

When will Kuruvi speak??
(Kuruvi I know its really bad., but couldn't resist div 🤪., I promise I ll not use it again😆) ???


The whole update was very good., update the next part soon.. waiting eagerly 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww swathi darling🤗thank u..
and "kuruvi"🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Was a wonderful one continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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God the convoy was an unexpected one and the convo between urvi and Vrushali was also a lovely one . Plz do continue soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by Texie-Shady - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Finally they both spoke😳😳
Uruvi is bold then I expected her to be just waiting for Vrushu's reasction😛

Part IV (click)page no 10

done😃
Edited by .Sanskruti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: swathi.priya

When will Kuruvi speak??

(Kuruvi I know its really bad., but couldn't resist div 🤪., I promise I ll not use it again😆) ???



Kuruvi... very nice Swathi 🤣
Dont mind Dhivi but I would like to address Karna & Uruvi as Kuruvi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing Dhivi 😊

Uruvi-Draupadi Convo
When u ended the previous update with Uruvi seeing Draupadi at her room, I was thinking what kind of convo they would have. The way Uruvi was excited to tell her mother about her love for Angaraj & instead found the person who insulted him, I was expecting an enraged Uruvi giving angry glares as well as a tongue lashing to Draupadi & the later would be giving back justifications in her defence in her fiery mode. But the convo u have described between these two ladies was a bit unexpected for me espcially Uruvi, who behaved quite matured while conversing with Draupadi. Draupadi's behaviour towards Uruvi of being cold is quite expected as she has already got the news that she will have to share Arjun with Uruvi.

KUruvi's 1st Interaction 😳
Again Kuruvi playing eye-games 😆. I loved the way u have described the humble & polite manner in which he welcomed Uruvi to his palace. Uruvi again lost in words unable to speak. She seems to zone out whenever Karna comes near her 😳

Uruvi-Vrushali-Bhanumati Convo
I loved the way Angarani Vrushali welcomed Uruvi. The convo between three ladies, Vrushali, Uruvi & Bhanumati was quite interesting. Especially when Uruvi praised about Karna's valour, knowledge & many other positive qualities & how Vrushali's face lit up with pride. And Bhanumati scanning Uruvi, it seems the Bhanumati already guessed something is playing inside this princess's mind.

so! being lovable is his fault..what is fault in loving him"?
@ Green: 😳 So finally Uruvi will speak out. M waiting for their reactions esp. Vrushali
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Sorry dear I have written enough. I will not bore u with my looong comments. 😆

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