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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
nice part...
so Maan has started to feel different for Geet...
cont soon...
Edited by spvd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part. poor maan was in a fix how to explain about adi & pinky's action.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updated geet saw adi & pinky kissing & maan in trouble 4 geets nave questions maan arrange jhula 4 geet & she wearing colourful clothes lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome👏👏



adi and pinky kssed😉



maaneet moments r nice😉



maan is j😉



maan arrange for geets function😊



update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy birthday mani
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri pyari mahi thank u tons for making my b'day this special aur mahi I just read & read this update over & over again just loved it mahi we saw ke how maan feels for his geet aur seeing adi pinky kissing he so wanted to kiss his geet lekin he did not wanted to scare her hearing her say abt her dead husband made maan angry he cannot see her wid anyone let alone hear her say any other man's name he was angry aur in tht hurted his innocent geet lekin phir he knows how to make her ok just by giving veer baba's name aur geet forgave her maan not understanding ke her maan has fallen irrevocably in love wid her he made dadi aur rano do the same thing for geet the way she saw for pinky aur there rano aur dadi saw her hairs all beautiful again aur were thankful ke chup kar hi sahi geet was living her happiness due to her maan haye mahi ab adi pinky ki life main kya tension waiting dyingly for the next update aur mahi waiting for the continued epi for my other fav Journey😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
read part 9-10-11 all together-
their childhood antiques, curiosity,ignorance,slowly learning meaning of love,marriage, periods,baby,kiss etc.here u had bring back subject of balvivah and how women has to suffer as widow? pinky adi marriage and gauna, adi teaching maan about periods and baby. childhood innocence.
everthing well paced waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 12



dadi nodded to ma and trio just took geet with htm back side of mandir where there is pound they make her bath with dhood and all geet have so much happiness she mummer baba dekho bilay ne mere liye kya kiya morning main data aur abhi dekho now rano dadi come to know about hair they have happy tears in their eyes


after so many days geet wear colorful dress she is so happy and looking so beautiful


all feel so emotional after looking so happy geet rano took maan in hug and mummer
jo mother hoke bhi main na kar saki u done that veer bhiya ke pari ka bachpan bacha liya u save her childhood thanks beta


maan feel like after so many days he feel mother so near now he have so less memory of his parent he want to hug her tight he searching his mother in rano rano get his mind and say i am u mother maan and maan with sob hug her tight ma ...he cried


dadima feel first time she cant be his mother kahi kam pad gayi


adi come there and say with smile ye maan aj geet ka kaam kar raha hai kya


all look him with question mark face


adi - wo rone ka kaam


all think for second and burst in laugh


all just gather near zula and start ceremony just like pinky in between pinky feel so shy shy to look to adi his teasing smile and eyes giving her goosebumps same time maan look them and closed his eyes and mummer i have to stay away from them pata nahi kya kya karte rahte hai fhir mera dimmag kharab ho jata hai


all enjoying geet ceremony specially geet rano ma , dai adi bhiya and pinky bhabhi and her bila


she mummer thanks veer baba apne bile ko akal dene ke liya and she smile fully


all are happy in there world away from upcoming tufffan in their life which going to change everyone life


four angry eyes watching them from away they burning in jealousy yes they are Brij and his wife





brij lustful eyes roaming on geet she look so beautiful in sarri looking more big than age her marble skin long hair making him mad in desire ,lust


same time maan feel like someones gaze on geet he turn back to who is there but he dont saw anyone


all took lunch and went to home


here brij can't abel to forget geet again again her image coming in his mind she looking so beautiful


same time all entered in house adn brije just stand front of them with evil smile


brij - sab ke sab ek sath kaha se aa rahe hai


dadi - humare ghar se, nayi bahu ko bulya tha adi and geet and rano ke sath dadi know brij very well how evil he is veer always alert her about dadi get brij gaze on geet and pinky she shake with thought


all make excused dadi took rano geet and pinky in geet room


dadi - pinky and geet u two become a women now u have to use your six sense
like maan come near what u feel are u scared both nodded in no ok if any other male a stranger male come near u what u feel


pinky - ajeeb lagta hai dar bhi


geet - ha bhabhi theek keh rahi hai muje to brij uncle se bhi dar lagta hai but dadi wo to stranger nahi hai na ask geet innocently


adi and maan who are outside room heard both feel like they will burst in anger adi put his hand aon maan shoulder and say we talk about this tomorrow ok maan nodded in yes maan feel like punch that brij




dadi - ok girl so stay away from them who scaring u ok
both nodded in yes poor rano turn pale in scared she feel blank for moment her beti her bahu she know how danger is that brij




dadi - ok pinky and geet go to your work both nodded in yes and went out pinky went to her room and adi follow her after eyed maan to geet maan nodded in yes




maan - ok geet show your rose tree to me


geet more than happy she love her tress she took maan hand and run to backside of
house


maan nodded with her childish nature both come to garden of back side its beautiful
so much flowers tree geet just start her bak bak maan lost in her after some second geet come with beautiful red rose and give to maan



maan ask in confused why



geet- thanks for today all i know u arrange all that thanks , and she pick maan cheek maan feel like his cheek burn there where geet lips touch his cheek he gulp hard his eyes winded in shock



precap


tuffan ki shurwat

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Posted: 10 years ago
Me 1st yaayee 🥳 nice part mahi
all r happy wit arrangements specially geet coz her billa did na 😉
maan found mother in rano very touchy 😊
all r lost in happy moments bt 2 persons r burng in jealousy 😲
brij is lukng at geet wit lust 😡
when brij askd daadi gave him ans nd daadi tld geet nd pibky 2 be alert 👍🏼
maan nd adi wants 2 punch brij 👏
precap is scary waitng 4 d nxt part
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago

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