At first, sorry for not commenting on previous chaps and thnx for pming me dear...
Have exmz near so running out of time...But now I'm gonna write a big comment, be prepared :p
Vardhaan left for his college..There I hought yes, he is coming out of his reveries but it din happen...Memories haunted him the most. His anxiousness on the phone made my eye well up. People who go can never understand the pain they give to ones leaving behind.
What Kabir did, I won't blame him. He loved Niharika and she left him for Vd's love. So he thought to give pain to him, that could make Niharika happy. But love is never selfish but for a person like Kabir, it's all useless.
But Vd dint protest. That's called TRUE LOVE. The pain which Niharika's death gave him is immense so all other pains are small to him. His smile is justified.
But Niharika came. Not in reality but in dreams to say shye was still with him. Her body left her but her soul is left with Vd, her love is still alive. The way u wrote their was awesome. I'm in love with ur writing.
The way u portrayed Rd's anxiety, restlessness was amazing. Their confession was so true in the canteen. It was frm heart with no materiality. Loved it.
Rd broke her marriage. Awesome. The way he proposed Sanyukta and kissed her...Awww...But Vd sir was standing n smiling...ROFL...Liked it truly...
A beautiful story has ended. A story whose each line made me cry has ended. I'll miss it badly.
But Ending was fantastic.
And girl, u r a fabulous writer with fantastic writing skills dear. Keep it up!
U know what, u've made me love VARIKA more than Sandhir in this ff!
Anyways, sorry if I bored u...
Love
Rakhi😳
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