mahirmukhtar thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Hi,
I thought about writing a poem about Shlok's last meeting with NA where NA confessed his all sins and Shlok listened every venomous word. I love reading and writing poetry. So I gave my jumbled thoughts some voice.

The poem is about how Shlok felt after listening to NA and seeing the true face of his Baba.
Hope you guys will like it.šŸ˜‰

Here is may paltry effort.

Your Cold Eyes


When I saw your cold eyes

I thought my sun won't ever arise

It's too cold where I stand

And my heart stutters in constricted bands

My soul shatters with agony

When my ears committed the worst felony

Of hearing your words dripping deadly poison

And my eyes forgot how to moisten

A lone tear slipped down my cheek

Like a fire burning in some creek

It was an echo of my unuttered scream

Or maybe the last sign of life it seems

My tongue was like a hard piece of flesh

Prisoned in an iron mesh

Neither in heaven neither in hell

I felt as if I was confined in a well

From where there was no way out

And from where my screams couldn't get out

Forever dying between the endless walls

And where my body couldn't even crawl

And when you moved toward me

I saw a monster coming towards me

With cold eyes and dripping bloodlust

I felt wary and at odds to you next

And when you touched me

Consumed by your obsession towards me

My hand astonished me much

As it jerked away your stinking touch

I felt nauseous by your monster's cloying smell

And your putrid breath and bloodlust's smell

My leg's instinct carried me away from you

They could feel the monster lurking in you

My soul s innocence remained impaled in your jaws

And my trust's ragged remains clutched in your claws

Your cold eyes

Took away the last of my life

Created

Last reply

Replies

2

Views

1.3k

Users

3

Likes

6

Frequent Posters

Neelum.drashti thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#2

Beautifully writtenšŸ‘. happy diwališŸ¤—
dsr11 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
brilliant. keep writing.😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".