ROSID FF: PHENOMENAL LOVE upd 21(5), 22(3), 23(2) Completed FF - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Congratulation Banu on the starting of Ff no 20👏
And after reading all the updates I really really love it. It is something different and interesting👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: justloverosid

Congratulation Banu on the starting of Ff no 20👏

And after reading all the updates I really really love it. It is something different and interesting👍🏼


Thanks a lot Ani dear. Happy that you read all the updates in one stretch and also liked it.

I know it is midnight there. Take rest dear. Good night.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Part 25

Roli looked at Siddhant and started telling about her past life.



Roli Divedi was running all over the house as her sister Simar Divedi was trying to catch her.

Roli: Didi, you cant catch me. Dont try.

Simar: Roli, I wont leave you.

Roli: Lets see.

Simar: ROli give me. Give me that.

ROli: I wont give you.

Simar was unable to catch Roli.

After much tries Simar finally accepted her failure to catch her.

Roli came to Simar herself.

Roli: Didi, take this.

Simar took back that letter and kissed it.

Roli: Didi, So much in love with jiju

Simar: Then what. Yes. I love him so much.

Simar was in love from head to toe.

ROli was the only person knows about her love in the house..

The days were passing...

Jamanlal Divedi wish to arrange marriage for his elder daughter Simar.

He was talking to his wife Meena Divedi about it.

Jamanlal: Meena, Now SImar have completed her studies. Lets see alliance for her.

Meena: You are right. This is the right age for marriage.

Jamanlal: Meena, give me the horoscope of Simar. I will give that to the pandit to bring some good alliance fo rher.

Meena: Sure.

Meena gave horoscope and a photo to Jamanlal.

Jamanlal took those and went to meet pandit.

This conversation was heard by Roli.



Roli was waiting for Simar to return home.

Roli went to Simar and took her to their room.

Roli: Didi, you know what happend today?

Roli informed Simar about the conversation between their parents.

Simar was tensed.

Simar: Roli, i need to talk to him about his now.

Roli; yes didi. You need to do something before our parents bring some other alliance.

Simar: You are right Roli.

Simar called her lover and inform about the happening at her house.

Roli was looking at SImar and prayed to God to get everything alright...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Part 26

Simar was in tension.

Jamanlal arranged for some alliance who were intented to come to see Simar the coming week.

Roli: Didi, What happend? Why jiju did not take any steps in this?

Simar: Roli, its not that he did not took any steps..

Roli: Then...

Simar: The problem is I told you right he is very rich guy.

Roli: Yes.

Simar: It seems his family members not accepting for our marriage.

Roli: What?

Simar: Yes Roli. He is trying to convince his family members which is not getting positive till now.

Roli: Didi, then what will you do now?

Simar: Roli that is what i am also wondering.

Roli: Didi, is he really loving you? Or seeking some reasons to leave your hands.

Simar: Roli!!1

She asked raising her voice and gave angry look.

Roli: SOrry didi. I didn't mean to hurt you or discourage you. But you are telling he is rich. Now in crucial moment he is telling his family members not accepting. That is why i asked you like that.

Simar started crying.

Roli: Didi dont cry. Lets hope for the best.

Simar was totally confused on what is going to happen.





Couple of days gone.

SImar came to Roli.

Simar: Roli, we have decided to run away from house.

Roli: What????

SImar: Yes ROli. His family members are not ready to accept our love. So they are not going to come to our house and ask my hands for him. Also we are not ready to separate for this reason. So we decided to run away.

ROli: Didi. What madness is this? Atleast ask our parents for their acceptance.

Simar: No use ROli. ANyway his family members not accepted. So even if our parents agree what they can do. If they come to know his family members not accepted, then anyway our parents too will not accept.

Roli: But didi, i dont feel this as right decision.

Simar: I know Roli. But no other way.

ROli tried her best to convince Simar not to do that.

But No use...

Simar elope with her lover...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Part 27

Roli's parents were terribly shocked by Simar's elopement.

Simar neither informed ROli where she is going nor contacted her after that...

Jamnalal got stroke and heart attached by this news.

He was admitted in the hospital.

Due to his sickness unable to go to office too.

His earning too stopped which was one & only income of the family.

They were in need of money to treat Jamanlal.

The only asset Jamanlal got after so many years of working was his small house.

They finally sold that house and gave treatment to Jamanlal.

Still due to the mental shock created by Simar, Jamanlal expired.

Meena went under depression due to her daughter elopement and her husband's death.

Roli was the only person handling the family on all these difficult days.

They got no help from any relatives too.

Roli was managing her family expenses with the money deposited into bank from the moeny received by selling their house and the remaining after treatment expenses of her father.

Roli now need to treat Meena also who went speechless in the depression.

On her treatment too lumpsum money was spent.

Still after years of treatment Meena too expired before 6 months.

Roli as she spend much money already was only left with some amount as Deposit in the bank.

She was managing her expenses shifting to much smaller house with one room.

Still she was short of money to meet her college expenses.

Finally she joined part time job in the hotel in the evening times to earn some money.

In that position only the house owner increased the rent and she was told about the vacancy in Bharatwaj house...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Awesome updates didi. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rolidivedi

Awesome updates didi. Please update soon.


yes Dear. updating soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Part 28

Roli got tears filled on her eyes.

Roli: SIddhant, Why my father got heart attach? WHy my mother got depression? Why we sold our small house? Why i lost my whole family? All because of my sister Simar elope with her lover. That what their beautiful love gave as gift to our family. All because of the love. All because of the love of middle class girl with rich boy. Now tell me whether my concern was wrong.

ROli started crying badly.

Siddhant was shocked hearing all this.

Siddhant pulled her towards him and made her lean on his shoulder.

Siddhant: Dont cry. I do understand your concern.

Roli: What is the use? I was trying to run away from you. But you & your eyes again did not let me go away from this love. Did not allow me.

She gave soft punches on his chest.

Siddhant: Roli dont worry. I am not of that kind. I will not let you lose anything because of me.

Roli: Siddhant i got nothing to lose any more other than myself..

She cried again...

Siddhant consol her caressesing her back...

Sid: Roli dont cry. I cant bear you crying like this. Please console yourself.

Roli slowly calm down herself.

Siddhant gave some water to her.

She drank and wipe her tears.



Siddhant got something strike on his mind.

Sid: Roli what is the name of your sister.

Roli: Simar. SImar divedi.

Sid: Do you know the name of her lover?

Roli: I heard didi telling his name as Prem. Other than that nothing is known about him.

Siddhant was shocked.

Sid: Roli just a minute. Come with me

Siddhant took her to his room.

He opened his cupboard and from the file kept inside that cupboard, he showed a photo to Roli...

Roli was equally shocked.

Roli: Simar didi...

Sid: Roli is this your sister.

Roli: Yes. She is my sister.

Sid: Roli do you know the person beside her.

Roli: No i dont know. But seeing them together in this photo can understand he should be her lover.

Sid: Yes. He is her lover.

Roli: But how come her photo with you.

SId: Roli, He is my brother. Prem. Prem Rajender Bharatwaj...

Roli: What???

SId: Yes Roli. Just now after you told about your family. I got doubt whether you are talking about them. That is why i bring you here to show the photo.

Roli sat in the sofa speechless.

Roli: What does this mean?

Roli came near Siddhant & hold his shirt.

Roli: What does this mean Siddhant? You said your brother and his wife expired in accident.

Siddhant just nod his head as acceptance.

Roli: Does this mean? Anjali is my Sister's daughter.

Siddhant just nod his head as acceptance.

Roli broke down and sat in the floor with tears...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Wonderful updates !! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Hi Friends,
Today 22 updates given. Isn't it too much 😲

Also surprise too broken. 😭

Now half of the suprise is pending. 😉

I will update it later friends.😊

I hope after 22 updates i need to wait for all your comments on the updates till now...

Let me see who all liked it. 😃

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