SmileyStar's Writing Index :) - Page 9

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Aww I'm sooo very sorry yaar! I tried thinking of something, I swear I did but couldn't come up with anything nice enough to pen it down and now exams are near and I'm going off IF😭 I'm sooo very sorry!! I feel terrible about this 😭 Esp cos you asked sooo sweetly!

Originally posted by: ayeshafarhabs

Hey da!! I found ur work jst few hours back and read it all in one go!!(arshi work at dat)
nd let me tel u...i have only one word "OUTSTANDING"
in the span of these few hours..u made me laugh like hell ...go aawww cos of d cuteness...drool over ASHAR(!!!) nd arnie baby ofcoutse...omg..imagine him to be such a sweet dad...gawd...agar geh show me hota toh probably i wud hav gone muxh more crazy fr asr than i already am if dat is evn possible!!...so..u made me laugh...CRY(dude too many tears seriously) ...grin...choke...swoon...etc...i cant name anymore at this time of the day!! u didnt lemme sleep all nyt u see!! basically reading ur work was a roller coaster ride fr me!! thank goodmess it didnt hav hate..cos der was no villain ..haha..dats so cool!!


ASHAR is completely his dad's son!! hayee...u knw so much abt ASR dont u?? as if all of us dont knw..but still...u presented it so very well!! his love fr his parents nd yaa fr his lil sis..my god...d best part was...Papad ka tukra...chotay ka chotay...OmGG!!!i was sooo happy ..dn..i donno why!!

ASMARA dis cute adorable little princess...Arnav's princess..his angel..his bundle of joy...dude...u showed exactly wat daughters mean to fathers...i am my papas princess too...nd bidaai part made me cry buckets..i dont wanna leav my dad fr another man!! hmph!! its seriously unfair...u are ryt arnie baby!! Arnav and Asmara's bond is d cutest thing ive read!! lovely lovely!!



ArShi adorable as usual!!

If i had to choose which work of urs was d best...i wud definitely say "Its hard to let you go"

Super looong comment...plus super late too!!