Arjun-Draupadi Kalyug FF- Shubh Punah Milan-Part 35(2/11)

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Sethu parvathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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loved it sweetheart!!!! it was amazin...i kno nowwadays ma replies are late...but i'll make sure dat i replied u!!! u're doin a wonderful job!!! i'm lovin every bit of it!!! keep goin...😊👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Thanks a lot, Ani!!! Small Dance? Kahan se aya ye dance? Karna, shighr hoga, yaar!! Thoda grand entry hojaye!!! You are welcome and sure!!!

My Karna's entry ought to be grand!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 25:

As Arjun followed Yagya towards the girls room, he felt a uncontrollable mental turmoil followed by the aching of heart similar to that of his soulmate Yagya's. Arjun locked the door of the room as he entered the room after Yagya. The sound made Yagya alert and made her look around to see the person in whose love she found both solace and torment.She immediately raised her hand to wipe her tears away so that he couldn't see them but it wasn't her hand which could her tears but her Arjun's hand. As he proceeded forward, Yagya could not help but move backward due to the intensity of the strong gaze of him penetrating in to her. This continued till Yagya hit her back with a wall and Arjun had literally pinned her to them wall without even touching her 'indecently'.Arjun asked her in a husky whisper,

" Kya hua Yagya? Tum ro kyon rahi ho?" ( Why are Yoy crying?)

" Nahi Arjun!! Bas aise hi, Gaana itna emotional hain na isiliye shayad intensity ne ruladiya!" she said avoiding looking in to his eyes and in soft voice.( Just like that Arjun!! The song was so emotional that tears made their way)

" Gaana emotional hi nahi practical bhi hain na, Yagya! kyon dard hain itna uske pyaar main, yahi lag raha hain na?"( The song was not only emotional but also practical! You must be thinking why there is some much of pain in their love, right?)

"Nahi Arjun! Aisi koi baat nahi hai!! Agar pyaar main dard nahi to woh Pyaar hi nahi!! Kasht jo prem main hai, woh bhi to sukh hi hai!!"( No, Arjun! Nothing like that!! Where there is not pain in love, that is not a example of true love and the pain in love is also a happiness!) she said while looking at him with love and a painful look.

"You think the guy betrayed the girl singing this song, ever?" asked Arjun with a great difficulty

" Never, because Love is all about giving and not asking anything in return but their happiness. If the guy is happy then the girl is too happy, if she loved him truly. He might be in any situation but the love will not stop!"

"So you believe that the guy did something wrong but still the girl loved him?" he asked this question for himself and prepared himself for the worst.

" As a human, yes! Because he hurt a girl who didn't ask for anything!" she said with a great difficulty as she felt a vaguely familiar pain engulfing her.

" But Yagya, truth is boundless, without boundaries! And you know only one perspective here! What about the guys emotions?"

Before he could get the answer to his question, they both heard a knock on the door and Yagya immediately took this as chance to escape the situation as she felt that Arjun was asking all this questions for his justification from her mouth but she couldn't really do that as it would be a betrayal to her self and Govind always said, " You can fool the whole world but not yourself! And who tried to do that will never succeed!"

TBC
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Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful!😳👏

This is the intensity you bring on screen, and the television would burst off.

So pure, so true, so intense, so honest. This is my definition of true love.

Yagya, you are not just writing an FF you are writing a dream. A dream for me, of a show like this to come up on television.

This is the true singularity of writing. Where emotions are expressed with the simplest work of words, but it is still deep.😳

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

Wo loved it really emotional Arjun trying hard to make her mind and get his answer and who the hell knocked that door😡 gonna kill that one for disturbing them and yagya taking advantage of the situation was really unexpected one and Govind is always right 😉 and thanks for the pm di

Edited by Texie - 11 years ago

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

What is THiS?? THIS CAN"T BE TRUE!!!😲

Trust me I thought the exact scene What is this??? TELEPATHY!!!!😲

Or else I know my Devarjee to such an extent

What a Devar Bhabhi relation we share!!!😉😆

I thought the same that my Devranijee would show the reason of the song!!😊

Hmm we too share cool Devrani Jethani relation🤗

Hmm update next soon I wanna know what happens Devranijee!!😳

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii
What is THiS?? THIS CAN"T BE TRUE!!!😲
Trust me I thought the exact scene What is this??? TELEPATHY!!!!😲
Or else I know my Devarjee to such an extent
What a Devar Bhabhi relation we share!!!😉😆
I thought the same that my Devranijee would show the reason of the song!!😊
Hmm we too share cool Devrani Jethani relation🤗

Hmm update next soon I wanna know what happens Devranijee!!😳

Jethaniji, update poora nahi hua hai!!! I am still writing it!!! WOh to hai!!! Hamara sambhandh bohot hi dhrid hai!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
heyy update soon waiting desperately nd can't wait what will happen . Feeling sad for yagya i hope she and arjun come together. updTe soon dear and plz plz plz pm me

Thanks a lot, dear!!! They will eventually but right now...!! Sure dear!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SethuParvathi
loved it sweetheart!!!! it was amazin...i kno nowwadays ma replies are late...but i'll make sure dat i replied u!!! u're doin a wonderful job!!! i'm lovin every bit of it!!! keep goin...😊👍🏼

Thanks a lot, darling!!! Missing you loads!!! Love you!!