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Posted: 11 years ago
update soon...
Otherwise I will cry 😆 😆
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zayacrazy will update soon
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Chapter 4
He stood there waiting for her he reached a little early he didnt want to miss anything there he saw her, She was walking towards him she wasn't smiling, he hadnt expected her to...the same dressing sense, Indian!
He had expected to be Western but somewhere he knew she wouldnt ditch it.
She approched closer, but...
What was that?
She walked passed him? HIM? Her Zain? She walked away?
He definitely hadnt expected that...''Aliya?'' ''Ghadi kaha hein? Mere pass bohat kaam hein aap please bateinge? Ya mein khud dhoond lo?
''Aap?'' ''Ji mein Aaliya'' ''No i know you I mean...'' but she didnt let him speak and walked forward...
Of course she was dying to meet him! But she couldnt get over with the fear, she wanted to hug him as tight as she could but her brain set limits to her heart this time!
He stood there in shock! Dosent she remember him? He hadnt expected her to smile, greet or hug but this? He hadnt expected this!
Actually he had, his brain had not his heart...
They got into the car she could feel her eyes get watery...
He already had started to let go of tears, they were racing down his cheek...
She was in pain and now it doubled seeing him cry.
The trip was really silent, but he couldn't take it anymore and let out a sob.
''Za... umm aap theek hai?'' She tried to be bold but she sounded alot concerned.
''Aliya...tum kyun...kya tum mujse naraaz ho? Ya tum mujhe bhool gayi?'' He couldnt resist and grabbed her and hugged her and sobbed in her hair...
She broke right after getting into his arms, the first time she cried! After her parents death...maybe she found the right place to pour her heart out.
They broke the hug when they heard horns but he thouht it will workout better this time but Aliya vowed that instant never to break infront of him again!
Rest of the trip was silent but as they reached home Aliya had fallen asleep, he didnt want to wake her up, he knew she wouldnt, she always slept deep but as he put a halt to the car she woke up and without turning back just left!
She walked in no smile...but everyone smiled back to her the first person she ran to was her mamu and mami and this time she had the right cry! And she did, they calmly patted her back.
Then her mami guided her to the guest room, in between she stopped by at Zain's room, he still kept it messy she thought
*******Flashback****
''Zain itna messy kamra? Saaf kyun nahi karte? Dekho abb toh kitab bhi nahi milegi!''
''Acha hai...ab toh tumhare saath share karni padeghi...aur saaf tum kardena par baad mein.''
She later had found out he did it purposely so she could spend some more time cleaning...actually spend time with him...
****FB ends*****
Her lips slightly curved but instantly turned into a frown thinking she would never share such a moment with him again!
She peeked in a little more and saw the pictures on the wall...he had kept his promise of never taking his and her pictures down...and he hadnt! Infact he had decorated them with fairy lights and added dome more pictures and stuck funny comments!
Surriya carresed her hair and lead her to her room
It was perfectly decorated her favourite colour wallpaper, her favourite bedsheet he still kept it she thought...
There downstairs Zain sat in a corner of the drawing room, half laughing half crying... and just then she entered, he quickly wiped his tears.
''I knew I'd find you here...''
''but seems you don't know me anymore...''
''Zain I can't I'm scared Im here to apolgise and clarify don't expect even your name from my mouth...''
''I have nothing but my breath and heart to lose this time...''
''Aaliya... never say that again I promise I wont force you but just for once could I hug you?''
He knew she wouldnt answer or respond to the hug,
She didnt answer but to his surprise, responded to the hug
But that dah maybe she did melt but Zain must havent in his dreams thought what she would become tommorow and what he would have to face
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I wasnt supposed to update, Coz I didt pass in an exam and my result is Attempt Again 😭but thnm Priya I did coz I had promised...but dont frown I'm gonna try harser this time! And pray for me would you? And eat Priya's head for the next update not mine...hehehehe...😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
First one to comment...
Really loved it...
What a turn in the story... 😆 😆
Hamare minds...
Aww that hug...
Aliya changed a lot but zain's love is still alive...
Suri is so sweet in the ss...
Thanks to u...
Felt so sorry about u...
If I knew it I would have not forced u to write the chapter...
And yes I will update the chapter by Wednesday...
Till then hiding from everybody 😆
Edited by iluvuzaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice chapter
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg
Zain poor baby 😭
Excellent update
Soo nice
Hug was 😳
Continue ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter !!
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Very nice chapter
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

u r wlcum
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Omg

Zain poor baby😭
Excellent update
Soo nice
Hug was😳
Continue ASAP

I will continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Bechara Zain kya socha tha aur kya ho gaya
That hug was aww...
Thanx for d pm
continue soon

Priya not going to leave u till u update d next chapter 😆

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