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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know why I wrote this part... Its just came in my mind so thought to share with you... There are so many grammertical mistakes please bear with it as I didn't get time to recheck... 😛Some intimate scenes are there so read at your own risk... 😉

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A Night With Love

RK's POV

Finally I am feeling so relieved here... "One more drink please..." I ordered to bar counter... It was a hectic day for me.. Actually nowadays I am so busy that I can't get time for me itself... "Sir your drink..." I nodded and gulped it in one go... I am enjoying here and looking at the pub all over... Some couples were dancing on the floor... when my eyes catch someone's glimpse for once... Aahhh its so crowd here... I can't see her face but then I see her... She is entering in pub wearing a black knee length dress... She is looking damn gorgeous... I just lost in her bold almond eyes... I think there are no one so beautiful like her... I can't resist myself to admiring her... She came to the bar counter where I sit... Shall I talk with her... "No no Rishabh... What are you thinking... You guys didn't know each other... How can she with an unknown guy..." My mind said to me... She was standing just next to me... What is this??? Who's that idiot... A guy comes between us... Now I can't see her face properly, so I forward my head little to see her glimpse once...

"No... Now its enough... Why am I getting so panicked, go and say a hi and start the conversation... Simple..." I stand up from my sit but again I think "How to start..." Then I came to her side "Can I get a beer???" My arm touched her arm so I said "Sorry..." She just smiled at me... The counter boy give me a bottle and meanwhile I passed my card to her... She just glared at me so I went to my sit... "I think she is not interested..." I thought and enjoying my drink divert my mind when my cell beeped I checked...

"So nice move!!! But why did you go so hurriedly???" She messaged me... I looked at her... She winked... Awww!! she was looking so cute...

"Hmm actually the way you glared..." I replied to her... I was waiting for her reply when my cell beeped... Without wasting time I checked..

"Hahaha!!! Its nessesary you know..."

Before I typed anything I got another reply "Now impress me..." Ahaan!!! She is too fast...

"You are looking dead gorgeous girl..."

"Aahh.. Thanks for this compliment... You too are looking handsome I must say..." Her cheecks became pink which I liked...

"Thanks... So do you like orange juice??" I asked casually to start the convo...

"Yeah... I ordered for it that means I like it no!!!" I am so stupid... I went to her side and again typed..

"Nice song no!!"

"You can ask me for dance..." She replied.. OMG!!! She is too fast... I just look at her when she said to me "Shall we then??"

We went to the dance floor... A romantic music is playing in background... "I must say you dance so well..." I said to her.. "Tell me something new..." I liked her attitude...

"So.. What's your name???" I asked her as I still didn't know her name...

"Still we have full night.. You will come to know..."

"Impressive.. Anyways I am RK" I said...

"RK.. Right Kamena??" I laughed on her word...

"Not at all...Can I ask you something???"

"Before you say something i tell you.. Yeah I like you and I will be your girlfriend..." How did she know I am asking about this only... Anyways I got my answer...

"So.. Its so much chaos here... Shall we go somewhere??? For a long drive or my house???" Her question made me shock... "Isn't it so fast??" I asked shockingly...

"Who have so much time my boy..." I just looked her stunned... "Let's go then..."

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She was sitting in my car next to me... My heart was pouting so fast.. Is it true??? "I am getting bore..." She said and took my phone from side...

"Biwi???" She questioned me... Oh shit!!! I snatched my phone... She was glaring at me shockingly "Are you married???" I applied the break and went out from car... Now what will I answer her??? I ran my fingure through my hair in frustation and took out my wallet... "I didn't answer me yet..." I looked at her... She was standing next to me... "What??" She asked... I showed her my wallet where I kept my wife's photo... She looked shockingly and then laughed... She came little close to me and pulled my cheecks "My right kameena..." And hugged me... What... She is my wife yaar... I am already married and how can I be so characterless... "You are such a kameena RK..." She chuckled "Tell me something new biwi..." I winked... "Now I don't think you are still angry on me Madhu..." I asked her...

Flashback...

"Why are you making such a big issue on it??" I asked so furiously...

"RK I am not making any issue... What I asking to you??? Just a few time... Nowadays you are busy with your so called clients and meetings... You haven't time for me now..."

Aahhh!!! People said right its too tough to handle Biwi... I was happy before marriage yaar... Atleast she understood me before... But now she always ready to throw her regular speech that I don't have any time for her, I am changed and so on... Why can't she understand I am working hard for her, for us...

"RK!!!" Now I didn't say anything so look she was glaring at me... "Biwi I am getting late... So shall we talk about it later???"

"Ohh... So now you are ignoring me huhh..." I just gave her whatever look and left the room, slamming the door behind me...

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"Oh!!! So no message and phone calls... I think I am not existing in her life.. Fine.. Now I wont talk with her..." I checked my phone during luch time and my face dropped...

"Bittuji I am going moonlight pub and don't you dare to tell about this to your bhabhiji.. Got it... Otherwise you know what I can do.." I warned her and left the office...

Flashback end...

"Not at all.. I am sorry.. I behaved with you so rudely..."
"Don't be girlfriend... But it seems nowadays Bittuji is working for you..." I chuckled...


"Girlfriend???" She questioned...

"Yeah just before you itself said..." I giggled when she gave me whatever look...

Madhu's POV

He nuzzeled on my neck while back hugging me... "RK stop it..." i pushed him back and trying to ran to our room but he hold me and carried in his arm... He cloed our room's door behind us and dropped me down.. I tried to run but again he blocked my way by putting his both hand on either side and leaned closer... My heart started pounding so fast... He leaned near my ear and whispered "You are looking so beautiful.." he brushed his stubble against my cheecks...I lowered my eye lids in shyness... He leaned more closer to me and entangled his fingures with mine... His lips almost touched mine... I could feel his wam breath against my face.. "RK..." I whispered but he shed me and brushed my lips with his text fingure... I closed my eyes... And in next moment lips his touched with mine... It was smooch and slowly it became so passionate hungry kiss... He scooped me in his arm and threw me on bed and pulled his shirt open and thre himself on me... He started stripping out my dress and gave wet kisses on my neckline... I closed my eyes to feel his touch.. I trailed my hand on his bare chest...
He sucked my lower lip and marked his victory by forcing his tongue into my mouth... My hormones had started to lay down in front of him as he was pressing the perfect areas... He started to suck my tongue passionately to taste the nector... He continued to drug me with his kiss... I was getting out of breath... His kiss was so intense and demanding that my body started burning... "Ahhh!!!" I moaned as he bit my lower lip... I didn't care about anything... I wanted him to drown me in ocean of desire... I locked my arms around his neck and pulled him closer... He deepened the kiss and I surrendered to him completely by responding back with an equal passion... We got part due to lack of air... My hormones were craving for the heat of his body... I let out a moan as his hungry fingers travelled to my soft curves and started squeezing them with a desire... I could realize his desires were reaching its peak... He raised his head and caressed my chin with his fingers "You are so beautiful Madhu..." My cheecks bacame tomato red that I understood his word meaning... He was forcing me to become wilder by his seductive touch... I was so much drown in so much pleasure that I didn't even realize that he had started his mission to exploring the last part from my body... He gave wet smooches to my stomach, my navel and finally the region... I clutched the bed sheet tightly as spine ran through my veins... I started sweating as his lips were reaching its destination... And within a seconds he entered mine... And the rest of the night went with the sound of moaned and groaned...

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I know its too bad... 😭 Everything are welcome... 🤢 Good or bad whatever it is but please don't forget to comment after reading...

Thank you!!!! 😊
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madhurish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yippee!! 1t to comment again in ur stories today!!😛
Ni, u r behind me but not bad hun! but u can't beat ur baby stalker!!😆

okay! coming to the os!
lovely os!! i liked it!!😛
i guessed that the girl was madhu & Rk's biwi only even before he reveals it & it came rite!!😉
i liked madhu's pov more than Rk's & i guess u knw the reason too LOL😉😆
thanks for the pm but i resed even before that!!😆

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Crap.Sorry. Forgot to unres.
People remind me to unres my posts on your stories.😆 Or else there won't be any unresing. Oh and remind me if I haven't comment on your stories and didn't res. Cause I want to comment.
This was just a mere lucky chance that I clicked on my own post.😆
Congratz Sudha. Yes I know. It's hard to beat Baby stalker.😆
Over to the story.
It was a great OS Ronita.
You actually made me believe there for a mere second that RK was cheating on his wife. And I hoped that his wife turned out to be a vamp like Deepali. 🤣 Because I would have felt bad if she was a good wife. But cheating is cheating no matter what way you turn the picture and it is never okay.
And fortunate this is only a story so no hard feelings for either of the character from me. 😆
So when you revealed that Madhu was his wife. I felt relieved. That was one good Little twist you wrote.😆
Great OS Ronita.
Do write more stories.
Thanks for the OS and for the PM. And please remind me through scrap if I haven't resed, unresed any posts on your stories. Cause I want to read and comment on them. I know you have sent PMs, I will check them.😆 But till then, it will be easier for me to know if I have forgotten any story. Thanks and sorry again.
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres finally

3rd one to res and last to unres it 😆😆

Actually after reading ur story, when i tried to comment, my mobile battery drained out, and after that i forgot to unres it, thanks to u for reminding me about this.

Nice play of Mr and Mrs Kundra, loved it, i didn't guess at the beginning, i guessed they are not strangers with the speed they move, but this was different, do write more on rishbala
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very romantic and good os😳
You are a fabulous writer ronita loved ur os.
Tfs for pm
Edited by SNCC - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres..

really awesomeee OS!!!
when they started chit chat I got it they are already married 😉
so biwi bani gf 😆
really lovely os dear!!! keep writing roni dear!!! 😃
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gal...this is so good..y u r thnkng otherwise...
Come on...I wrote a concept with so much interest...it is shown..so...don't wry sweetly..

Keep it up and keep writing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb well written.
Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Keep n keep on writing !
This was nice os !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful and romantic OS dear
Loved it 😃

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