Abhigya Fiction -The Turning Point -Completed-epilogue pg28- 12/10 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 26javey

Great part. I love how Abhi is finally seeing everything locally, thanks to Dadi. And he should feel the torment, hope it doesn't end soon. For what he's done to her it should go on longer. Continue soon and please do pm me when you update.


Thank you so much!😛

Will PM soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: athirakt

rocking update

i want pm


Thank you so much! Will PM!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

i hate abhiii sooo muchhh for hurting sarla maa and daadi and especially pragya

plsss updt soon and dont frgt to pm me


😆😆Ya he has messed it up! But will see how he goes from there...😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

read all 5 chappies in one go and LOVED it! (btw, the link for chapter 2 is edit post)
you're a brilliant writer- loved the way emotions are portrayed. especially liked the scene where pragya leaves. especially the countdown by abhi and then chashmish chali jayegi
looking forward to the meeting - finally!

pls update soon


Aww thank you for the wonderful comment!😛 Means a lot!😊

And again thank you for pointing out the link thing... My mistake..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

fantastic update

finaly Dadi put some sense in abhi but i think its too late for him to mend his relation. its not about pragya, its her and his families who are deeply upset and disappointed from him.
i am eager to read abhi and pragya conversation.


Thank you so much!😛

Yaa he is still not aware of the damage he caused... Let's see how he mends his ways...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you!!! Superb ... just loved it!!! Please continue!!! Can't wait for Pragya's reaction!!!




Thank you so much!😛 Will continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lkb79

I've been reading all along but keep forgetting to comment. This is such a fantastic story! Gripping - I can't wait to see what comes next. I love the cliffhanger - I am imagining Pragya's face when she spots Abhi in my mind right now. She's not too happy. 😆😆


Aww thank you so so much!😛 Glad to know you are enjoying...

And you are the first person who loves the cliffhanger!👍🏼😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Martinski-



CLIFF HANGER! Uff!

Beautiful!!!! Abhi and google 😆

Purvi is adorable !



Lol!😆😉

Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi guys!😛 Thank you for the most wonderful comments!😳 I enjoy reading them so much!😃

So finally AbhiGya meets eachother! please do let me know what you guys think...😛 And here comes Chapter 06!😉

Happy Reading!

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The Turning Point


Chapter 06


"Abhishek?"

Pragya was coming outside the building when she saw Purvi sitting in a bench talking to someone. She would have moved on if she had not seen Purvi's tensed face. Purvi looking so worried? She is explaining something to the guy sitting next to her... Pragya couldn't see his face, but somehow he felt so familiar... As if someone who she knew... As if... Abhishek?

Pragya did not realize words leaving her mouth until she saw the person sitting with Purvi stiffening... He slowly stood up and turned and Pragya found herself looking into the face of her Rockstar husband.

Seconds stretched into minutes and they stared into each other's eyes...

Chashmish!

Abhishek!

She looks so thin... How is that even possible! She is already so thin... And dark circles under her eyes... They were not there before...

He looks so tired... As if he has not slept for days! And I have never seen him so unkempt... He is always so conscious of his looks... Why isn't he taking care of himself?

Huh... Finally I feel a strange peace within myself... Of course it has nothing to do with seeing Chashmish... Why would I feel at peace after seeing her? She irritates me remember?

I am so happy to see him! But why am I happy?Eight days! I have not seen him for eight days... Of course you can't count looking at the paper clippings Pragya... It is just not the same! Seeing him in person is a different feeling altogether...

Is she happy to see me? Her face doesn't reveal anything but her eyes... Her big beautiful eyes... They say she is happy to see me...

Purvi stood looking at the estranged couple staring at each other... It was almost as if they were not even aware of her presence... What should I do? Should I just leave? But no... Di... I can't leave her with Jiju like this... First I will talk to her and see...

"Di!"

"Huh..."

"What?"

Both Abhi and Pragya broke away from the spell that possessed them for awhile and looked at Purvi.

"Di... Woh Jiju... I mean Abhi... No Jiju..."

Oh not again! Abhi sighed mentally where as Pragya felt a pang in her heart seeing Purvi trying to figure out her current relationship status with her husband.

Husband? But they don't live together anymore right? Ex-husband! But they are not divorced! Not yet at least... So he is still her husband... Estranged husband... Wait! So he is here to... He is here to... No! But it must be Pragya... There is no any other reason for him to come and see her right? He must be here to talk to her about their divorce!

Abhi could see the battle within Pragya's head as her beautiful big eyes moved rapidly as various emotions ran through them... Confusion, shock, sadness, fear, disappointment and now... Now they are getting clouded... brimming with unshed tears...

"Di? What should I do? Please don't be upset Di... Shall I ask him to leave? Di?"

Huh! So much so for being allies! I came here to ask her help but now she is siding with Chashmish? I won't leave here without talking to Chashmish first! And I better tell her that before she sends me away from her Di...

"No Purvi! It's okay... I will manage... You just go and wait for me at the gate I will be there soon... If this is what he wants I will give this to him!"

Abhi felt glad that Pragya sent away Purvi in order to stay back to talk to him... But what did she just say! "If this is what he wants I will give this to him"? Now how can she possibly know? I didn't tell anyone! Of course Abhi! Hypnotism! Her Jaadu! She knows already that I am here to say sorry and ask her forgiveness! So she said she is going to give it to me! Huh... So it wasn't too difficult! In fact it was so easy... Too easy... Daadi was saying it won't be easy but here she is! This has been by far the easiest apology ever! And to think he has been googling about it...

"Chashmish..." No Abhi don't mess it up! Be polite!

"No...I mean Pragya..." Did he just call me Pragya! But he never calls me that... He calls me Chashmish! Of course it's all over now...

"Ji..."

"So how are you?"

"I am okay... How are you? How is Daadi?"

"I am fine... Daadi is also okay..."

"Okay... Good then..."

They stood their awkwardly waiting for the other to continue the conversation.

But why isn't he telling anything... Pragya wondered as she began to twist her dupatta.

Come on Chashmish ask me anything... Anything at all... Abhi thought as he began to rock on his heels hands buried in his pockets.

"So how come you are here?"

"So how come you are here?"

Both asked at the same time and then looked at each other and shared a smile. Pragya answered the question first.

"Actually I started working here from yesterday... After everything I wanted to start afresh and then Suresh found me a job here..."

Her answer made his smile disappear. So Daadi is right... She is trying to start her life afresh... With the help of that Double Battery! She, his Chashmish is looking for a fresh start... And she didn't even tell him once but she asked for HIS help... Why didn't she ever tell him that she wants to continue working? He wouldn't have minded... Well to be honest he would have liked it very much if she was pursuing a career that she obviously loves... But Abhi you never talked to her now did you? Despite living together for months... They hardly knew each other...

"So how come you are here? Of course I know why you are here but how did you find me here?"

Of course you know! With all your Jaadu... You would definitely know... Then how come you don't know that I don't like you taking that double battery's help!

"Well, actually I didn't know you are working here... I just wanted to get Purvi's help to talk to you so I came here to talk to her..."

"To talk to Purvi? But why you could have just called me or sent me a message... That would have been enough..."

"Really? That would have been enough? But I thought... Well I thought after everything we have been through it won't be enough... I mean then it would have been too impersonal or something..."

"Impersonal? Abhishek what are you saying! Of course I would know that you sent it to me only?"

"Really! Huh... But it's okay Chashmish... I don't mind coming here... It has been 8 days and it was good to see you."

Okay wait! He called me Chashmish! It feels so good to hear that... And he said... He said it's good to see me? 8 days? Did he keep a count too then? Did he miss me? Oh Pragya don't be a fool! Of course he would have kept a count... I am sure he is just looking forward to have a permanent seal on his liberation day! And meeting me in person would make it fast... And then... Then he will be able to see me shatter right in front of his eyes... And again the last laugh will be his... You are so dumb Pragya... So dumb... I am not going to cry! No matter what happens I won't cry!

"Okay all right! Let's get it over with! I have to go as well..."

"But Chashmish what is the rush? And you just said there is no need and I could have just called you or sent a message?"

"But that doesn't matter anymore... What is important is you are here and I just want to finish this off... So please be quick! I don't have all day!"

Yeh Chashmish bhi na! First she says no need to apologize in person and now she is saying go ahead! I can't believe her man! I am not going to apologize now! But Abhi you are at fault! All the things she went through because of your idiosyncrasies ... She is trying to start afresh because of you! You OWE her an apology! That is the least you can do! Okay get it done with and finish it off!

"Okay... Okay Chashmish let's do it! But will you please sit first?"

"Why should I sit? I don't want to sit!"

"Please Chashmish... Just hear me out..."

"Okay... Okay I am sitting... Just give me the papers!"

"Papers? But I didn't bring any paper..."

"What? Then you thought you will drop by and just talk about it? What were you... Okay... Then just send it to my place!"

"Why do you want papers sent to your place? And what papers?" Abhi what is she talking about!

"Because Abhishek Mehra that is the procedure! How come you don't even know that?"

Oh Right! Poems! She is talking about that! She wants me to write a poem... Or what a written apology? But I didn't write anything and now what? I can't drag this! I have to say sorry and get this apology done then we can move on... Oh yeah! Yes! Abhi, you genius! I know exactly what to do... It also said hug and say sorry right?

Pragya had no time to react as Abhishek dragged her to her feet and hugged her... She was too shocked to respond as her thoughts went haywire unable to comprehend what is happening... Abhishek hugging me? Hugging me so gently... Unlike any other time they hugged in order to make others believe in their facade... In prison for her Ma, in hospital for his Daadi... But now for whom? Everything is out! No more lies... Then why? And this proximity? He hates it when I touch him... And now HE is hugging me?

But this feels so good... To have him this close... Thought I would never see him again... His arms so strong... Yet so gentle... Wrapped around me...

"I am sorry Chashmish! So sorry! Please try to forgive me... I know I don't deserve it... But please at least try to think about it... Say you will forgive me, please?"

What! He is saying sorry because I scolded him for not knowing the procedure... But that is definitely over the top even for someone like HIM! I am not getting this...
Pragya broke away from him but his firm hands seemed to hold onto her waist for longer until he finally gave in.

"Wait a second! What are you up to? I don't know... But I just don't get what you say! Just talk to your lawyer. And then we will just... Just... Get done with this divorce!"

Divorce! Did she just say DIVORCE! Abhi felt his mouth hanging open but words did not come out... Chashmish thinks I want a divorce! That I came here to talk about divorcing her! Divorce! But why! Why would she even think of a divorce! How can she even think of divorcing me! Me? Don't I mean anything to her? Anything!

"I... I didn't come here to talk about a divorce!"

What is he saying? If she was not standing so close to him Pragya was sure she wouldn't have heard what he was telling... Didn't come for a divorce? Then why? And he looks... Haan he looks so mad... He seems to be so angry... But that is weird...

"I came here to apologize to you! For all that is I have ever done to you!"

Pragya felt her knees failing her as she sat in the bench. Abhishek! Apologize! For all that he has done! So does that mean he is finally aware of the truth? Must be! Pragya he finally knows! This is what you always wished for right! He knows the truth! Oh, the truth!

But now what? He knows... He apologized... Now? Will I be ever able to forgive him for all that happened! He made my life miserable! My family suffered because of him... All the lies, insults, taunts, pain... Will it all go away if I forgive him? Will it all be all right again? No nothing can be reversed... I cannot forgive him! I just cannot...

"Chashmish?"

Abhi felt his anger ebbing away as he saw her slowly sitting down... She was not expecting an apology! She is surprised... So Daadi is right! But Chashmish, she will forgive me! She has to! Please! Otherwise I won't be able to live with this guilt!

"I think you should leave now!"

Her flat tone pricked something within him. But he was not sure as to why it did so. He watched her collecting her stuff with an unsteady hand and finally she got up to leave.

"Chashmish please..."

"Abhishek please leave my hand! Just let me go!"

"Say you will forgive me... Please... Then I will let you go?"

" okay I forgive you! Happy now? But you know what? I will never be able to forget what happened between us... I will never be able to forgive you for what you did! You destroyed my life! You destroyed my whole life Abhishek Mehra and I will never forgive you for that all my life!"

Pragya felt the tears she had been controlling till then running down her cheeks. She pulled her hand out of Abhi's hand but he seemed too numb to react. But she would not falter now... She has to leave now before he manages to come back to his senses... Because to be honest Pragya was not sure whether she would be able to hurt him again with her words... With all these thoughts running in her mind she fled the college leaving Abhi behind...


Edited by Diahh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
pragya going through tumult of emotions within minutes and of course the vulnerable abhi are so well portrayed. please continue soon 👏

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