an angel in disguise

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

A girl is standing with her mom on the terrace waiting for her dad to come home. She asked her mom: Ma, how come there are so many stars in the sky?

Her mom was startled and asked: Riyu, yeh tu kyun pooch rahi hain(why are you asking this?)

R:Ma,school mein teacher ne ek storybook read kiya tha wo stars ke bare mein tha,Twinkle Twinkle little star.It was so nice
(in school teacher read a storybook to us about stars) so tell na ma.

M(smiling at her innocent daughter): wo storybook nahi tha wo nursery rhyme tha(it was not a storybook it was a nursery rhyme)

R:o Yes lekin aap ne abhi bhi nahi bataya ki itne saare taarein kyun hain(But you did not tell me why there are so many stars)

M:Riyu the stars are guardian angels woh hamesha protect karte aur hamare care karte hain.(they protect and care for us)

R:Why are they sparkling and how come we do not pray for them because hum bhi bhagwan ki pooja karte hain who bhi toh hamari care aur protect karte hain na?(we also pray to god,he also does the same right)

M(thinking baap re Riyu itne sawaal poochti hain aur who bhi to the point)(so many questions and that to the point): beta,we pray to god for good health and wealth and happiness, We share everything to god as he is our friend, lekin(but)he has so many friends that he can not keep count so that's way he made stars to help him in this and they sparkle because they smile when their friends are happy, only if they are good people.

R:sachi(Really)[excited]

M:muchi(yes really)smilingly

R:so which one is my friend?
M:which one do you want?

R:I want a star who is a girl(very sad)

M: why?(still knowing why but can not resist from asking)

R: I want a sister who can be my best friend,so I can share everything with her(very excited)
M:achcha,aur main aur tere baba(really and me and your dad)

R: do not worry ma.i still love you and baba,You and baba are my first friend(smilingly)

M: (getting very emotional)o I love you to

R: (seeing her mom getting emotional,tries to change the topic)Ma can I choose now?

M: Ok which one?
R: hm that one(showing the tiniest star)it's so cute hai na (right) [enthusiastic]

M: bilkul tumhari tara(just like you)

R: aur name ho ga Angel{her name will Angel}

M: name soch ke rakha tha kya (you already thought a name)
R: o ho Ma wo petname hai,baad mein soch ke batawngi(it is a petname,I will think later for a good name)
M: (trying to hold her laugh) acha teekh hai dekho tumhare baba bhi aagey{ok,look your baba has come}

R:Yay baba came I will tell him about Angel [running down to go to her baba]
M: Riyu dheere there are stairs{Slowly}pehle baba ko fresh to hone do aur khana bhi khane do {let him go to fresh himself and eat dinner}

R: sorry I forgot{smiling sweetly}

After dinner and telling her baba everything he just smiled and said:did you already thought about the name?

R: hmmm yes I got it{very excited}
B+M:kya(what)
R: name aur kya{and what else}(pouting)

B+M:tell na

R: later,I feel sleepy,Good night(goes to her room)

B: Good night(turning to his wife),bilkul tumhari tara hai(she is just like you)

M: acha ab meri galti hai (it is my fault now right){angrily},fine you sleep on the sofa tonight and for coming 2 weeks and goes to her room.

B: Arre I was just joking(going after her to patofy her)

After 2 hours Riyu woke up and went to the terrace and stood there and said to the star:

Angel,I wanted to give this name to my sister
but now I am going to give you this name
Not knowing more than 2 persons are listening

Her parents are really shocked that she took it seriously and are silently crying because they didn't know how much she was lonely.She continued and said:tumhara naam hoga(your name will be)...

After that she went to sleep,if she had looked back she would have seen her parents crying and smiling at the same time.As for her Angel it looked as if it was smiling(sparkling)more.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue was superb dear
Riya nd her parents conversation was lovely
she wants a sister
with whom she can share everything
wat happens next
eagerly waiting to read
please continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for liking this prologue but the original is posted with character sketch in the ff
it accidently got posted twice sorry about that
i will continue in the original page sorry again

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