MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 65

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grrr me asking u n pie k india k konsa city mein live kart hoo tera package k barey mein nahi
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my mother n father maternal realtive lived in india
mom k all maternal relative dad k thod say so ask it
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bola toh... bilaspur chhattisgarh 😡
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bola toh... bilaspur chhattisgarh 😡


ab mujko thodi pata yeh abbreviation hai city ka huh
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Originally posted by: fariya20


ab mujko thodi pata yeh abbreviation hai city ka huh


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part 12


dagdu say in slow voice i will come tomorrow than i will decided u are living hear or not


geet sit on chair with tension now how she will go another place ye acha tha baba ke doc ke pass ab kya karenge ...tear start to flow from her eyes handa feel someone cut his heart his own child suffer of his do


geet cant sleep full night with red eyes she just went to maan office her first day in office and she get massage in recption that she have to went to file room and arrange all file till lunch than come in maan cabin


like lifless body she just went to that room maan watch her from his cabin thru glass his hand touch glass like touch her geet also feel touch on her ...she look here and there and went to room


maan lost in thought ye aise ku hai after that day she have to become happy na than why ...


geet till lunch just finish her work and went to maan cabin when she knock on door maan just hold his breath than he mumer why she have so much effect on me why , next second he just put mask of cold face and say in cold voice come in his back to her because he don't want to show his face


maan - yes






geet - i finish my morning job


maan - hu wait outside of cabin i will call u when i need get it


geet - yes sir and she went from there in evening as usual geet start to walk to her house she stop for while in garden and sit on bench she is so lost in thought that she don't get that someone is behind her


after some time rain start but geet sit there without any emotions her blank face



just kill someone who watching her like this he jsut want to grab her and took away from world but destiny snatch that right from him just than geet eyes fall on him and both eyes meet each other and like start to talk each other both feel like their soul come out from thier body and hug each other they don't think twice



soul of maan - geet fhir barish

red hu come on geet soul cheek and mummer app na chedo mat hume aise (don't tease me like this )


soul of maan sachi kya and both agin hug each other and lost in past


past

geet look to him with surprise than it struk him so sorry wo meri zuti tumko kaise before he say anything she just grab kulfi and satrt to suck kulfi and poor maan just mummer wais mat karo kuch kuch hota hai ...geet make confused face and ask means


maan - kuch nahi chalo and he just drop her near her house




and there start maaneet together nes they just took chance to meet each other one day maan say her can she come with him to Khopali


and now geet become best to make excused in house




and both just went to khopali in early morning


maaneet just sit in train in 5 am both reach thier near 8 and geet just lost in greenery she just playing with flower , butterfly she is so happy and that happiness coming on her face she is so happy and nature also want her to make her more happy and there start havy rain she jsut scared when it make sound and hug maan tightly maan who all lost in her beuty that hug oh he just lost in her her wet look adding beauty in her he just try to touch her face but control himself and say its ok geet its ok


geet feel shy to look him she just went away to control her heart after some time she feel so different she hug him with wet cloth and maan come as rescues


ku dar gayi kya a sk maan


geet give him confused look


barish se dar gayi na and she make O shape mouth and mummer kya app bhi




maan - nahi dari na to nachana ku band kiya


geet just make face and say hum nahi dar rahe samje app and she just run to play and dance and maan success in his mission he want to she come out from her awkwardness


she just start to sing song it is very beautiful song and voice also



Maula Ishq hai Khudaa, Duhai Deti hai juba,

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke
Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke

Dive lakho mannamadhe lagale lagale
Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke



it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word

there are more than lakh lights in heart

it is silky moist everywhere

Maula Ishq hai Khudaa, Duhai Deti hai juba






geet taking so sweet step with song that song just saying about them geet lsot in rain and maan lost in geet he feel like he want to touch her hug her and lost in this nature it is so beautiful





Rang He saare tuzhe, ful mi kowale

Konti jaadu bholi zhali re kale,

Befikar mann he zhale, bhaan premache aale

Baware sparsh saare nave nave

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke - 2



this all color of yours ,and I am little bud

my mind become carefree from all when i get feeling of love

this new touch so new new

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word




she saying her heart in song she feel like free bird just than a duppata fall from her shoulder and maan froze in his place he first time watch her and that to wet ... he mummer aj apunka murder hone wala hai kya







Won't you stay with me...Won't you be with me

No matter where I go..You are the one

Oh I Love you..baby I love you..






Jhelate halake halake pawasachya sari,

Aathaun ka tula re zhale mi bawri - 2

Befikar mann he zhale, bhaan premache aale

Sofe hoil sare tuzhya save

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke





i catch slowly rain drop

when i remind you I become mad

my mind become carefree from all when i get feeling of love

it become all easy with you

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word



just than geet turn and now her back to maan side and maan eyes pop out like boll geet dress chain start to open and poor maan so blank he dont know how to react
but he have to react fast or else that dress he just run to her and took her in hug and turn her


geet shutter with sudden hug she look to him with shock and maan hand went to near her chain and she get that her dres ditch her she just closed her eyes both hot breath just failing on each other face near their lips


maan hand shake for second he slowly closed that in that process his finger touch her back she clutch his shirt more tightly and press herself more into him but that is wrong move her lips just touch near his M shape lips and both moan maaan geeet


precap look down post ( read on your own risk because after reading that you could not get your sleep 😆😆😆😆)




Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Eid mubarak to all




precap of time pass

geet come near maan and say

hum jabhi apke pass aate hai humara hrudye bahot
jor se dhadkne lagta hai aur humare dimmag main
kuch ajeeb si lehare utani lagti hai jo hamare hrudaye
ki spandane aur bhi badana lagte hai
ye hrudye ye hamare naina sirf apka hi mookh
dekhana chahate hai

(whenever i come closed to u my heart start to make sound
and so many wave start to come inmy mind which make heart beat more fast my heart and my eyes just want to saw
your face )




adi vicky - kya bola usne

maan boli kuch hil raha hai kuch khada ho raha hai
( she say somthing is shaking and something is standing )



adi and vicky ask in high voice kya ...and gap him
like fool all ahem ahem thought come in their mind


maan reach to adi room
maan - adi apunko wo kuch sikhana hai



adi gulp hard kya
maan just show image of titanic ( KISS)



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next part in next week




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Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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love it yara i love it
poor geet face this much sh e become lifeless
maan also felt her sadness want to hug her but did not do y what happen in past the are seprate
feelig very bad
so emotianl when geet sat in bench n maan saw her from far it was like i cant express there is pain regert hurt n bebasi not console his love not go near ir love

past just aweome
geet dancing in rain
maan rescue geet to embress her n love his this act
love u big wala hug for update

me think i am actual came first so party time
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update mahi geet is worried abt house
maan gave her wrk so dat he can stay away 4m geet as she is still affectng him 😃
maan saw geet's blank face nd wrried wt happd wit her 😕
their past was so beautiful
maaneet went out dat too geet made bahana 😆
Maaneet hugd 😳 nd maan found way too bring geet 4m ackward situation 😉
Precap is awesm mahi waitng 4 d update
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prcap pura kisko samje main aa gaya

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