AnSh Mini SS: HumSafar Thread #2 Completed - Page 14

Originally posted by: login97

so sorry i still haven't unres'd my comment... i got really unwell, couldn't get off my bed... school bhi nahi gayi do din se... lekin in the next 24 hours for sure, i will unres 😊

sorry by the way this is preeti... my cousin had logged in from her account that she just made two days ago ... lol didn't realise i was still logged into her account... by the way she loved this ss too, mere saath parha tha us ne, lekin her parents are a little but strict, they don't want her to watch serials and read these stories... for her, its just study study study all day... to mere ghar aa kar usne account banaya, warna mere uncle ko pata chal jata lol

but yah i will unres soon 😊

Ok Preeti

Unres when you are feeling better

Get well soon and please do take care

Thread 2

Kuch din I too a break from IF and you break a record

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

oops I am sorry I forgot to unres my comment.
the last part i felt was a bit rushed.

it is an amazing story I really liked the complex characters and the emotions described.

nice work chahat but its definitely not your best sorry but tats just my opinion.

do.write a new ff soon

Thank you for the comment

Originally posted by: Chahanya

She began calling him Shiv when they shared thier pain Ye toh bas she was being strict with her naughty hubby so she called him Mr. Shekhar

Inke baby boy ka name Shivan hai not Shivam

Yeah fatema wanted me to mention that he was impotent but then I twisted with a preggo Ashima's accident so then I thought to bring in a twist where Shiv will reveal that he lied

It takes a man to tell the truth about him being impotent I think it takes more than a man to lie about it when he can father a child

Yeah did not go my usual SR way but jitna tha utna kafi tha

Thank you for the long comment

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Thank you for unressing

Haw naughty baby sneaking into mamma papa room in their absence and taking their phone

If they will come to know they will say I spoiled their good gal

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Sumi and Irawati both were widows in this story

Her hubby Bhairon had died long time back

In this story she was childless So HE was not her son

I mentioned a little something na that she an Irawati went on a foreign trip

Yeah during the round n round shadi she was not mentioned ; Actually she was on a national tour for her NGO

(Just like BV ppl don;t show us things and then one fine day the characters speak about them as memories