|| KriYaansh OneShot || Moment of Realization || 5/10/14 ||

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Unres

I LOVVVEEEDDD This OneShot!🤗

Thank you so much🤗❤️

You described Kriya's pov too perfectly.

It was natural.

And the best thing was..

It was very easy to picturise whatever you mentioned becoz of the way you wrote every minute details.

That car struck thing and the way they were behaving.

The water thing and how he noticed and asked her with concern.

I loved the moment where he tugged her hand to his heart..

and also when he pushed her off the car to save her..

That write up made me so emotional </3 :(

But good..*sigh* it was a dream.

You wrote it so perfectly.

'I can't lose you' meant alot.

It was emotional , perfect and above all it was so damn natural.

LOVED IT! :* 🤗

Edited by Snigs. - 11 years ago

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Di you just scared me...
Damn that dream..
I couldnt even imagine that..
But awww all thanx to that dream..
It made Kriya and Reyansh KriYansh..
Awesome One Shot..
Loved it..

Love Rupanshi ^_^

Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 11 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome...loved it

seriously mare thinking of loosing some1 spl cn change Ur whole lyf I think so

I love da concept

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Its seriously beautifull Deeth 😳 Thanx alot for this Its much needed now love it u r an awesome writer 👏 u proved it again love it ❤️ Thank u so much ek dream ne dono ko mila dia Wow awesome Welll done

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

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Posted: 11 years ago

deetha dii supeerbbb ome
i sooo loveddd hiss.. haye fear of loosing someone..
but uh portrayed so well...

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sorry was late unres...

anyways..i just loved this OS dee..it was beautiful indeed..

i loved this arrange marriage thing...and everything was just beautiful...

their awkwardness..less talking...everything...

i loved when he holded her hand and slept.. that was adorable.. ^_^

that dream moment gave me a mini heartattack..lol...

but glad it was only a dream...

and a cute hug in the made..marked a picture perfect ending to this... lovelyyy OS dee :))

Edited by Effacious - 11 years ago

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

res
unres
awesum os di...
You r still the best writer...
Tou aap pls bar-bar ye matt kaha karo ki aap bure writer ho...
Pls di...
Or di pls sweet play update kar do...

Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago