Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 80

res...
unres...
m first... yaay...
awesome update from humairas pov...
ayaan n humaira were not together anymore but she could nva forget him...
the love was still there deep down in their hearts...
wel i couldnt be happier... as it gave a relief to me... atleast two blockades fr AsYa being together hv been removed... warna ppl were thinking of making asad n humaira & zoya n ayaan the couples...
shoo... bala talli...
but it was a cute way of writing up ayaan n humairas engagement...
really missing asya here...it has been so long... hope to see thm in nxt one...
plz continue soon

Mine
Unres

Asad nai tha isme in lst one too..
Nd now I m luking frwrd for next one...
Updt was gud.. Filmy tha.. But it was Nc..
Loved it..

Res 😊

Humeira's revisit with the story as she knows it. Really well written, Noe! 👍🏼 Enjoyed reading it. All of it. She has always been a mystery. Even in the show they couldn't decide what she was, it was a poor sketch and a character that was used to fit others stories not someone who stood on her own. She was lost in the milieu of characters who had a stronger story. Nice to see her version of the events. It was like reading the FF all over again, just from a different POV. It must have been tough to write this part, I bet, It's like inverting something we recognize really well to see the other side that we haven't seen yet.

So finally Ayaan managed to convince her, it was hard work, Ayaan being Ayaan. 😆 They are an unlikely couple in all sorts of ways and yet they do have certain things in common that makes them tick. This unpredictability that they had, the separation, they went through the tough times and I think this is what makes them stronger. Thrown in with their families in Bhopal, they have been through the uncertainties which makes them surer than ever. Ayaan's relation with Zoe and then his family, I like how Humeira see's Ayan like he is in that environment. And Ayan get's to see Humeira at her home. They have not changed but they have seen another part of each other which would have been possible only in Bhopal, away from Delhi. Their two diametrically different parts of themselves and their relations. I really liked this part a lot. It completes a lot of things, in many ways.

I was never too impressed with the couple in the show or in the book. You have made them better than both. And I would like to say distinct to this story.

Yes last two parts have been a bit filmy towards the end, 😉 but that is what works for this couple, they like being swept away from it all. It was really fun to read about their share of experiences. It makes this story more complete than ever.

Now looking forward to reading the next parts eagerly, knowing we are finally going to have our favorite couple back in action 😊

Nice update. Waiting eagerly for next update. Missing Asya. So update soon.

Res

Awesome chapter

Super cool n a very long part too. Liked to read it. But frankly missing asad n zoya.. Plz now next part with them n soon too.

Nice update